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Brother, I think you should sort out the outline. I feel that the previous description is too confusing, and there is also an ambush in the middle, and the plot is not clear. I thought it was transitioning to the later stage. I reward you with some starting coins. It is really a bit confusing. I didn't understand it. Chapter 67 directly confused me. Come on, I really can't understand it!

The various narrations are too confusing. I feel that the author is not very good at narration. He always breaks a complete plot into several paragraphs, which makes it uncomfortable to read.

If you book friends have any characters you think are good, you can tell me about them. I will add some to the characters in the book. Of course, if there are any characters or worlds you want to see, you can also tell me about them. I have been too busy recently

It's just a messed up word, it makes my head hurt just reading it

The first few chapters suffer from a common mistake of novice authors - they want to set up a grand world view but can't wait to push it to the readers. The multi-threaded switching in the author's mind may be the montage shot in the movie, but don't forget that the switching in the movie only takes a few seconds to write a long description.

The legend of Archon says that you should talk to Dio Feng Mo, after all, he has Chineseized Archon.

Your updates are really stable, can't you make more updates? . . .

(ง •̀_•́)งCome on

I voted for the wrong person today, I asked my friend to vote for you

I just came back from the holiday and it's finally on the shelves. It's already the second chapter of One Person. Four chapters have been ordered. Zhu Tianwen, I hope the fighting power will not collapse. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

🙂 What is the relationship between the content and the title of the book? I read it for a long time and didn't find it.

Come on, I'll reward you with a monthly pass, funny

The realistic background settings in the first few chapters are not very good. There are too many legitimate and easy ways to make money for the protagonist with such awesome abilities. Even if the pig's feet are noble and disdainful of money, he feels that his spiritual state is so high that he has to think about his two sisters as well as himself. Tell me any way to make money. It's all mentioned in the book. Because of the historical craze caused by virtual battles and the official national competitions, the protagonist didn't consider participating in the competition and becoming famous and becoming an Internet celebrity? I really don't understand how miserable the protagonist is in the first chapter, and then says in the subsequent chapters that the protagonist's mental ability is so awesome.

Come on, although the money is not much, all the trumpets will be given to fans

The Legend of Archon ended with the Oblivion of the Dead, and the ending was reversed in the end. Ariton, who always thought he was maintaining balance, was the villain. The God of Darkness was just his shield and was used as a knife user, but it seemed that he had lost his ability to make himself into a balanced shape. Rags was the remnant soul of the God of Darkness.

The emotional drama of your country is so embarrassing to watch.

I don't read any novels under One Person, it's annoying

If I were the inheritance of the Paladin! If I have certain strength, I will cooperate with the country! Become a god yourself! The great man becomes a god! Paladin, bring out the mantra of our country! May good things come to good people! I don't like Guangming's approach! My idol——Zhou

I'm different from others, I only know the legend of Archon

I felt pretty good after reading the introduction. After reading the table of contents, I...😳

In this book, the protagonist plays very well. Although there are many obstacles, the protagonist plays steadily and does not aim too high. What didn't work well was the author, who laid too many foreshadowings and hidden clues at the beginning of the chapter, and all kinds of high-level plotting, which really overshadowed the story and made it superfluous. It's like the male protagonist is working hard, and a group of his relatives fight over disagreements over a blind date for him, but the male protagonist doesn't know anything. Why the hell do you have so many dramas?

A highly intelligent person! I was so embarrassed when I saw the other country!

It's messy, it's too messy, the settings are thrown away too quickly,

This is too short and weak, and the author's writing is too messy. It is no different from selling dog meat with a sheep's head, and you have let down everyone's support for you. 😜It is estimated that many investors must be disappointed.

Does the author have a group? , If not, create a group

The introduction is captivating, I wish the content was better. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง. I'm going to start reading

It's really a stretch, I feel like it wasn't written by the same person before and after it was put on the shelf. A's a's a's a's

Chapter 4, that virtual sandbox is really disgusting, I suggest you skip Chapter 4