God-Killing Star Fire Shang

Thanks for the "lucky" review, I can't repay it, so I'll update it again!

Thanks to everyone who agreed and voted, we will continue with three updates today!

After reading a little bit, I can see that the author has incorporated a lot of elements. I feel like I'm in A Song of Ice and Fire. Well, the writing is pretty good. Keep up the good work ✊

I hope someone likes it, and I'm waiting for you to come and communicate 😁😁

Thanks to Jiuliling for your recommendation vote, I will give you the third update today! 😁😁

I feel that the author's military complex is quite deep, and the author's emotion can be seen between the lines. But the structure is a bit scattered, the beginning is too bland and has no outstanding points. Reduce irrelevant descriptions.

I like the author's setting and background very much, it is consistent with my taste, and the writing style is also smooth. The current recommendation is to spread the background (such as the power system) into dialogue or multiple places as much as possible. Unless it is something interesting, a long paragraph will make people feel cramming and boring. This was also the case when I first started writing. Then there is a very long preparation, which may dissuade many readers. Come on, author, welcome to visit us again!

Already collected, I can feel your dedication to the work, come on! In fact, the background can be placed in the prologue or wedge. It is easy to dissuade readers by explaining the background in a large space as soon as the first chapter begins.