Cultivating Immortality with a Divine Coffin

The creativity is okay, but I think you will collapse in the middle of writing like this. I don't know if you have an outline. Can you practice this line of skills by absorbing spiritual energy? Will there be conflicts between different skills? Now it is corpse control, warrior, and spirit control. There must be puppet masters and immortal cultivators in the back. The author must be trying to be omnipotent, but omnipotence is not very popular now. By the way, the title of this book is Cultivation of Immortality, so maybe later immortality cultivators can summarize all of this, but all immortality cultivators still have spiritual root attributes. I think it's okay to absorb it, and it's okay to get the inheritance, but you don't need to pile it all on the protagonist. You can know the inheritance yourself but not use it, and then use the inheritance on the corpse. The aura attributes you absorb can be converted into the aura you need by the divine coffin, which can increase your cultivation speed and so on. This may not cause it to collapse so easily. Otherwise, I really think that if you write like this, it will basically be over in seconds in the middle period. However, this book may not survive the new book period. If you write about eunuchs, can you allow me to directly use your creativity to write a book? I planned to write a book before, but thinking about creativity made my head hurt. Background setting, training system, etc. I want to write with less criticism, but also want to write something a little more innovative. At least it has to have some characteristics. It's too difficult 🤤

When you write The Eunuch, I will plagiarize your idea and improve it, then pick up the trash and make money to keep an eye on you! (Cherish your eunuch 🙂)

I thought I was just going to write about the path of refining a corpse and carrying it in a coffin, but then came a spirit warrior, then a puppet master, and then a spirit warrior. . . . . . . I have also accepted so many professions. It's okay to write about many professions in a world, but can the protagonist not be so versatile? ? ? Even if he is omnipotent, there are four professions in one person, and each profession has a different level, which is dizzying. I also read that there is a chapter that introduces the background. The world is quite big, but I feel that the author may not be able to write it at that time. Come on, author!

The author is afraid that he has never seen a woman before. There must be a woman wherever he goes.

The subject matter is good, especially since this kind of corpse-controlling species is almost extinct in the starting point. But the author forced himself to write it as a short story, and the characters in it were too intellectually depressed. If nothing else, let's just talk about the part where the protagonist lurks in Yuanshan City, which almost poisoned me to death. The protagonist's identity cannot withstand scrutiny at all. It is someone who can find out by carefully checking the protagonist's past. The protagonist was kidnapped after leaving the village. There is a problem at first glance. The protagonist is lurking and does not even change his name. He clearly tells others that I am a spy. And the protagonist is lurking? Do things in a high profile for fear of not attracting attention, and also mix in the drama of pretending to be 13 and slap in the face, how can you tolerate it? Low profile? Doesn't exist! It's amazing that no one has discovered his identity yet. In addition, when the identity of the protagonist is almost exposed, if you don't kill the second lady, the public loser, why do you still keep it? Why, you can't walk when you see a beautiful woman? In addition, there are too many typos in it. Didn't the author read it over after finishing it? I am considered invulnerable to all kinds of poisons, especially rare novels such as the Beast Taming Style and the Corpse Refining Style. No matter how poisonous they are, I can read them, but I can only stick to more than thirty chapters of your book. Turn around and say goodbye!

I think things related to coffins must highlight the characteristics of the corpse and not overly describe the person.

This book is good, good luck to the author😡

The writing is good, the subject matter is also very attractive, and Goldfinger is also quite interesting. I look forward to more abilities of Goldfinger in the future, and the foreshadowing plot is also good.

It seems that he has been raised to death.

I think the author's writing is a bit confusing. The protagonist Goldfinger is about refining corpses, and inheritance is also about refining corpses. Just focus on refining corpses! But there was no clear distinction between primary and secondary, and Wanwanhua did not write anything weird at all. The number of words in each chapter is indeed worthy of praise, but there doesn't seem to be much useful information.