The New Devil from Hogwarts

Start with 99 Duke and Hogwarts Duke. (Nothing else, just the first reaction)

Come on, come on

What a weak wizard. After reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist is gifted with extraordinary powers. At a young age, his magic and spells are comparable to those of an adult wizard. However, he was beaten horribly against a giant monster. With luck, he ended the battle with a killing curse. The protagonist was also seriously injured. I don't know if it's the protagonist who is weak, or the wizard himself who is so weak. It seems that I have never seen such a weak wizard among the fans.

I think the identity of the protagonist is wrong. You should say that he is a descendant of Gryffindor.

The protagonist is a descendant of Slytherin, and he also has a snake-like voice. Logically speaking, it is more in line with the setting of a descendant than Voldemort's hybrid. Shouldn't the Basilisk have the opportunity to help the protagonist? Not to mention that in the second year, he faced only a Horcrux and not himself? Shouldn't the protagonist have more control over the basilisk?

The Big Duke Virus travels through 99 worlds at the same time. ?

I personally think that the Ministry of Magic will definitely win if they go to war with Muggles. As mentioned at the beginning of Half-Blood Prince, the secretary under the British Prime Minister was replaced by someone from the Ministry of Magic. In order to protect the Prime Minister from being cast by Voldemort's people and Imperius Curse, it is not that wizards cannot control Muggles, but that dark wizards look down on Muggles, and white wizards actively alienate Muggles in order to stay hidden. As for why they stay hidden, they probably also look down on Muggles. Is the author going to read the first chapter of the Half-Blood Prince? Of course, if it has a bad impact on your thinking, you should just write it as you originally thought, and ignore me. After all, it's hard to find a decent HP fanfic.

It's really boring to follow the plot. It's hard to retain readers with such an opening chapter.

NB. Such a good book at the beginning is so eunuch.

After reading the beginning, what the author wrote is quite in line with my personal taste. The protagonist doesn't take up too much of a role. Some of the HP fics I read before do not mean that the writing style and conception are not good, but the cheating gives people a feeling that the protagonist is destined to be mediocre/wasted without the cheating - this is not to express the view that "the protagonist cannot cheat", after all, the protagonist should be a little different. (Looking forward to the secret of Slytherin's bloodline, hehe 😁) Come on, author! (づ ●─● )づ

Please look at the comparison in the speech

Very well written! ! ! ! ! I'm in love! ! ! ! I will keep chasing you! ! I hope the protagonist can save Sirius, Harry is so miserable

He ran away😡

With all due respect, I'm tired of watching this kind of opening that just follows the plot and has nothing new. The new book "The Black Alchemist" is quite innovative.