Rebirth of Return 2006

It wasn't a big problem at first, but it got too much later! 1. After I went to college, my writing style declined and all kinds of expressions flew around! 2. A reborn 33-year-old behaves and talks no differently or even worse than a normal 18-year-old! 3. I'm going to vomit if I engage in brotherly love! You, a 33-year-old, would have a bromance with an 18-year-old who doesn't understand anything and has absolutely no similar outlook on life? 4. Are you moved every day? So moved? To be honest, quite disappointed! Instead of improving, my writing is getting worse and worse!

What are you doing to the boss and the second child again? They vomited🤮

I would like to make a suggestion, if the author does not understand the broadcasting major, please change the major for the protagonist. It doesn't have to be that he and the heroine have the same major. It is also possible to study in different majors at the same school. The Broadcasting major of Communication University of China requires an art exam. Moreover, it is a national professional examination and only admits dozens of people every year. It doesn't mean that you can get in if you have good academic scores. Second, broadcasting majors need morning training every morning. So author, many of the details you wrote are actually incorrect. I would like to make a suggestion, if the author does not understand the broadcasting major, please change the major for the protagonist. It doesn't have to be that he and the heroine have the same major. It is also possible to study in different majors at the same school. The Broadcasting major of Communication University of China requires an art exam. Moreover, it is a national professional examination and only admits dozens of people every year. It doesn't mean that you can get in if you have good academic scores. Second, broadcasting majors need morning training every morning. So the author, the details you wrote about running in the morning are actually wrong.

The first part is well written, but in the second part the main character's head gets hot, and he is too naive to want to enter the entertainment industry. He still wants to be the boss directly. If he relies on creativity to write scripts and accumulates some experience and connections, that's okay. But if he wants to directly jump in and make money, you are overthinking it! If no one else has enough to share the cake, you will be asked to step in and make money? In those few years, not many people made money from their works. Their works were all for the purpose of making their artists famous, and then they relied on the artists to make announcements to make money. People like the protagonist, who has nothing but creativity, just want to eat up and become fat in one bite, and then go to sleep!

Come on, entertainment companies didn't have that much energy in 2000! Huayi also took off after going public. It's a bit embarrassing to miss the protagonist's wife. Isn't the daily routine ahead smooth? Why did you forcefully convert it to Shuangwen later?

The plot is written in a reasonable and reasonable way, and the author has a good business sense.

It was very bland. After reading dozens of chapters, I had no choice but to abandon the book after reading the table of contents again.

Overall it's not bad, keep up the good work(ง •̀_•́)ง

Personally, I think the book is well written, but I would like to make a few suggestions. I hope the pacing can be tighter, with the main emphasis on entertainment, and less irrelevant plots. It's pretty good to go from a web novel to a screenwriter in the entertainment industry, but I feel like the web novel can actually be written more slowly, not so fast, and describe more of the plot. I feel like I'm not very impressed with the heroine in terms of her emotional line. I hope the author's books will get better and better.

It was okay at first, but then when I went to college... My feeling changed...

The author's slow Tai Chi practice, and watching the scene where the protagonist is being raped, makes people want to laugh.

Let me ask a question, when will your book be on the shelves?

Author, do you dare to be like a madman and update a hundred chapters? Only updated this much🤓🤓

The last two words of your pen name are,,,, alas.

Why do you get bad grades? Just write cool articles when you write cool articles. You see that book with a reborn heroine has good grades, but the writing is like a licking dog. I want to get good grades but don't want to make readers happy. Who will read it?

After being reborn, I still write novels...

I will take the exam tomorrow and you will be on the shelf. Let's get excellent results together! (Asking for blessings)

Totally booked 48 fan points, actually NO.68! This is a bit miserable

In 2000, you had money but couldn't find an investment spot? Just talk about buying a house? Song copyright, TV series copyright, old movie copyright? Media platform! There are many things that can be invested in buying stocks. It is better to invest directly. It is not so easy to make money in the stock market to expand your influence. Only by having many partners can you survive

The first few chapters are okay but the later chapters are unreasonable.

Reborn and writing novels to make money is also extremely toxic

Dear book friends, I wish you all a healthy Dragon Boat Festival! ! !

Which type of pretentious and brainless dog licking does this book belong to?

If you see someone writing novels to make money, you will be poisoned to death.

When I first saw the name of the new chapter, I thought you were going to stop updating it.

Good guy, I have found spiritual sustenance!

Oh! ! ! ! He's actually a little kid!

Today is Lin Yun's birthday, happy birthday!

Gan, I went to participate in the high school independent enrollment today. I was lonely in the English test. I couldn't fill in the blanks. I just relied on vague ideas.

I'm 16 and I feel a little empty and I don't know why