The Tycoon's Path in Hong Kong Cinema, Starting with Spirit Mediumship

It's a complete mess, like a tangled ball of yarn. I have to find the beginning of a novel myself; it's exhausting to read.

Can you write something normal? This is written like something a lunatic would write for a ghost to see!

I didn't understand it either. All I saw was that the main character was ugly, yet they kept emphasizing whether he was handsome or not. The author must be speechless.

I didn't even want to read the first chapter. At least the author's previous book was readable.

It's a complete mess. There's no main plot at all. Even if you're just piecing things together, you should at least have a main storyline. But this is just whatever comes to mind. It's completely unreadable. And there's so much unnecessary rambling. If you want to write about the supernatural, then write more about the themes instead of just writing whatever comes to mind.

The first person to seek the protagonist's psychic abilities, Mrs. Li, was initially described as the father, then in the next two sentences she became the father-in-law, and then it was described as "your mother is really awesome."

It looks tiring, so I gave up.

Forget about abandoning this book; go write "Sunset in Hong Kong" instead. This book has potential.

Keep it up! This novel is really engaging and very well written!

Now, it's a complete mess. At least introduce new characters or insert minor characters when a major event is about to conclude. This is such a chaotic jumble, it's utterly incoherent!