King of the Nine Seas

I believed you and thought it was an authentic pirate novel. The writing gets younger and younger, the protagonist becomes more like a virgin, and the plot becomes more like a cartoon. King of the Nine Seas is like a summer camp in the Nine Seas... Just like a Luffy fanfic in One Piece 😅

Kill the undercover Feyre, including his wife and daughter, and eradicate the roots without leaving any loopholes. Trust me, deal with this place well, otherwise it will become a poisonous spot.

I have some questions that I would like to ask the author about. Regarding the Madonna issues in this book, such as saving the little girl and offending the deputy captain, I agree with this. It can show that the protagonist has principles, and the rules on the ship are not to attack anyone who does not resist. But the protagonist is a pirate, not an adventurer. Chapter 58, why don't you loot all the goods on the ship? Not to mention being principled. The unspoken rule of pirates is to spare their lives. Instead of taking a symbolic amount, even if you take most of them away and leave a little for them, I won't say anything. You are so principled, what kind of pirates are you doing? Why don't you just become an adventurer? As for the author saying that his writing style has declined after chapter 30, it is okay to say that his writing style has declined, even if he is nosy or does not eradicate the root cause, there can be an explanation, but the protagonist violates the position of the pirates, does not fit the theme, and does not search for treasures to his heart's content. Either be like Luffy and rely on taking risks or cheating, or like a normal pirate, you can have principles, but steal all the treasures if you have the ability.

Ninety percent of the area is the sea, and it is divided into nine seas. There are nine pirate kings in the nine seas. Who are the pirates going to rob? Run your own business? Then pirate is also a derogatory term in your book.

The biggest flaw of this book is the setting at the beginning that the world has very little land. Less land means less plants, which means less food. If there is less food, the population will not be able to develop. Without a population base, there will be no big market for luxury goods, because large voyages with spices, gold and gems as the core will not develop. Merchant ships that only trade in grain will not be able to rob the world. The value of making huge profits cannot attract people to become pirates, and pirate civilization cannot take shape.

I was so disgusted when I saw the conflict with the vice-captain over a little girl. A pirate is a virgin, so I don't have to do it myself. It's so lenient. If the plot requires it, it can be replaced with potion materials or loot distribution. Which one can't be a point of conflict? Is that plot disgusting or is the word count too low? I haven't read the rest yet, so I won't comment for now.

The first volume is good, but it's a pity that Dragon Sea has been full of routines since the beginning, all using bad routines and all kinds of virgins! The clock council, the biggest selling point, is boring every time! It doesn't feel weird like Cthulhu at all, but it feels like God is pretty good!

What to do with the undercover agent? He can also reveal the male protagonist.

From my personal point of view, the writing style and creativity of this book are pretty good. The reason why the results are not very good may be related to the lack of successful portrayal of the protagonist. The protagonist is too passive. It is not the protagonist who promotes the development of the story but the story that drives the protagonist forward. This type of Western fantasy novel itself has a certain sense of distance when reading it. This requires the focus to be focused on the protagonist to dilute this sense of distance. The protagonist needs to control the progress of the story and reveal the mystery of this time. However, the protagonist in this book is just the opposite, too passive.

Poisoned in Chapter 32 Let's not talk about whether the spy can bring his family with him He is a spy who was threatened by you, and you have to go back to save his lover He can betray the navy, but he can't betray you?