Dress up Boss

I found a problem, that is, the relationship between the protagonist and the two women was not sufficiently foreshadowed and seemed a bit sloppy (abrupt). It would have been better if more description was given before the protagonist fulfilled the woman, which would have made the characters and the plot more fleshed out. However, it is a test of writing to write well. Many authors will have a point that turns into a big poisonous point if they are not handled well. As a result, I lost a large number of readers (I have done this kind of thing before when I was writing a book. To put it bluntly, I am still not rich enough in real feelings and experience) It seems good to write less in this way, at least there will be no poisonous points. In terms of characters, there is plenty of room for profiling to flesh out the characters... In addition, this picture is given to the author

If you can't write about feelings, then don't write about feelings, okay? I feel so uncomfortable when you write like this.

Um, I can't understand the tricks of pig's feet, and a performance that only uses props is worth using my future to accept a waste spirit? Can't you get one to increase mana? Not better than that grass?

And How to say that I think your use of the power in martial arts is too much of a waste of this imagination. There is no need. You can use the acting emperor system to walk around the world as a thief, a thief, a handsome thief, and a thief. However, you have always appeared in the sect and are not martial arts in the sect. It feels too naive. Do you really think there is no traitor?

This sect doesn't look like a sect, but seems to be raising poisonous insects. They have been killing each other all the time...

Either smile, or not smile, half-smiling all day long, face cramps?

Anyway, props can be used instead of transmutation ability. Although props are difficult to find, it is not very convenient to use transmogrification for some and props for others to save spiritual power

It's a pity that this book is not popular! The protagonist is well portrayed (the supporting characters are also well portrayed, especially the spoiled little girl who fits the character very well, especially Chapter 23, which stirs up the fire and then the protagonist's handling is very good 👍). The main thing is that it is very normal compared to other online protagonists, too normal, and not a licker at all It can be said that there are no errors in logic and thinking when reading this book (at least I didn't see it)

What is the expression of half-smiling but not smiling? Curious. 🤔. Is that so? 😏

So does the role of the protagonist have to be transformed? Obviously you can buy clothes to wear

Are you a ladies' man? Do you have stockings?

There is some forest chicken shit inside, it might as well be called Lingshi, or Lingyu, zero chicken shit really doesn't sound very good.

Yes, the current plot is reasonable and the links are compact. It is a good seedling. Come on!