Walking the Battlefields of the Heavens

Boss, your plot is too simple.

Being able to travel at will is a pitfall, and the attached world is also a big pitfall.

The basic knife technique is 13 moves, not 6 moves. You are mistaken.

The author suggests revising it. The part about killing the water ghost at the beginning should be about a rainbow of momentum, not a rainbow of energy and blood. You should also have a sense of responsibility when writing a book.