My Name Is Naruto Uzumaki

I don't like the author's description of the third generation. The third generation is definitely an old hermaphrodite and an old politician. Even if he is doing it for the village, it is for his village. The author writes that he is selfless for the village, but sometimes a little weak and kind. It would be better not to write about Naruto who is anti-Konoha.

It is really problematic to say that you are copying Naruto. Hokage: False Naruto was the first fan fiction I read, and it was one of the earliest ones I read. It was about six or seven years ago. I loved it in my memory, but now I can't stand it anymore. Sure enough, does it have a memory bonus? The more I read it, the more I liked it before and I can't stand it anymore. Although I have forgotten a lot of the plot, the content is completely different from this one. It's just that they both rebelled against the village. Could it be that both Neji and Sasuke rebelled against the village? If this is plagiarism, then there is no originality.

In fact, the author's writing is impeccable in detail, but it is long. Like a running account, many words are repeated over and over again, such as: just like the original work, in the original work, etc., And Namikaze Naruto's ideals are repeated over and over again. You have already jumped out of the original frame, so don't repeat the original work too much, and in terms of details, save what you need and don't be too streamlined. I believe I am not the only one who will skip most of the sterile characterization dialogues. Online novels are either great or detailed, but they should not be repetitive if they are exciting, and they should not be boring if they are detailed. Just skip the detailed description of the shrimp soldiers and crab generals, and focus on the description of the protagonist and a few important characters. Otherwise, once a lot of things are accumulated, they will not match up and will collapse sooner or later.

There are over a hundred chapters, and the book reviews haven't even passed a hundred yet. Tsk, tsk, tsk, I've already agreed and I've ordered them all! Author, your writing style is very good. It is obvious that you wrote the original work, but it is still able to make people read. You set a goal in the early stage to defect in the Chunin Examination, which makes people have the motivation to pursue it. However, the same problem is that your plot is too slow. I wrote two chapters in one day. Today, I wrote the first scene of the Chunin Examination, where Naruto meets Kabuto. Well, after recalling the original work in my head, it seems that you are better at procrastination. I believe I'm not the only one to raise this issue. The plot is dragging. I remember you posted once before and mentioned the issue of the plot dragging him out, but it doesn't seem to have been resolved. You just said, if I don't correct the problem, then I will have no choice but to throw it away! Why do so many people watch pirated copies? You're too watery, I feel like it's not worth the money, uh... I guess so. Maybe you have your own ideas, but to use Guo Degang's words: It's not even worth it for the audience to spend 50 cents to buy a ticket for you. They feel that they are losing money, so why are you talking about your dream? It seems to be said like this, look at your book, it's a mess. But your writing style is very good. I believe if you simplify the plot, it will be a good book. If you are still like this, then it will only depend on your enthusiasm to persist, and you will not make any money! Again, I'm fully booked.

Naruto

Although I am not Madarabuki, I still want to clarify it for Madara. It was just Madara who wanted to have fun. What kind of finale did Rin Tomb show? What space distortion is is just a side description of the high attack power at this time, how can it block space. From such a long distance, if he lets go of Lan Dunguangya with both hands, only one leg will fly over? Life has been sublimated and we are no longer human. Why am I so happy to play with you?

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Let me share my thoughts and some of the poisonous points I saw 1: After traveling through time, it still looks like the original owner has not learned the clone technique 2: The protagonist actually had a hard time fighting Mizuki, who was defeated by the original owner. The original owner abandoned his studies, but the protagonist has been practicing hard 3: The protagonist has nine tails and three tails in his body, and it is outrageous to be suppressed by Itachi when the relationship between the two parties is very good. 4: The supporting characters on the protagonist's side are infinitely stronger. On the protagonist's side, in addition to Ningji who obtained the reincarnation eye in Naruzuo, Konan Itachi Kakuzu, and several supporting characters led by the protagonist Yakumo Karin. On the whole, except for Naruzu Neiji who is in an advantageous position relative to the five major countries, the rest of the high, middle and low schools are in a weak position, but they write a state of comprehensive suppression. 5: The combat power is very strange. Why does the author of "Naruto with Nine Tailed Golden Body" think he can beat six spots? In the original "Naruto with Nine Tails and Golden Body", Kake and Sasuke are still overwhelmed by six spots. Why do they think they can beat six spots?

In fact, I want to see how Naruto used the questions of the Uzumaki clan, the Senju clan, and the Uchiha clan to ask the Senju Hashirama why Konoha, which carries the benevolence and justice he carries, treats the three elder clans as almost extinct. For example, why did Konoha not rescue the Uzumaki Kingdom of the Offensive and Defense Alliance? Others have no position, but Naruto can ask for his mother. I was looking forward to Hashirama's answer.

The more I read, the more annoying I am. I keep repeating the same sentence over and over again, but I can't make it more concise.