Invincible Start

The style of your novel is similar to that of my video copywriting. . . This is the video I made of the arrival of the protagonist in your first chapter. You feel like you haven't changed a single word!

Rotten 1. The protagonist returns to the previous world after cultivating himself to be invincible 2. After dozens of chapters, the protagonist's relatives and friends are dead and injured. Those who are not dead have wet eyes when they see the protagonist, and then call the protagonist "Dad/Master/Big Brother! You are back!" Then the corners of the eyes are wet, and they are passed by in one stroke, which is not refreshing at all. 2.1. The dozens of chapters about water are the most frustrating. You are slowly being looked down upon by one and the other. The protagonist comes to a small world. The author does not let the protagonist fly for the sake of the word number of water, but insists on letting him walk or ride in a carriage. When the protagonist encounters an enemy, he becomes furious and then slowly kills the enemy. There are a lot of descriptions in the middle, and a lot of sidekicks are added. It's annoying to watch. 3. In the last scene, the protagonist kills the ultimate enemy, Ji Ba. First, kill the small boss woman. The author inserted more than a dozen supporting characters, and also let the protagonist's son take part in it to train him. As a result, it took a whole chapter, and then he killed the big boss. When the protagonist arrived in the world where the big boss was, he inserted five supporting characters, and then the protagonist fought the boss again (in fact, the protagonist was completely can be crushed), then the boss shakes people again, and then the protagonist slowly fights with the person whom the boss shakes (the protagonist can completely crush it, but it has to describe the villain's thoughts in hundreds of words), then the boss shakes the person again, and then a supporting player comes to show the protagonist's strength and flatter the protagonist. After that, another sentence: "The protagonist tortured the boss for three days and three nights, and wiped him out of existence." Is this cool? This doesn't feel good. This has been the preparation for so long. I've been waiting for the last bit of fun, but that's it. 5. Skipping four, the character creation is also very problematic. There is a woman, the descendant of the protagonist, whose name I forgot, who fanatically believes in Haotian. She is given so many scenes, which adds up to several thousand words. In the end, after the protagonist defeats Haotian, he just casually says "She has woken up and no longer believes in Haotian. It turns out that the protagonist is her ancestor", and then she is gone. How does this character look? I read that the author said that some people said that the protagonist is useless, so I deleted the review. He is indeed a loser. He is so powerful, but he gathered his family and friends and did 70 chapters. I hope the author will not delete this comment. This is not a malicious comment, but a matter of fact.

Invincible writing must have the attitude of invincible writing. It's obvious that it can be done in seconds, so don't talk nonsense (눈_눈). I have nothing to say if you ask for a low word count.

I am the first one. I happened to see it in the group. I must say something, Lao Wang, you are so short hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

I prefer Wudi Wen, but your skills need to be strengthened. The dialogue is really awkward. If you read it in junior high school, I will definitely like it very much. It is said that there is ntr in the back, which makes it even more unbearable.

Stop writing it, not many people are willing to read it.

This is Lao Wang's first book with an outline! ! ! I saw the potential😰😰😰

Extremely poisonous, a pretentious style from 9 years ago. Well, that's what you want to read. If you like novice pretentious and brainless articles, take a look at Liang Cao.

Another God of War movie with a crooked mouth that is pretentious and slaps you in the face until the end.

I feel there is no logic. The protagonist has lived for a thousand years and his appearance is ageless. He still feels stronger than the protagonist. The villain really has no IQ.

Even though he has become a god, he still lives in his memories and cannot get out.

Is the author a novel written by qqkandian? Why did you come to the starting point? I just wanted to ask.

I was dumped by the girl I liked, and today I was humiliated by the girl I liked again. It turns out that I have no money.

Lao Wang, don't collapse 🙂🙂🙂

True, Xiaobaiwen But to Shennong, it's all trivial hahaha

I like this book very much. Good luck to the author!

You are so short, so short, short

I personally think that I have read quite a lot of novels. I think it is too little for you to update two or three chapters a day for a general novel type, because you have only updated to 230 chapters now, so you can write more before reaching 100 chapters.

This is too clumsy. The villain has to write a lot of nonsense and even show off his skills.

Hurry up and update your new book, hurry up, invincible pretense

It's very nice to read. It's a great read. I've been a bookworm for many years.

Yes, a great book in Shuangwen.

The updates are not enough to watch, it will be nice to watch it again after keeping it for a few months. 🙂🙂

Is the World God a fart? Everyone wants to be the God of the World, but no one takes the God of the World seriously.

From the introduction, you can guess that he is running for the land of the protagonist.

Be careful not to make it too watery, ugh. The plot is bone-chilling