The Naruto World Begins with the Sage Body

What I want to ask here is that Xia Tian is the protagonist's wife, and she had sex with her. She was choked and beaten until she vomited blood, but she didn't reveal any information about the protagonist. The protagonist doesn't fight back, joins the other party, and doesn't even heal him afterward, so what kind of punishment is there? It made me laugh. 1. It was Yinghuo who leaked the protagonist's location information. 2. Yinghuo and Xiaxia were originally lovers, and it was the protagonist who caused them to separate. 3. The reason for their separation was caused by the actions of the protagonist. Xia Tian was passive and even resisted. Then the question is, what is the punishment, for not managing your subordinates well? Is that because you don't manage your subordinates well and you ignore the woman you've already had a relationship with?

The overall quality of this book is pretty good, but its shortcomings are also obvious. The main thing is that the protagonist's behavior and settings are inconsistent. Contact the author to set up the protagonist at the beginning. In the plot, the protagonist's behavior after leaving Konoha is really confusing. There is no setting at all that ninjas who have experienced life and death and rise from the bottom should be wise and cautious. The protagonist feels like a newcomer who has just time-traveled, and he is a kind of upstart who has character flaws. He gains great power as soon as he time-travels, and becomes rampant when he succeeds. There is a serious lack of caution and caution that a wise man should have. The protagonist gives people the impression that he has become very arrogant and desperate since he gained the strength to rebel against Konoha. There are also serious problems in plot advancement. It all relies on the protagonist deliberately committing suicide, deliberately fighting to show off his strength, and then looking for trouble to advance the plot. Starting from the battle against Anko and the Gen members who defected and exposed their strength, until they didn't know how to hide, Zang met Kakuzu, and the battle with him attracted the attention of the Akatsuki organization. Deliberately spending more time to obtain stars, fishing for law enforcement caused civil strife in the Star Ninja Village, but his identity was exposed and he was robbed. Dao's affair with Xia Xiaxing made his lover jealous, betrayed the protagonist and attracted the Akatsuki organization. It's all about committing suicide to advance the plot. Also, he doesn't pay attention to confidentiality and reveals key plot points to plot characters at will. For example, he revealed the secret of the Samsara Eye to Nagato Konan who came to the door with the intention of persuading the protagonist to become a tool. For example, Orochimaru was tough, preventing him from approaching the Akatsuki organization for the purpose of the Samsara Eye, and guiding him to the correct research direction. For example, he speaks unabashedly and talks nonsense about the earth that the natives of the ninja world cannot understand. If you don't pay attention to confidentiality, reveal yourself or the secrets of the ninja world to people around you, etc... All of them reveal the protagonist's arrogance and suicidal behavior. The subsequent rebellion of the doppelgänger is even more speechless. As always, the protagonist seeks death to advance the plot.

The immortal body lacks chakra. What the hell, even the Uzumaki clan with some immortal body characteristics have too much chakra. Senju Hashirama and Naruto can both say chakra. Aren't you trying to force the protagonist down? Then don't give the protagonist too high a starting point at the beginning...

The evolution of the body really amazed me. I have read a lot of Naruto fanfics, and this part about body evolution is one of the more powerful theories among all the Naruto fanfics I have read. But the methods in the Star Ninja Village were too underhanded. So just abandon the book.

I've finished reading it, but I feel that the setting of Pig's Knuckle is inconsistent. The latest one is that I feel like I don't have enough time. But after leaving Konoha, I have been traveling and playing, and it's only been ten chapters that I started to slap myself in the face?

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They are almost at the sixth level. They took a mother and daughter away from the Grass Ninja Village and beat them for a long time. Look at their classes.

This is another protagonist who clearly uses his ultimate move to cover the whole screen in seconds, but insists on suppressing his strength and a bunch of noobs, shocking passers-by. After fighting for several chapters with six-level strength and a group of top jonins, you might as well not upgrade.

Typical open high and go low. The climax in the early stage was too much, and later on, there were all sorts of boos, weakening of the protagonist, and criticism of the protagonist. You can completely change your mind. You already have the strength, and the game world is not bad. Or it would be good to build a Ninja Village to benefit society. We can also change our thinking, for example, to promote the development of entertainment. Making movies or something, many Naruto fans have similar plots. The protagonist is a highly intelligent person like Orochimaru, and he can also engage in technology, such as steel suits, super soldier serum and so on. Reclamation is not possible, or the desert environment can be improved. Look, the protagonist is set to have a high IQ. How can any scientific and technological talent have time to do scientific research besides doing research and fighting with others? You can also write from the social contradictions of Naruto. The purpose of Naruto is that everyone wants to end the war and have world peace. The protagonist has such strong strength that he can conquer every ninja village bit by bit. Want to play? Right! It's always nonsensical, and each goal is not fun to play, right? You can explore the moon in the later stage. Now that you can land on the moon, it is not impossible to travel to outer space. For example, the protagonist discovers that in addition to the Naruto planet, this galaxy is adjacent to a larger planet. Go over and take a look, hey, isn't this the Pirate King! Personal opinion only.

Amazing start, rubbish follow-up, I regret not reading the comments first before reading the book.