I Just Want to Quietly Collect Merit

How can I put it, the sense of immersion is okay, but the feeling is average. I didn't say that I couldn't put it down after just reading a few articles, but it gradually got better and it was very appetizing. Wang has read very few fairy tale novels. I think this article is good. The argument and tone in the book are good. It feels more casual, but well-proportioned and does not deviate from the artistic conception. The only shortcoming is that some Internet language or memes make it easy to think about it while reading it. Maybe the author's original intention is to add some playfulness or jokes. Overall, it is a good entry into the circle.

I would like to give you a suggestion: if you want to write in an ancient style, don't use too many modern words. If you just want to be entertaining and relaxed, then make it more modern so that everyone can be more modern. It is best to add some funny elements. Otherwise, if it is 80% ancient style and less than 10% modern, it will feel weird.