The Great Era Tribulation

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Book title: "The Immortal Tribulation of the Realm" Author:Ask you whether to return to the west Book review:... (Thoughts are in a mess) How should I put it... First of all, I would like to ask the author, have you carefully read the article you coded? Combine the context? At the beginning, I clicked on your homepage and saw that you were a contracted writer with a book of more than 600,000 words. I thought you participated in this activity just for fun... The author himself also said that the book he coded might actually be poisonous... As a result... Something happened when I was reading the work that I didn't understand... Maybe it was because I read too few books. There are a lot of confusing behaviors in the article. In the first chapter, Chen Gai was dreaming, right, and then when he woke up, the dream became reality. There was nothing that could be explained clearly, and he just followed the crowd... In the second chapter, Qin Zhao became a disciple, and Chen Gai asked questions. It shouldn't be the disciple who nodded, why Chen Gai? Is it so difficult to ask and answer one's own questions? Chapter 3: Didn't he remember those exercises? Why was he still able to teach the virtual book? ? ? Is my morality too low? Secondly, I would like to ask the author, have you written an outline for this book? I read this book in three days, and I saw changes in the text. Was it changed? 🌚And... I have a bit of trouble connecting the context, and I don't understand it very well. I still don't understand how Chen Gai, the master of Lingshan, became the master of Lingshan. Could it be because of that dream? Then Chapter 4 goes straight to the title, which is the title of the book... Forgive me Please forgive me... I don't understand clearly. If it were me, I might write this dream in more detail, and tell the master to tell Chen Gai that there will be a void in the future, and ask him to help a noble person survive this disaster, and then give him Lingshan as a gift from his master. The master's last wish is peace in the world. When Chen Gai took over Lingshan, he discovered some of the secrets of Lingshan, and then started practicing. Later, ferocious beasts broke out outside the mountain. , Chen Gai remembered his mentor's last wish and came out. With his help, the world soon became peaceful, and he became a well-known hero. After the peace, he returned to Lingshan, waiting for the destined person that the master said, and then... Emmmm (this is just my personal imagination) I think it is necessary for the author to think carefully, sort out his outline and small details, and hope you can achieve the results you want. Book reviewer:Li Ge Yi Fang

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Your protagonist's name always reminds me of Galen…