The Grand Alliance of Heavens' Villains

Seriously, I'm speechless. They've given up entirely. After The Deer and the Cauldron ended, what a load of rubbish it was! You become a big shot in the future, and then people send people to fawn over you now? Holy crap, does that mean geniuses won't need to develop anymore? They can just have their future selves provide resources for their present selves.

When the emperor issued an imperial edict, all the other princes knelt to receive it, but the protagonist stood still, claiming it was his true feeling. Shouldn't one consider the context when saying something like that? Is the author trying to portray the protagonist as exceptional? Even though the protagonist is from the modern era, he should still follow the rules of that time. Of course, if the protagonist were invincible, then disregard everything I said. 😐😐

I finally give up. Are you writing about the heavens? Is what you wrote a time-travel story, The Deer and the Cauldron? The astronomical phenomena you wrote! You actually managed to create a world consciousness in The Deer and the Cauldron, a world with low martial arts, that even a high martial arts world might not have. He also wrote about a world of cultivation where even the chosen ones might not be as powerful as his chosen one (Wei Xiaobao).

Seeing that Wei Xiaobao has finally become a eunuch, I feel relieved.

People don't say Yue Buqun, as the head of a sect, lacks any sense of management skills? As the sect leader, he's passively slacking off when faced with leveling-up tasks—and this is supposed to be a ruthless person who castrated himself to practice martial arts, yet he's portrayed as a lazy bum.

It's rambling and drawn-out, with the first chapter full of disdain for other writers. You'd think it had some profound insights, but it turns out to be just another piece of junk, not even as good as what others have written.

🤓 Call me the Prophet, and sure enough, less than 600,000 became six eunuchs.

Let's discuss some of my thoughts on this book and the parts I found particularly problematic. First: You've transmigrated into the Imperial Clan Court, and you've already entered the Imperial Clan Court, knowing full well that its purpose is to cultivate powerful individuals. Why would you still hide your strength? Isn't that just plain stupid?

At first glance, it seemed novel, right? Yue Buqun got a system and even invited the protagonist to join the group, while the protagonist's soul transmigrated into the body of the Iron-Blooded Marquis Zhu Wushi. Then, the group's first mission was to go to *The Deer and the Cauldron*. Then I skipped straight to the published chapters, and honestly, it wasn't well-written.

Hey bro, what's going on? Since *The Deer and the Cauldron*, your imagination has been so good, why did you write so many chapters at the beginning? It made it hard to keep reading. If you keep writing like this, it'll be another *The Strongest Shopkeeper*. Keep it up!