Rat Disaster

After reading too many alien beast-style novels about people traveling through time and people traveling through time with systems or martial arts, I decided to write a novel about alien beasts that is native, non-human, and has no system. Everyone is welcome to give advice.

It is the first time for a newcomer to write a novel, and there are many shortcomings. Please give me your comments or criticisms. As long as it does not involve personal attacks, I will never delete the post. Thank you all.

Skaven, yes, yes! There are still relatively few furries of this type, so come on.

Romance of mice and men is too deformed, don't force this kind of plot. Firstly, it's disgusting. Secondly, Ruth is originally written like a piece of sand. Just watch a video and become an idol directly. Later, you plan to have a relationship. Ruth is completely written as nt.

A family that loves each other, a monkey friend, a human girlfriend, and a human niece. What is this, a collection of poisonous points? In which chapter does the development of the rat clan begin? Is it similar to the introduction?

Ah, this daily guide is really cool

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How can I put it, it feels like a story book for children, not suitable for survival at the starting point, come on.

Brothers of the same period, the brothers of "Wanjie Movie Space" are here, let's vote, criticize and accept each other, let's work together (ง •̀_•́)งOli to

The large text reminds me of Luo Yijun's "Xixia Hotel", which not only contains the novelist's writing power and thinking, but also his thoughts on society. Come on, Dad!

This novel must have been written only by the Invincible Marshal Bi😏

I said, if you write about Britain, then write about Britain, and about Chinatown, write Dragon Street. You can't stand it at all.

At present, when I see Ruth, I feel like it is a failed plot. Don't force a love plot to keep it original. You don't have to have a female protagonist to read a novel.

As a bookworm for more than 10 years, I hate seeing such idiot-like protagonists with stereotyped storylines and fantasy flows that satisfy the author's humble vanity.