There Are Reminders for My Cultivation of Immortality

It's well written. I like protagonists who have thoughts, goals and plans, rather than those losers who are doomed without the golden finger. After all, waste is waste, and giving him a gold finger will still be waste. I will start voting for you tomorrow, come on

It's like reading a diary, boring

Seeing only 4 words now, it's getting better!

After reading this, I can finally admit that this is an above-average book. Why is this so? Because of the title 😢, I thought it was a novice. In fact, this is not the case. The logic, system, and writing style of this book are pretty good. The most valuable thing is that the author is very patient, but the writing is quite concise and not watery! 👍 It is worth recommending to other book friends. The author should keep it up, don't be superficial, don't be stupid.

It feels a bit strange. It always feels like the protagonist is just a supporting role and doesn't have a strong sense of presence.

Why is Yuluo Honey necessary to break through the third level of Qi Refining to the fourth level? Can't geniuses be trained directly? Can a person with mediocre qualifications just take a pill and achieve a breakthrough? If you write it in the beginning, then it won't be fun if you have to bring it up later. If everyone wants to use this kind of honey to achieve a breakthrough, then this cultivation of immortality is too nonsense. After all, Chinese medicine emphasizes dialectical treatment. I hope the author will change it, and change the function of similar breakthrough necessities to auxiliary. If there are some, you can break through safely, but if you don't, you can break through forcefully.

I haven't finished the first chapter yet. If I replace the low-level monsters with poisons and insects; replace the third level of Qi training with Qi training; change the earth escape and water cloud skills into earth escape and mist combination, then maybe I can still read it. Your material library is at least 15 years old and is completely tasteless. Personally, I think the most important thing about Xianxia is the aesthetic fit, simple wording, profound artistic conception, and the connection of spirit and spirit, which conforms to the outline of the ideal "Xianxia". In the final analysis, it is a question of aesthetics and wording. It is quite clear which one is more acceptable, the one who uses flying, water polo, rock falling, and wind blade skills, or the one who travels in and out of the underworld, summons wind and rain, whips mountains and rocks, and returns wind and fire. The one who rides the sword as a skateboarder or the soul wields the sword and turns into a flying rainbow is more interesting. It's a matter of opinion. But the problem is that if a fairy novel cannot even construct the most basic "inner flavor", it is probably not up to standard. In addition, I can't say that the upgrade flow is not good, but don't be so straightforward. The first, second and third floors, the early, middle and late stages, the small perfection and the great perfection, half a step, etc. Are really hard enough to swallow. To be honest, any made-up would be better than this. The important thing about the upgrade flow is never the game-style classification, the key is the description of the upgrade. Properly depicted, even if there is only one realm of Qi training, the pleasure of upgrading can still be written. I hope it can be of some help to the author. I'm also bored.

I have gone through untold hardships, overcame many difficulties, and devoted myself to practicing Taoism for more than 30 years. Finally, I glimpsed the way of heaven and formed the golden elixir! Entering the coveted golden elixir avenue! Why did you destroy my Dantian and shatter my Golden Dan! "Pah! The little nurse next to me patted me and said, "Stop talking so much! Isn't it just a gallstone? As for that? In the obstetrics and gynecology department on the second floor, there is a girl with extraordinary beauty who became a Nascent Soul at the age of 16! Why don't you let us take it as usual? So there are several distraction periods in the mental hospital next door, there is an out-of-body state in the underground morgue, and there are two integration periods in the hotel opposite. No, there is a new Mahayana master on the second floor who has just survived the thunder tribulation.

Research a virus to exterminate bees. This way no one can break through. After a few years, when people in other realms have died of old age, only mortals will be left in the world. Then develop the industrial revolution and enter the technological era.

I was recommended by Wuwaijiangshan

Well, the chapter table of contents is toxic. A technique for cultivating immortals would be named something like Buffalo Kung Fu? The mortal martial arts in the real world all have names like Baji, Tai Chi, Wulang Bagua Stick, etc. I really don't understand what you call mortal flow.

After reading four or five chapters, on average, someone has a flash of strange color in each chapter Ah, this makes my scalp tingle There is a flash of strange color in the eyes... In my day, just once or twice, the protagonist has a strange color in his eyes, the villain has a strange color in his eyes, and the actor has a flash of strange color in his eyes every day. Do you have glaucoma or cataracts?

There are so many typos, and they are suppressed forcefully. I have to complete a level before breaking through. This is simply an inexplicable and crazy behavior. Perfectionism is not allowed. I talk about perfecting it, what is the benefit, but in the end I can't beat others at the same level. In the end, I spend a lot of time and energy and become even more rubbish.

It's a vulgar cliché. As soon as The Fiancée came out, I knew I couldn't read this book. It's 2020, can't it be simpler? If she is a woman, she has a relationship with the protagonist; if she is a man, she hates the protagonist!

There should be more updates at the beginning to build up popularity, and of course, the quality should also be ensured. In this case, more people will collect them, and then keep some archives. When they are released, there will be one or two waves, and more than ten or 20 chapters will be updated. There must be a good grasp of the measurement. Come on, author

Poisonous! Why are there still people writing such novels? Cultivation depends on time. There are so many intrigues and intrigues just after practicing Qi. I really saw a ghost. I feel that it is not people who are cultivating immortals, but demons from hell who are cultivating immortals.

I really don't understand these rumors of annulment. As a time traveler, you don't like that woman. How can you get so many inner dramas when people come to your door to annul an engagement? Isn't it nice to get together and relax easily? Do you have to make enemies? Think about it from another perspective, if you fall in love with someone else and they don't agree to break off the engagement, what should you do? Will you give up the one you love to fulfill your engagement?

The rest of this novel is okay, except that the spirit stone system has collapsed. One level of foundation building requires millions and tens of millions of spirit stones to advance. If you reach the golden elixir, it won't be hundreds of millions or billions, let alone the Nascent Soul stage. It will cost at least trillions. How big does the storage bag need to be to hold so many spirit stones?

A very good book about cultivating immortals, Hao Yu Zhen Xian, it is worth reading and you won't regret it.

I was originally attracted by the prompt system in the title of the book. It's almost 100 chapters and I haven't seen a few prompts. A useless person cultivates immortality.

Luo Liba Suo has many bloody tricks.

The new map doesn't look good, and I don't want to join a sect. There are gold elixirs all over the place, there are as many as dogs, and the protagonist is not even a foundation builder. He is forced to run around all day long by the aftermath of other people's fights. This is not what I want to see 🙂

The so-called mortal flow is to give someone a golden finger and then crazily suppress the protagonist. Others can rise faster than the protagonist who uses tens, hundreds, or thousands of times the resources of ordinary people without using resources.

To be honest, this kind of direct taking away is really disgusting. The protagonist's pet is already in a violent state, and he directly releases it. No matter what happens in the end, this is enough to make people disgusted. Taking it away later is even more disgusting. I read it on Xiaomi Reader before, so don't say that I am a free prostitute and come to the book review area to say that I also paid for it.

I don't understand how such a beautiful book can be criticized by so many idiots,,, speechless

The writing is quite good, why did it stop updating?

Chapter 14 is out of touch. Why don't you go out to "experience" without reaching the bottleneck? Although some readers don't like farming, it's still a bad idea to go out and wander around like this.

Xuan Mu was written wrong, it should be Xuan Mu.

I think the author wrote it very well, especially the reversal of the breakup of the engagement at the beginning, which is really good.

I think the author wrote it very well, especially the reversal of the breakup of the engagement at the beginning, which is really good.