Everybody's Juggernaut

Angry Squirrel, the author of "The Experimental Diary of the Crazy Lich", has launched a new work under his fourth author account, claiming that his style is constantly changing. For example, this book returns to the third person, but the author still has a lot of narrative explanations that jump out, exuding a unique otaku flavor that penetrates the bone marrow, and the sense of deja vu of a crazy lich. The biggest selling point and shortcoming of this book is the setting. Each chapter will use one-third of the space to shake up the settings, some new and some old. In a cool magical worldview, the top of scientific and technological civilization has become theology, and personal will rewrites reality. The physical constants were smeared in a mess, and the old technological system completely collapsed. This world has gods and dragons, steamships and battle mechs, stylish superpowers and symbiotic spirit blades. Everyone is a sword master, and this is the dawn of a new era where everyone is like a dragon and everyone is skilled in martial arts. Of course, the new era is indispensable for beast girls, ship girls, car girls, sword girls... The other third is the dialogue and jokes of the man Zheng Li with his venomous tongue. The story advances extremely slowly and fragmented, so from time to time there are flashbacks such as "Ahem, it's too far away", "Time goes back a little bit", "The camera pulls back to the protagonist". If you put aside the shell of the profound setting and the rambling narrative of dazzling skills, you will find that the whole story is actually quite boring. It's like a third-rate mystery novel that uses unreasonable tricks to hide the murderer, and then adds a lot of unnecessary water to cover up the public's eyes. After resigning from the government, the time traveler Zheng Li opened a consulting technology company on Blackwater Street. The main business covers taking care of children to help with homework, Didi beating people, posting flyers and writing big-character posters in the middle of the night. In fact, they are official white gloves, entrusted by the government to do some dirty work. Starting from the trick observation of Lan Mengqi, a sweet and cute time traveler rabbit with a height of 180cm and a weight of 85kg, he gradually recruited and formed his own team of twelve constellations of spirits. The rabbit on the cover has disappeared. Some authors borrow other people's mature worldviews and only think about how to tell good stories and how to polish their words. Some authors are only interested in the setting and want to explore their imaginations but do not have a suitable plot to carry them. The former can be compared to making a classic old dish skillfully, while the latter involves getting a lot of ingredients and thinking of new ways to make it. You may even just wash the rare ingredients and put them on the table without much cooking. When you are in the second year of high school, you may like things that are not clear enough, be proud of your niche and complex tastes, and enjoy yourself along with the author's radio waves. However, no matter how old a man is, he can still fall in love. This is also a kind of romance!

I heard that every good author has the habit of reading book reviews? Ahem, this should probably barely be considered a book review! ? I started chasing books from Crazy Lich. I was still a novice at that time. I never thought about spending money to read books. It was not because of financial reasons. I just felt that I had to come here to recharge to read a book. It was very troublesome. How could it be as convenient as the next TXT? It wasn't until Watchmen 5 was launched that I suddenly didn't find it troublesome anymore. Unfortunately, God didn't have my wish and it died prematurely. Even though Crazy Knight still has a bit of a Princess Peach feel to it after it was released, it was indescribably awkward to read. It just so happened that I just started working, so I slowly put it down. It wasn't until recently that I had some free time and planned to reopen Crazy Knight that I found out that Squirrel had opened a new pit. Everyone was celebrating! I'm not afraid of being criticized. I was browsing piracy websites until I saw the testimonials before it was released. Watching piracy is never something worth talking about. To be honest, among the four squirrel books I have read, this one gave me the best impression. I remember Roland made an evaluation of himself in Mad Lich: Oh, he is just a fool digging his own grave. Willfulness and punishment, Roland*Mouse is a real hammer! But when I saw in the testimonials that this book had the worst temporary results, my mood suddenly turned bad, and then I became scared, afraid that I would become a father-in-law again (if you don't read it completely, it will kill people, it won't hurt to read a few more sentences later). I realized that the days of watching pirated copies were coming to an end.                                                                                                                                                                   their their personal interests. But starting from today, I have also become a full member. By the way, although there is automatic subscription, it feels really troublesome to subscribe to one chapter! ! ! I would rather pay all the money at once and never think about it again (this will also make it easier for the eunuch to run away, right? Manual dog head to save his life). PS 1: Is there any chance for Awu to be resurrected? Even if it's just an outline! ! ! PS 2: Is Luo Luo's Bizarre Adventure coming to an end? I'm curious about what Luo Luo and the others went through during that time, I'm curious about how Adam achieved the status of a swordsman step by step, and I'm curious about why Margaret fell in love with single-celled organisms, meow meow meow? Lisa? Eliza is enough for me. PS 3: I suggest that Squirrel change the structure of the sentence details. For example, in Juggernaut, it took me reading several chapters to realize that the rabbit is really a rabbit and Awu No. 2 Is a shark. For example, when the little tiger made fun of the senior brother, I only realized that it was the little tiger who said it after reading that paragraph. For another example, I still haven't figured out who said what when District Chief Sun asked Zheng Li if he could check the shipment rate of the Spirit Blade. (Is this some special way of writing?) This happens in several books. When reading Squirrel's book, you really have to read a paragraph over and over again, otherwise you won't understand it. I once gave Amway Squirrel's book to a few friends, but they said that the author felt like he failed Chinese in primary school. I don't know if it was because of my low IQ or because he wrote poorly. It's an exaggeration, but it makes sense. I feel so ashamed! But it doesn't matter, just finish what you want to say, and let go of one thing, which will make you feel better. However, I still hope that the squirrel can see it and just take a glance. The content does not matter. (I pray that book friends won't read it if it's too long, it's too shameful for Timor) Sorry, it's very confusing. Finally, I wish the squirrel will no longer be stuck and suffer no more, that's all!

From my personal point of view, if you feel that writing is too stressful, it is better to find a way to cut off the Shura field lines of the twelve constellations. After all, it's 1202, and it's hard to write a particularly brilliant story about Shura Field. On the contrary, it is a burden. Moreover, the existence of a large number of "confidantes" can only make Zheng Li and Lin Yuying look like clowns. And now the protagonist team has many supporting characters, such as Rabbit, Wu Sanjun Shark, Song Ying and Dr. Snake. Personally, I still have deep feelings for the old characters, and I don't want them to disappear as soon as I write them. . . . .

The setting of the new book is very similar to Daozhang's Theorem of Odd Numbers, but it is much more solid than Daozhang's writing. The heavy background behind the relaxed writing style, the interesting yet rigorous setting, and the amazing feeling of watching Crazy Lich back then.

What a great book! When I read a lot of settings in the first 30 chapters, it actually gave me a headache. Although the world view and force mode settings are interesting, it is really difficult to calm down and understand slowly. But when I read around chapter 50, I felt the energy I had been building up for a long time, which was really refreshing! I am very grateful to the author for persisting in his own ideas in such an impetuous environment and writing such a good book. Although the book has not been finished yet, I really hope that the author can persevere. I will keep chasing this book.

I really like the author's worldview and settings, and I also like the overall style of the author's books. This book still continues the author's strengths and builds a huge world with many wonderful stories. But the weakness of not being good at long-form writing has not changed. Overall it's a pity.

To be honest, the ending is not perfect. It is better not to do it. This is a completely failed plan. According to the most original plan, Yin Zi will live a stable life for a period of time and then die without wish. Now he has caught up with the whole Jiang Haiyi and half Zheng Li in exchange for Shi Zing Yin. Although I know that the protagonist's setting will definitely cure Ginko, but if I don't bring in the protagonist's guess, it's basically using Ginko to become a vegetative state. I don't know how to describe it. It's roughly like becoming a vegetative state. For an uncertain future, we paid such a price. If we further calculate the losses, Xie Ying also counts. Ninety-nine percent of Xie Ying is caught up. As for what is left, at least if Xie Ying is still alive, he will be of any weird use in the future. But initially, it seems that he will be in the position of breaking up the friendship for a while. As for whether Jiang Shifan will be hidden in the snow and accidentally vomited out of the lunch box that day, it is not impossible according to the author's uncertainty. As for this plot, it is better to say that it is a remedial measure after the failure of the plan to ascend to the gods. Although it is not very satisfying, it plays a role in further advancing the plot. If the plan to ascend to the gods succeeds and Jiang Shifan escapes smoothly, everyone will be happy with the plot. Zheng Li can continue to fish in another place and continue his daily life, water settings, digging holes, etc. The author has suffered a lot 😤

The cover was well chosen~ lsp came uninvited

The writing is great, but the beginning is a bit lame... It's a female character and it's a live show, so it's easy to scare new readers away.

Has the latest chapter been blocked?

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Lan Mengqi. . . . Painting such impure things makes me feel like my hands are dirty again (looking at the sky).

Chapter Three: The Male Protagonist/ Chapter Two, Three, Four: World View/ Chapter Fourteen: Power System, History/ Chapter Fifty and Sixty: Early Foreshadowing and Plot Explosion/ Chapter Sixty-three: The Past of the Male Protagonist/ Chapter 179 The male and female protagonists establish a relationship/ Everyone, hold on, don't abandon the book and don't skip the plot, it will be more interesting later Editor: How long has it been since the end? There are still people, this is an old read of the previous work From a reader's perspective, I feel it's a bit different at the beginning but not changed at the end. I know the author's style or morals, so I didn't go into details. ; A protagonist who plays tricks and has personal strength; his camp is Hui Dao who can be a veteran of Bai Dao; the main line is atypical upgrade, building ability system type; the emotional line Shura field; in the later stage, there is a high probability of writing a bland and dry eunuch, if you mind this kind of thing, you can dodge it

I think the two pioneers of Black Beifeng back then were Xueba and Squirrel. As a result, the female protagonists are all orcs now, which probably means that the dragon slayer will eventually become a dragon.

Song Ying's impression painting~at least the elements are complete (laugh~)

Can't the author learn from other books? You are a typical creative author, who often has a world view and a good imagination, but in the middle and late stages, your writing skills are insufficient and you cannot take back a lot of foreshadowing. The author likes to use direction and market to cover up his shortcomings in writing. A work requires not only plot but also writing style to express it. From Mad Lich to this book, I haven't seen any significant improvement in your writing. I have read a book. He relied on his imagination and creativity in the early stage and was called a masterpiece. Later, due to lack of creativity, he could only write crazy stories about the love harem. The filling in the articles was not enough and the writing was the same as Si. Now he has written more than a million words in the book. The love harem is the best thing he has written, because he knows where his writing is not good. He took the initiative to learn. In order to write the heroine well, he went to watch some female videos. The heroine is very vivid. You can't revise your article just like writing an explanatory essay. However, you have the problem of not being able to take back the foreshadowing in the later stage. It is also prone to bugs and confusing language.

The little rabbit from another world who was tricked into live streaming

On the possibility of Lin Yuying being a ghost Hachiku-sama is very tall – Lin Yuying is very tall Hachiku-sama is Shotacon – Lin Yuying is the same Hachiku-sama is a ghost(?) – Lin Yuying is a ghost In summary, Lin Yuying is a ghost.

White Rabbit

The opening style is as familiar as ever. I hope Squirrel can insist on finishing the book this time and prove that the crazy lich is not his peak. I also hope that this book will become popular and at least give Squirrel the foundation and motivation to continue writing.

Squirrel just likes to change his vest, and he has no choice but to change himself. I know of four or five vests, and I can't find him in Fans.

I'm opening a new account again... Your account will bring a bunch of old fans with you again! I don't know what Ning is thinking. Could it be that the large five elements can defeat you? ? ?

Whole Rabbit

Why do authors always want to change their accounts to write books... I feel that a large part of the reason why the first two are not popular is due to the previous wave of account changes.

Yeah~Bunny. p. S. The first one has a filter, and the next one is a paper draft

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It's a pity. It can be seen that the squirrel in this book has great ambitions, but it is a pity that he failed to control it. Maybe you can learn from Feiyan, it doesn't matter if you go slower. The most exciting thing is that in the first volume, the Sword God Tournament, the Twin Cities Sword God Tournament and the God of Hunting are not as interesting as before. Maybe it's the same when converting short and medium stories into long novels. Zhttty's Xia Xing Tian Xia couldn't control it in the end, collapsed slightly in the later stage, and prepared the ending hastily. But it looks even worse on Squirrel's side. Now it feels like the outline is completely the same, and the final battle can have a good ending. In fact, the world view of the story is constructed, and it does not need a lot of plot to fill it in. It only needs appropriate background description. After the story itself is told well, fans will naturally continue to pursue and perfect the world view.

This book is really too confusing. The author mentioned many times the weakness and suffering of human beings in the past, probably because he wanted to write a history of the development of human beings struggling from weakness step by step, but I feel that the problem lies here. The background of the race war makes the world view too grand. If you want to introduce it in detail, it will undoubtedly occupy a huge amount of setting space. In fact, the author's introduction of various settings in the free chapter already makes people feel that the story content is broken (and it mainly focuses on humans, and the introduction of alien races is too brief in comparison). And another problem arises in the war between humans and gods, which is the foreseeable explosion in the number of characters. Every time a crusade against high-dimensional gods is carried out, there are hundreds, thousands, or even tens of thousands of people in the background. Such characters who are close to the top of the combat power of human civilization are as cheap as cabbage. It makes people doubt the description of characters on the future battlefield. The characters with plots may be too small compared to the overall war. (To be honest, firing a thousand arrows to kill a sun god is already very casual. Even if the attribute special attack makes up for some of the rationality, and there is basically no description of low-end military conflicts between humans and aliens, it is as if all the wars are fought by the gods themselves, and their dependents have almost no sense of existence.) In summary, the setting of this novel is still very good, but if you really want to fully describe it, you may need a huge amount of text.

Wu Sanjun concept doodle. This is how Awu feels to me, but the original text does not seem to indicate that Awu can transform into a second stage. Well, I just like it anyway. Also, the shark teeth and the saw chain sword really go well together hahaha. I really like a down-and-out hero like Awu. I am looking forward to whether he will have any experience of bitterness and hatred. (For example, being surrounded by enemies and running out of ammunition and food, and then the beautiful girl said that she should eat me and run away, etc., And finally Awu violently fought back with cannibalism. Well, that's very handsome! 😂)

Crazy Lich or Crazy Knight or the current Quanmin all have the ability to write four or five thousand chapters In other words, the Mad Lich can write four or five thousand chapters The Mad Knight can write five or six thousand chapters And Quanmin can write seven or eight thousand chapters But every time he may not even be able to write one-tenth of what the book should have been able to write This is not to blame the squirrel or anything It's just It's a pity that I can't reconcile I have watched the original Crazy Lich four or five times Maybe even more The Crazy Knight has also watched it three or four times All the people have watched it two or three times together Now let's watch it again at Qidian Complete the entire subscription Just think back to your childhood with the Crazy Lich till now