The Warring States’ Greatest Hegemon

Some suggestions: Writing about the State of Wei during this period is indeed rare, and the subject matter is quite good… but author! You're writing a historical novel, not a fictional one! At the very least, you should respect the history of that time, right? There are many mistakes in the first few chapters: First!

King Hui of Wei was not exactly a foolish or incompetent ruler; after all, the rulers of the Warring States period were at least of average ability. He was simply ambitious and fond of military conquest, engaging in endless wars. However, Wei was situated in a strategically vulnerable location, and King Hui of Wei's actions were understandable in order to expand his territory.

Having read so many Warring States period novels, I think the only ones I can actually get through are "King Huai of Chu," "Emperor Zhao of the Warring States," and this one. The others just bombard me with difficult classical Chinese phrases, leaving me completely bewildered.

The name "Tianlang Army" is too modern, it's so awkward! It sounds like the Northern Army of the Jin Dynasty, the Wudang Flying Army of Shu Han, or even the Qi Martial Arts Army, which is closer to the Spring and Autumn and Warring States periods. This name...

When implementing reforms, the male protagonist should have simply stood behind the ministers and supported them. For a ruler to personally intervene would have offended too many people. He should have learned from Duke Xiao of Qin, and Emperors Wu and Jing of Han, who both had Zhu Fu Yan and Chao Cuo lead the charge when they reduced the power of the feudal lords. Historically, few reformers have had a good ending.

Given Wei's strength at the time, it shouldn't have been too difficult for them to destroy Qin. Qin hadn't implemented reforms and couldn't achieve anything significant. Wei, controlling the Guanzhong region, was poised to contend for the entire world.

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If an author were to abruptly stop updating without prior notice, it would likely be due to an unfortunate passing. Please don't grieve for the author. I only know that they continue creating in another world. If the author hasn't updated in two weeks, it proves that something must have happened to them. Deepest condolences.

Keep it up! I've been wanting to read a Warring States novel with a protagonist from the Wei Kingdom for ages. I'm voting for it every day, hoping it won't have a bad ending.

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