Start as the Wine Swordsman

The setting is good, but the plot has a strong sense of déjà vu, turning it into an alternative fanfic. It would be much better if the world of immortality was an original plot, and the protagonist only acted the character's character lines and famous lines without changing his appearance.

The work is accomplished by hard work, and wasteful by play; the success is achieved by thinking, and destroyed by casualness. Write books and documents and update them well. In this case, I will find a rich woman to support you. If one fails, I will find three.

The Buddhist Master with great compassion and physical salvation

A drunken and unrestrained drunken swordsman

The most affectionate and most human, the sagely true king dressed in graceful white clothes

The human race has stood on top of the world

If I choose Fahai and see Pudu Cihang, I will be so bold that the monster dares to blaspheme my Buddha! Dawei Tianlong!

I thought it was the beginning of fairy tale dramas fifteen years ago, but I didn't expect that it would be its peak in the blink of an eye! I fell in love with the character Jiu Jian Xian at first sight, and as soon as I played the BGM (Fairy Tale of the Sword and Fairy Tale), oh, Jiu Sword Fairy, I will always be awesome!

I saw Li Xiaoyao and Zhao Ling'er appear later, as well as Li Xunhuan, Lengxue, Guihai Yidao, Duan Tianya, Ye Gucheng, Ximen Chuixue... These film and television characters have all appeared, so the protagonist still plays a ghost? Do you want the protagonist to always play the role of the Jiu Sword Fairy? I originally thought that the protagonist traveled to another world and then played those popular characters in movies and TV shows. However, I didn't expect that popular characters such as Li Xunhuan and Ye Gucheng were directly written by the author instead of being played by the protagonist. I feel very disappointed, it doesn't have the same flavor as the vest-playing article. Up to the time it was released, the protagonist was still clinging to the vest of Jiu Jian Xian. When will he change his vest? It would be nice to exchange a few vests.

The sword was badly written and boring. The author simply wrote that he would die for the sake of the human race, and then a monk would be replaced and the mighty Tianlong would rise. You bold monster, I can tell at a glance that you are not human!

The setting is particularly strange. It combines various fandoms and original characters. All the characters from Fairy Sword are there, but Shushan is missing. It's like an entire character and his background were taken out of a complete story. After this character was taken out, he was allowed to continue to join the story. It was really awkward.

To be honest, the fighting power in this book collapsed. When the protagonist first appeared, he thought he was very powerful in the pill-forming period. Who knew that once he arrived in the Tang Dynasty, he would be a poisonous person. There were hundreds of Nascent Souls and Sanhua in a small city restaurant. In the end, the two apprentices that the protagonist accepted almost caught up with the protagonist in terms of strength. In less than a month, the protagonist was still cheating hard. He couldn't even compare to his apprentices in a month. Who is the protagonist? I also like Fairy Sword very much, and I just read it recently, but the author was so deeply influenced by Fairy Sword that he wrote it as a fanfic. Originally, the role-playing setting of the protagonist was a bit interesting, but it changed as I wrote it. It is about to become the Legend of Sword and Fairy. You can either write a new world, or travel through the legend and travel to the Legend of Sword and Fairy to change their fate.

Why are all kinds of characters being added? It's not necessary. It looks a bit messy like this.

The setting is okay, but it's a pity that the content is too messy, and it feels like I wrote it wherever I thought. Maybe I didn't think carefully about it before starting the book, and I didn't have an outline. It would be nice to revise it.

I feel that the protagonist is a bit useless. He always fails to kill the enemy with his ultimate move. Wan Jian returns to the clan to kill a demon king, but the demon king escapes. He has to chase him, and then provokes the big boss Pudu Cihang before he seizes the opportunity to kill the demon king. The Dionysian Curse was used later, and the opportunity to use the Dionysian Curse was wasted. It actually failed to kill Luo Rulie and let him run away.

The martial arts hodgepodge is upgraded to the immortal martial arts hodgepodge.

I would like to make a suggestion and suggest that the author consider this writing method Don't use the faces of TV drama characters, such as Jiu Jian Xian, and directly accelerate the protagonist's age to that of Jiu Jian Xian. The same will be true for other characters in the future. They will only play the identity at the beginning and go their own way.

The author shouldn't write in such a powerful way. Don't pretend to be a person because of what your beliefs are worth and how to slay demons. You've made things very difficult for us. You probably want to earn some faith points from me, just by the way. So what's the difference between you and those people on the roadside, pretending to be civilized?

The author can try to write side stories to pave the way for the protagonist's cultivation, and he cannot always make a breakthrough at the critical moment. And every time I break through a little, I chase the enemy into the big map. It feels too deliberate. With the author's current writing style, except for the first few chapters, I can't see Mo Yixi's free and unrestrained style at all. The author can state that the protagonist's psychology will change into the role he plays. (In this way, the sense of dissonance is eliminated a lot) I will give Mo Yixi an example of the side plot. You can write that the protagonist meets a shemale and falls in love, and then the righteous sect kills the demon. The protagonist can't stand it and convinces everyone. (The basis is that Mo Yixi once liked Qing'er, and Qing'er was once framed as a monster.) Then write other stories, and slowly increase the compatibility of the protagonists, so that it will be more authoritative. If you insist on making the protagonist miserable, you can take some damage when you clear the mini-boss at the end, and then leave quietly. Only then will you feel like a master. By the way, the author wrote the part about the protagonist accepting Li Xiaoyao as his disciple too quickly. It could be a little more detailed.

To put it bluntly, there are really not many novels of this type that include a eunuch. I hope the author will not give up no matter what the circumstances.

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The second volume has been scrapped. It's just a matter of time before the eunuchs are released. It's a pity...

Since you are playing the role of the Wine Swordsman, it is best not to write about a world where the Wine Swordsman exists. It will easily collapse, and it will be a hodgepodge without understanding. It is a pity that such a good beginning is

You are an eunuch again. It has been a month or two and there is no update yet. Could it be that you have traveled through time?

The author didn't grasp the essence of the role at all.

Really, it's getting more and more like a show-off and slap-in-the-face routine, isn't it interesting? ?

I didn't like Fa Hai's modern spiritual energy recovery setting, so I decided to wait until this chapter was finished before reading it, but this book ended up being a hit!

Yes, who can tell me who the father the author wants to play is?

The more I read, the more it looks like those pretentious and slap-in-the-face books, which are not interesting at all.

Jiu Jian Xian is okay. What has Fa Hai written recently? I feel like Bai Feng has more scenes than the main character.