Living in the Water World

We have seen that the survival system is also part of the God of Light... Overall, the setting and world view of this book are very interesting, and the description of the doomsday giant ship is also very sophisticated. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into this world view, which is indeed a highlight. Why the current results are not so ideal, I think, apart from luck, the main reason is that the character's personality has not been established. Seeing now, all we know about the protagonist is that he likes to eat honey-flavored steak (because of his sister). The protagonist has never even cried or laughed (scenes like "smile" don't count). He only blushed once when he saw sex toys when he was being treated for leukemia... The protagonist is like this, and the supporting characters are even worse. The younger sister doesn't know what she is doing all day long, and Lindy, the younger sister, and the old man don't know what they are doing either. After hundreds of chapters, these people are still almost strangers to the reader. Look, when I was in Sihanoukville, when the doctor treated leukemia, bought anti-radiation salts, special patient families, radiation testing... These details are so wonderfully written and well thought out! If the author could put half the effort into creating the characters (emotional expression creates the characters), he would definitely be able to make up for the shortcomings of this book. In short, plot and characters are mutually reinforcing and interdependent. If the character imagined by the author does not show his character to the readers, then some things will be very abrupt in the eyes of the readers. For example, when I joined the Guangming Cult in Westport, I now know that it was the attraction of the godhead (how strong this attraction is, and how the protagonist feels has not yet been expressed). But at the time, it seemed as if the protagonist tossed a coin, adding heads and tails but not adding them as randomly. Even if you add some descriptive language - "Li Xiao doesn't know why he wants to join the Guangming Cult. But the idea just appeared, as natural as eating and drinking, just like the flame is destined to rise, and the fruit will fall to the ground when it is ripe..." The effect of this description will be different. The world view and power system of this book still have something to offer, and the plot design is also very realistic and great. In terms of the world view and plot design of this book alone, it is worthy of a Glory star book. In short, I wish the author will continue to improve~

The previous content on the ship was pretty good, but I encountered a very strange place. Because everyone was looking at how you survived on the boat, they subconsciously thought that it was based on this boat. Continuous development has resulted in the giant egg, religion, and research institute. The progress is obviously a bit fast, so we can guess what they are doing. But all the details are skipped. It was pretty good when we got to the sea, but the style suddenly changed, but I couldn't get used to it. Like a lot of Xiuzhen novels, I think what attracted me to You is that you become stronger on the boat, and gradually become your own boat to explore the world.

The story about the giant ship was pretty good at the beginning, but why did it turn into fantasy later on? The readers at the beginning were basically attracted by the theme of survival in the apocalypse. Your sudden change to fantasy is really incomprehensible. The readers who wrote this at the beginning did not like to read it. The sudden change to fantasy and immortality was not very popular because of the short length and abrupt transition. If you haven't won over readers from both ends, who will you write your subsequent articles for?

Since joining the sect, this book has been scrapped. That's it. Goodbye.

Isn't it good to write about survival in the apocalypse? It's totally unappetizing to add so many weird things. Goodbye.

In fact, Doomsday Ship can be written as a longer story, which is quite interesting. After leaving it, it fell into the cliche One Piece and Hunter routines. I hope you can stay true to your original intention and write a novel work, rather than a hodgepodge of short stories pieced together. Come on.

1. In a world where nutrient solution can be made, water filtration equipment cannot be made? 2. If the welfare of children's nutrient solution can be guaranteed, why can't they ensure that they go to school? It doesn't need to be advanced, just basic literacy is enough. Can this ensure labor efficiency and staff replenishment?

The name is Gou Zai Water World, I think it should be renamed Mang Zai Water World!

I think the giant ship content is the best so far.

It's a pity. The post-apocalyptic story about the giant ship is great, but it's a pity that it suddenly turns into a fantasy style

It feels like the author basically has no experience in life at sea, so he forced himself to write about the doomsday ark theme. The basic ship model is wrong. Your ship has three levels above and below the water. This is really crazy. There is no such thing as ship terminology. Just one misconception about sea fishing is enough. The author probably has only seen cruise ships that run along fixed routes. Then we came to the conclusion that fishing is not easy with big boats. This made me laugh. Are there no fishing grounds and fish schools on the route? Real offshore fishing boats follow schools of fish. The difficulty of fishing is much lower than that of the farmhouse fish pond. The fish is caught in seconds after setting the hook. Not to mention trawling. After reading it for a long time, I couldn't tell at all that the ship in the book was an ark floating on the sea to make a living. It felt like a destroyer that lacked everything and couldn't survive. To write about the Ark of Doom, you might as well watch "Waterworld" or Jules Verne's "Machine Island". Directly applying the setting of the doomsday lone ship, please, the core of it is not life, it is a battleship with a mission, and there are no civilians on board.

The front is fine, but the back is too cerebral.

Let me ask you weakly, are you suppressing your IQ or indirectly forgetting? After reading Chapter 10, I actually wanted to give up. Even if you did it for a foreshadowing, I can't stand it anymore! Why that? Regarding the dome issue, when you log into the abandoned ship with the dome, the bosses on your ship will know not to take it back if there is a problem! You also wrote that you only started it because it was expensive to log in to the ship. I just can't understand that by the time you abandoned the ship, none of the big guys doubted the institute! I wonder, just writing about missing people, are the big guys also missing, or are they suppressed by the halo of pig's feet? They must forget this very important thing! Say important things three times, research institute, research institute, research institute, research institute blindly, what your guide, Mr. Chen, already knows, the big guys have forgotten! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Overall, I can't stand it anymore! ! ! ! !

The subject matter is good, but it's a pity that Goldfinger is not my cup of tea. It would be better to have a synthesis system like Raft Survival, so that you can have an artificial fleet or mobile island.

I would like to make a suggestion. I feel that the author should not write in the direction of fantasy. You can write about technology. Develop genetic medicines, build giant ships to explore the deep sea, and develop underwater cities. If you write well in this area, it should be popular. Nowadays, there are too many fantasy novels and I am tired of reading. If you have no inspiration, you can play the game Deep Sea Trek to find inspiration. There are many technologies in it that you can definitely copy. The boat in front is very beautiful, but it is boring to abandon it when you get to that fishing boat.

It was good at first, but then it changed. It changed from science fiction to fantasy. It was a bit messy and unsystematic.

Can't you eat fish? What the hell is a lack of food? Lack of vegetables and fruits is the right thing

It's not a cool article. Readers are looking for abuse when they're full.

After I saw the ship uploaded again, I didn't want to read it anymore, especially the constant description of the captain's daughter. Her various behaviors made me disgusted. However, this may be the main character or the heroine, so I was persuaded to quit. It looked really good before escaping, but the sudden reversal was a bit big.

A huge ship with ten thousand people is really huge. .

The beginning gave me the feeling of Water World. After all, I liked it. But when I got to Hancock, I couldn't stand it anymore.

The writing is wonderful, a bit like Cruise. Now I am particularly curious whether all the gods in this worldview are evil gods, and whether the system is also a kind of god, or does the system represent a kind of world consciousness? Looking forward to the follow-up

I don't understand why I started to change the map since the battleships are set up so well and the early preparations are so good. It's obvious that many of this map has not been explored.

There is a problem with this giant ship setting. We can build giant ships. Why not build steel platforms? That way more people can survive. Population is indispensable for the survival and development of the ethnic group. How can ten thousand people survive on one ship? Rulers with a little bit of brains will form a fleet instead of one ship.

I can't stand it anymore when I admit that I have a system. Goodbye.

I don't like this kind of system. The protagonist doesn't have to work hard or use his brain. Everything is given by the system. It's a free prostitution.

A giant egg was transported to the ship silently. It couldn't be silent. Even if tens of thousands of people turned the ship upside down, they should have found the egg. It was destroyed before it hatched.

Being stubborn to the extreme means being a coward. The protagonist is really cowardly and relies too much on the system. He has no idea and relies on collecting points from treasure boxes every day. It can be said that he will have to change a lot of areas. If I am not wrong, a lot of people will die in every place he goes to!

The basic settings are pretty stupid and there are a lot of bugs.

It's a pity that the author should have persevered, it got a little messy later on.