Paladin's Dimensional Journey

If it is 5e, you can consider taking the new Champion's Oath. In reality, it is a bit difficult to take Devotion and Green Knight, although the setting of the male protagonist is a seedling of Devotion.

Newbie, new book, hope to support. If you still feel that you can't read it, you might as well save it or give me a recommendation ticket. Your support is the motivation for my writing. Thank you.

It's well written, but updates are a bit slow.

Dnd plus unlimited, double happiness.

This is a knight, not a paladin. By the way, there are two.

Like the title, if you have any character ideas, you can feel free to express them here. Arrange them by name, occupation, talent, ability, etc. Any occupation is acceptable, and it does not have to be limited to DND. It doesn't matter if you have occupations and talents, because it may be used when writing other worlds (will be slightly modified depending on the situation) (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It would be better if there were no set results in the first three chapters

Different from what I thought, I thought you had to at least go through a plot in Demon Slayer, for example, after encountering a tragedy of demon murder, you were inspired to become a real paladin. The result was immediate. It felt like playing a game and just choosing a profession at the beginning without any sense of substitution. And the first time I killed ghosts it was really boring. I just created my own breath of light and killed ghosts indiscriminately. I thought it could show a little more of the paladin's special attacks against ghosts. The result is that it has a bonus to the self-created breathing method, and can kill monsters indiscriminately in the first battle, without using any professional abilities. When you read it, you will feel like you are trying to sell someone else's meat. Although I don't know much about DND and I don't know much about whether Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba's breathing method is self-invented, but the author, since you are based on the DND paladin, you should at least focus on showing the professional characteristics and behaviors, otherwise you will fall into the inferior category.

First of all, it is very unreasonable for Yin to let the protagonist go. It is also unreasonable for him to be afraid of the consciousness of the world. After all, he has believed in the evil god. It would be better to write about him being attacked and dying and escaping, and I personally feel that there is no need for the author to write about the god behind the scenes, it is too cliche. Moreover, the protagonist has a god on his head for no apparent reason and shouts that time is running out and he must grow up quickly. This kind of thing is a routine from at least ten years ago. In addition, it becomes extremely difficult for the protagonist to level up a world. How do people with normal talents live? Is there any training that cannot be upgraded?

The protagonist feels more like a samurai than a paladin

At first, I decided to name the protagonist's talent as Glory Sword, but some people said that Exalted Sword is better, so I want to ask you which one you think is better (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

After reading the first chapter, I gave up and all the fun was gone.

According to the paladin, it should be a single female protagonist.

Is there a female protagonist, one or more? Solve

That is, why is the protagonist so short?

I think it's well written (✪▽✪). People yearn for order and kindness. Although some people have experienced darkness and despair, don't they still have goodness in their hearts? If we could, wouldn't we all want to be a hero?