Traveling to the Sea to Chase Stars

Name: Traveling to the Sea to Chase Stars
Author: Youhuo Qilin

踏海追星

by Youhuo Qilin (幽火麒麟)

Status: Completed
Length: 27 Words
Genre: Sci-Fi
Audience: Male
Subgenre: Interstellar Civilization
Updated: 4y ago
Source: Qidian

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Synopsis

I lifted a lamp and tried to measure the corner of kindness in the darkness. Countless souls were sinking, and countless bodies were kneeling on the boundary between life and death. Most of the brave and just people lost their lives. But this world shouldn't be just black! I saw the sparks floating in the distance, and I also saw the ferocious appearance of the ghost next to the sparks. There will always be people who will resist, and there will always be people who will prove that this world is not hopeless! There must be some kind of goodness worth fighting for! All noble people hold their breath, just to fight for his dawn at the last moment! Regardless of whether he is noble or powerful! No matter whether he is cruel or cold! The blood reverberates in the chest, fearless of all these obstacles and hardships!

Reader comments

Very interesting work! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!
3 likes6y ago
I'm a newbie, please correct me if there are any mistakes, thank you very much!
2 likes6y ago
I'm going to Guangdong by car. There may not be any updates today.
6y ago
Come on newcomers, persistence will pay off, the book is good
6y ago
1. The long opening section of Chapter 3 is really tiring to read and the eyes can't bear it. 2. In the first three chapters, there is no big problem with the entire story structure. However, the narrative technique in the third chapter is told through dialogue throughout the whole story, which makes it feel very empty without any sense of substitution. 3. Chapter 2 and Chapter 3 explain the background of the entire story through storytelling. For old bookworms, this is suspicious of hydrology. 4. The general suggestion for the first three chapters is to write about the protagonist's exciting points, the highlights that can attract the readers' attention, and give the readers the motivation to follow. Don't spray if you don't like it!
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