Lord of Sky Island

Pig's feet should still be strong and have leadership skills. I feel that pig's feet's mentality is still stuck in the thinking of a small person. An island owner has not seen any of the abilities and mentality that he should have. If he always gets along with his summons like coworkers, the sense of substitution will become worse and worse.

Build a complaint building. The author is a newcomer and will have flaws in his writing skills and settings. I hope everyone can point out to the author what feels wrong in the article. Another: It is best to write chapters so that the author can make changes in time. Finally, thank you everyone for watching.

When I read Chapter 93, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The first battle was so unclear that I couldn't tell it was a battle at all. The character of the second protagonist was really useless.

Nothing but getting resources, arms, and rare items! The protagonist's personality is weird and hard to understand. It's stupid! Then the story is mediocre and has no climax. The resources obtained from the dungeon can be used to write a good story, but you ruined it.

To be honest, when the author writes this, it is simply inappropriate for the lord to engage in these competitions here. I don't even look at the author's own background to do this. Aren't you afraid of being killed? Since the author started writing these contents, I have never voted for recommendation. It is inexplicable to read, and it feels like I am writing about it again and again.

War-themed books are written as romance, but the key is that the romance is not well written, and it feels like a bunch of idiots are having fun.

I beg for votes, investment, and collection. The author's results are appalling. 😭😭😭😭

The protagonist is a tool man. Even if we change the protagonist, as long as there is a system, it will be the same.

How much the protagonist lacks maternal love! I directly found a girlfriend who is like a mother. She can be both a mother and a girlfriend. She can not only supervise the "homework" but also be gentle and considerate.

What a waste of such a good subject, the system gives you whatever you ask for, and issues tasks to directly reach the pinnacle of life, and you encounter this kind of thing. Only retreated in seconds.

The protagonist is summoned by the Crystal Maid and thinks he is mentally ill, a huge failure! Why doesn't the protagonist with a golden finger work hard all day to eat and wait to die? Readers won't reward if they find it unpleasant, and if they don't reward the author, they won't have any money! The marriage proposal failed, what do you think?

The protagonist is too useless and the maid group is too disgusting

Please portray the protagonist in a normal way Is it interesting for you to do this At the end of the writing, he is just a waste who just lies around and does nothing and only relies on the system? You think the protagonist you wrote is funny, which seems embarrassing to me Funny for the sake of being funny... It's just a joke 💀

After reading Chapter 46, I really can't help it! The protagonist's appearance in your work is considered unlucky for him. What is the meaning of his existence when he is so ignorant? Is it so that at the end of each chapter it can be written that he is still alive, being served and sleeping peacefully? I really feel like you wrote the protagonist's IQ as the head maid, and you are letting the protagonist's body fall in love with your own IQ!

The protagonist is too useless and has no sense of empathy at all

A good book was ruined by the protagonist's salty fish

It feels a bit subtle, and the handling of character relationships and plot arrangements need to be improved. How do you feel about it specifically? It's a bit like reading an elementary school student's composition.

It's a pity that a good subject matter could have been replaced by a better writing style, but the result is that it is just a running account and tastes nothing!

First of all, the world view, what you are describing should be about human survival type! When I looked at it, I felt like it was an island pastoral novel. Secondly, the mission system is simple, difficult and nightmare. I don't see where the difficulty is and where the nightmare is. It all feels simple. In the end, you used your golden finger too much. Your wishes come true to the system. The system is the protagonist. People are of no use. Any other person can do it. It should be people-centered and system-assisted. The above is not to criticize the author, it is just my personal opinion. Don't spray!

The subject matter is okay, but I don't know why the author made the main character so nonchalant, even if he wrote it as a normal person.

I can't read the book written here at all. I read more than 10 or 20 books just about the financial system. It's just too rubbish. Do you buy anything with gold coins, and then sell the resources into gold coins? These 7788 are made into a mess, and the battles are not difficult at all. They look so pale and weak, and everything is blurry?

After reading ten chapters, I can't stand it anymore. Your mother is poisonous and is pregnant. When you meet a newbie, he immediately runs away without thinking about anything. How much of a waste must he have to have such a thing?

I thought you were a eunuch, but I didn't expect you were still writing

The subject matter is very good. The protagonist doesn't want to travel back in time for 18 years. He is like a noob. He relies entirely on the protagonist's life to bless him. Otherwise, he feels that he will not be able to advance to the second level.

The protagonist is too mentally retarded and I can't stand it after reading more than 20 chapters.

The subject matter is pretty good, but it was poorly written by the author.

Not very good at describing the details

The genre is what I like to read, and the writing is decent enough to be read, but the character of the protagonist is hard to describe in one sentence, alas.

I have a question. If the author looks at this, will there be any wonders later?

Sigh. Is this considered a waste of time?