Capture the Island 111

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I wanted to publish the book on QQ Reading. The initial publication site for this book was Chuangshi Chinese Network. I will work hard to save the manuscript in the past few days and go back to the starting point to publish the book. Thank you for the support of friends who are not robots on QQ Reading, PS, I don't know if anyone is reading it This book has been republished on Qidian The title of the book has not changed and it is still "Seizing the Island" Gushu

The writing is good, non-toxic, non-routine, and the setting is novel. I think the author also briefly wrote about other islands, probably for future maps, which should be the same as the title of the book says. There is nothing wrong with the logic, except that some punctuation errors make it uncomfortable to read. For example, double quotation marks are swallowed up when characters speak; some unnecessary nonsense can also be omitted. Overall, the book is quite good and worth reading.

When you write a book, if you write a lot of words, people will always read it, but there are a few things you absolutely shouldn't do. 1. Don't set up nc plots (such as forcibly reducing intelligence) 2. Don't set up cuckold/hat plots (this is typically feeding shit to readers) 3. Don't overdo the female supporting role and the heroine. You can use them to develop the plot, but you can't rely entirely on them, they must be balanced. Four. Don't make the protagonist too NPC, or saint/mother, and distinguish the priorities (for example, if someone wants to kill you, you still let him go, so that he can continue to find trouble with you in the future) Readers actually read books for fun and to relieve boredom. Why don't you read this disgustingly? No matter who reads it, so don't commit the second rule. For details, you can refer to Green Purple/Yang (this author is a literary youth and wants to imitate Xiao Longnu to improve the connotation of the work. You will know the result). The second is the fourth rule. You can't stand a bad protagonist. So, come on!

I feel like you are pretty good at this, but why are there so few people watching it? The thoughts about life at the beginning of the story that first attracted me, combined with the plane crash that followed, set a fatalistic tone for the entire article. The adventures that follow and the wars that will begin in the future are also very exciting. It's still a seedling, keep up the good work!

Bubbles, it's okay, I've also been an author. To be honest, if there are no recommendations in the new book issue and it can't be on the new book list, I can only follow Gu. It's like a real person who is slowly coming of age. It's too unfriendly to new authors.