Conan: It's Too Difficult for Me to Follow the Boss

The book feels weird. It doesn't seem to have any poisonous spots, but there are poisonous spots everywhere.

Let me briefly comment on this book The author has been pretty good recently, so I just put this book away for a month. Today I have some free time to reflect on the pros and cons of this book (basically a complaint). If there are any inaccuracies, you are welcome to correct me. I am a reader who follows updates. Even if I keep reading, I often kill it within a week. But recently, I really can't keep up. The reason is the rhythm and focus. The pace of this book is slow and steady. If you are here to read the cp, the progress of the protagonist and Shiho made me think that I was reading the original work. If you are here to read the main plot, the full moon chapter is reached after about 300 chapters. The details of this small climax are blurred and no characters are established. If you are here to read the original work, then it is also a pity that the life and relationship of the male protagonist have not been revealed until now. Clearly, the initial impression can be described as turbid, and what is turbider than it is the position of the male protagonist, who is not black or red, a top killer cultivated by the organization, who relies on Gin as his father, and at the same time maintains an ambiguous distance from Akai Amuro. Does the protagonist trust the organization to the point that even if he is the second and fifth son, he will not shake the organization, or does he believe that the red side will not mess with Gin when he is running the organization? What happened with Amuro clearly illustrates the problem. Even if you care about feelings, it is a normal choice not to report these traitors for the sake of old friendship. If the author wanted to create a protagonist with a complicated heart, it would be even more shit. Let's not talk about the issue of perception for the moment. The protagonist faces the shrinking Shiho and escapes, escapes, escapes, well, emotional issues cannot be analyzed rationally, but you must at least have a plan. I don't think about your own future, the future of the organization, and Shiho's future. I think a shrunken Shiho will be more difficult to protect than Bourbon. In the hotel scene, the protagonist dared to talk in front of Gin. After the full moon chapter, I still didn't see the protagonist change. I no longer understand what kind of image the author wants to create, but in my heart, he is close to a clown. Shiho's behavioral logic has also fallen to the level of the movie version. The focus is a bigger issue. The author wants to talk about cp, the inside of the organization, the relationship between the protagonist, the red party and the detective team, and the protagonist's own story. However, it is not clear which one is more important. Each stage will be filled with multiple contents but there is no The key point in the real sense is that there are no continuous new points of stimulation. The Coroner with the same problem will collapse in the later period, not to mention that this book is weaker than the innovation and stimulation of the Coroner. After the chaos of the Full Moon Chapter, my interest completely fell into the exhaustion period. As for the advantages, the delicate writing style and detailed descriptions that women are good at are very comfortable to read (but the story is more important). There are many articles about Qidian Winery. This book is unique and can be said to be a good attempt.

I just want to know when Xiao Ai will discover her feelings, and when the male and female protagonists will feel that their relationship is confirmed.

Just be handsome and that's it

🌿, I like Kuroki so much

It's not easy! It's been a while since I've seen a Conan fanfic with a female protagonist.

Seeing Haibara Ai shrinking, I always felt uncomfortable watching this episode. There is no change from the original work. The key protagonist is not known yet, and it is not explained properly. He just brushed it off. After shrinking, he went to Dr. Ali's house? Another rainy day? Haihara Ai has been decided as the protagonist. Can you pay attention to these details?

The author knows very well that the male and female protagonists cannot control the strength of their confessions to each other now, but procrastination will only drag the novel to death 🙄

Short and weak author. . . Not enough at all

I can't stand it. Conan can be found by anyone who is warm, and Haiyuan has already said that the protagonist is a member of the organization. From another perspective, the protagonist does not know Conan's true identity. And you, who likes children, can you stop mentioning it. It's okay to mention it a few times. From the beginning of selling candy to the current update, you I have mentioned it more than a dozen times. Some things just need to be said a few times. Besides, even a normal person can detect the abnormality of Conan. You act like the protagonist is a fool. Every time you write about Conan, you say a few words about liking children. What a joke. And what about Wen? After discovering Conan's identity, he is still a member of the organization. It's so funny. What the hell.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I looked at "Old Father" Gin, and then thought about the preview of Miyano Shiho as the heroine in the copy, a picture appeared in my mind: Shiho: "Say! Who are you going to save when Gin and I fall into the river at the same time?" Kuroki: "Gin!" Ai: "You have no girlfriend." Kuromu: "QAQ... Wait, wait, Gin, why did you hit me? I saved you!" Gin: "..."

Is the heroine Haiyuan? Then I probably want to save Mingmei. Maybe after watching too many protagonists, black and red, all save her, and even Infinite Stream has a role in it, I think why should I save her? She is already dead, so why bother pretending to be dead, let alone calling her pitiful, if it is because I am greedy for her sister If you are a girl, increase your favorability level just because your sister doesn't like the protagonist or has a thorn in your heart if you don't save her, so don't do it. You don't consider the risk of the protagonist saving her at all, so let the dead rest in peace (especially since the heroine is Haiyuan's, I already subconsciously feel that the protagonist's motives are impure)

I saw the latest, when will Kuroki Jin discover that Ai is Zhibao 😅

No wonder indigenous stuff isn't popular

Kuroki becomes silly and naive when he meets Xiao Ai 😃

I read a little bit, and the writing is very detailed, but there are too many private settings.

Haiyuan Ai is too worrying. I don't hate Haiyuan Ai, but I feel speechless that she dare not resist the organization. She is afraid of being killed. People will die sooner or later, and the sun will go out sooner or later. There is no need to be so afraid. I hope Haiyuan Ai can be useful. Don't be scared to death when you see the organization. So what if you hide it for the rest of your life? It's not just that you will die, even if you are discovered by the organization, you will die, so it's better to fight against fear.

Author, you must keep updating 😭

It's so beautiful. I haven't read such a piece of writing that appeals to my appetite in a long time.

Come on, write more emotional scenes and play with Xiao Ai more often.

Ahem Self-recommend "Conan: The Science Game of the Winery Prince" Click on the opening image to go directly. If you are interested, welcome to give critical comments after reading it.

I revisited the author's previous book and then stumbled upon this one. Cheers to the author.