Chief Designer of LOL

The author's writing is very good👍, a few personal suggestions I think the protagonist should not only be a hero, but also make him redo or weaken the previous hero. Because there will be new routines or gameplays all the time, and it cannot be fair all the time. Just a small personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

How should I put it? After reading Chapter 37, Shurima and Xerath, you said that women can accept it, but changing the character and magic background is too much, and it also makes Azir black. I like Azir quite a lot, and he has no black holes in the background story.

Chapter 14: I was persuaded to quit. It's my fault that I still read novels with common sense and brains.🙂🙂

I hope the author can read my comments. I personally feel that the previous content is very well written. Furthermore, there are relatively few people who write about this kind of subject matter. It can be said that this book is very attractive to me, but at the end, it completely starts to tell the story of heroes. I feel that it is completely boring. This kind of story can be found on the official website Seeing why you are still written in the book, I still prefer to read the development of the plot in the book. I hope the author can make some improvements if he sees it {"NickName":"Book Friends 20170201164757961","UserId":229024517}

The writing idea is very novel and the writing style is good. I like it very much. I hope I can continue writing without being a eunuch.

Can you stop talking about the story? Players in the background story alliance know that it's very annoying to see two or three pictures of you.

Ennm, there are 40 heroes, BP will remove 6 first (thanks for pointing it out), and the remaining 10 people will be divided. How can such a game become popular in S10. . The suggestion is to advance the timeline and slow down the plot a bit, which would be better 😊 Of course, this is just my opinion. If you don't like it, delete it directly. Don't criticize 😆😆

: How to say it!，，，，           ，，，，，，，？ If you want to make money by writing novels, you must take it seriously. If, the author, you read this comment I wrote and you can't stand it, you don't have to read below. Just delete me. It's not a problem. It's okay. You can just curse a few words. I won't pay attention to it, but I can see it from the reply. The plot is too fast and there are no details at all. How can I tell you this? It's up to you to appreciate this by yourself, and slowly appreciate it by reading other novels Problem 2: The protagonist designs a Yasuo when he comes to this world. Where does the character modeling come from? Where did the dubbing come from? Even if you can handle character modeling, dubbing, and drawing all by yourself, these things all take time. You can do it as soon as you say it. OK, you have a system to help you be awesome The first character comes out, and there are various influences. There is still a process. This is the problem - the plot is too fast. I saw that you wrote some processes, but they are not enough. It seems very rushed and forced Okay, even if these are not problems, they all seem reasonable, but this game belongs to Tencent. This is the third problem I want to talk about. People from Tencent don't come to you to sign a contract, but they come to you to sign a contract, and you agree. You said that the hero you designed is from League of Legends. If you don't sign a contract with Tencent, you sign a contract with another platform instead. Tencent can sue you! Of course, my writing skills are not good. You should take your time to taste it. What I said is that the fourth problem is that the plot develops too fast. Do you ignore the timeline? Without any daily plot, it will appear that the characters have no emotions at all. From the time you set up the first hero to the second hero, others will immediately come to you to sign a contract, and how many tens of millions will they offer? For someone who writes seriously and wants to write a story, has the protagonist ever gotten to know him? Have you ever learned about the salaries of various anchors who have signed contracts with various platforms? Or is it that the protagonist regards some of the people in charge of the platform as ***? No, I think those people in charge are ***. Author, why don't you think about it from the perspective of those platforms? What are the platforms about, popularity, fuel, gifts, and making money? There are so many geniuses in the world. You really think that one person designed two heroes, and *** spent so much money to sign him, Okay, there is no way, who made you the protagonist? If you say you want to sign a contract, just sign it. If other game companies don't sign a contract, it's a platform's turn to sign a contract. Well, even if your game company comes to sign a contract later, it won't conflict with the platform. If you write it like this, then just think of me as farting. After all, I only saw Chapter 10 Anyway, as long as you read it carefully, it doesn't take long before you reach Chapter 10 and you will find many, many flaws. Of course, I have read the novel for ten years, so I will be more picky. You can also say that you don't like it and don't read it. What are you trying to do here? I don't want to compare, mainly because I saw what the author wrote? Chapter 7 or 8? Let me remind the author, if you want to make money from novels, then be serious. If you are a part-time job and writing novels is just your hobby, then you can delete me. It doesn't matter if you scold me a few times Okay, anyway, you have to take your time to appreciate what I wrote, instead of reading this comment I wrote with angry and negative thoughts I am not saying anything bad to insult the author I have been a bookworm for ten years. Seeing that you do not take your own novels seriously, what do I really want to say to you? But when I think about it, it has nothing to do with me. If you don't like it, don't read it. I also took this opportunity to tell you, the author But how did you comment on me later? Or delete me, that's fine, I just can't bear to see your own attitude towards your own works

The background was changed to say that Blizzard is dead, or it didn't make Warcraft 3. In other words, there is no game in the world like Warcraft that amplifies the concept of heroes. The person who proposed the concept of heroes in China was the Three Kingdoms. If there was only StarCraft, then there would only be a prototype of the moba game. RTS games require too much talent. Proposing the concept of heroes is a completely new concept. Then even if there are only more than 40 heroes in LOL in your book, it can still become popular all over the world. Because there is no moba game derived from Warcraft 3, the emergence of LOL can really defeat the world. So this will lead to many games not existing, and you can steal ideas at will. This is a chain of events. If Warcraft 3 exists, then because of the hero concept, the moba concept will appear in the Warcraft 3 map editor, and more than 40 will not be enough to fight. Plan away Warcraft 3, a series of chain reactions. So why are you still clinging to the original LOL settings? The few LOL 40 heroes in your book are because the game company is not creative enough. Once the protagonist opens the box. Then a lot of stuff will appear. By the way, LOL Monkey is really rubbish, can't you change it? Also, if you don't join Tencent or Riot Games, designing heroes will be completely out of your control. When you open this box, the ability to associate with others will come to you. In the past, there was not enough material, but now, there are too many things, so why do you care?

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​        ，，，"～"        ：， Zed, what happened? (This is a tribute to the double calamity battle between Faker and Yue Lun) The calamity that met the SKT skin: Now I am at another peak! (Referring to dance) Ridicule of Zed with other skins: You only have "shadow", not my "flow" Meeting Shen for the first time: Look, Shen, guess what happened to me? The first time I met Jhin: Your art is as ridiculous as dirt in my opinion The first time I met Kayn: Be optimistic about Kayn, this is the true meaning of Shadow Stream The first time I met the captain: Is this your excuse for breaking up with Illaoi? Meeting Tam for the first time: King of the River? Ha... Hahahaha that's ridiculous, have you ever heard of... Love river? Mocking Silas: No! You can't learn it!        …

Let's not talk about anything else. There is nothing wrong with this book except that it is too short. There are fewer and fewer novels that I am interested in. I'll update it soon.

Is the original design draft really that good? The A station (foreign original painting website) (big game companies are recruiting people there) is waiting for you The design is very good? I can't even copy the template I gave you Yes, I am another person who is reborn and brings his own printer to print out his brain stuff The original painting of the art student painting is still the art promotion + design If you say the original painting of the art student painting is OK Without going to the training class You have three major art academies Which one Study oil painting Outstanding grades? You said you study design, you need to be extremely outstanding in college Otherwise, no matter how interesting your design is, it will be useless Why don't you put this original painting by a top manufacturer Let's put it here I just draw the original painting for games

I just read the first five chapters. How can I say, there are no poisonous points, but I feel that the story develops too fast, a bit too fast in terms of creation and communication. The characters are college students. I did not see the help of Goldfinger when making the video. Maybe I missed it, but the designed hero video started from The dubbing and picture quality are all top-notch, and the video distribution is also very smooth. The overall feeling to me is that I am rushing to catch up with the progress of the story. Maybe the author's writing outline is like this, and I want to see the writing be more detailed. Of course, the author cannot satisfy everyone's opinions. I am just sharing my own opinions. Such subject matter is very rare, I hope the author can write it well.

The author's writing style is really good, and the description is okay, but the timeline is a bit messy. It feels like everything that happened to the protagonist happened in one day, which is too rushed.

You can break it off. The main plot is important, but it can't go on all the time. The protagonist is a student. It's good to write about campus life. But if you don't go on, you're just here to slap the school beauties in the face. If you go to a bar and get into trouble, the protagonist finds someone to solve the drama of dressing up. Everyone has been to school, and a serious campus life is fine. I haven't seen the protagonist attend class. It seems that the protagonist has been on the cusp of being in the spotlight since time travel. I wonder which character has such treatment. But the writing is still very good. Old bookworms can also read it, of course. Those who take away extreme realism cannot be counted. Novices can also read it, and it is refreshing. My personal immature opinion, don't comment if you don't like it (I say this out of respect for the author. Those keyboard warriors who say that if you know it is immature, don't write it, go read more novels while you have time. Don't waste my time)

There is a problem with the settings. If there are no heroes and no modes, the settings will be tmx. If there are no heroes and no modes, tell me how you can reach S10.

League of Legends is a project, a game project of Riot Games. Do you think people who are not from their company can upload heroes? . It doesn't match Tencent.

He doesn't talk much and gets straight to the point at the beginning. Good review! I hope I can get good results, come on💪Persistence is victory, Oli

At least in deadgame, players design accessories in the creative workshop. It is also a vote. If you don't go to the official website, what's the use of TikTok? What's the use of designing a hero in a video without adding skills? What's the use of being handsome? If you design a skill and Tencent copies it, you can still be justified. If you only have a video, who will catch you? First have a rough background setting, give the skill setting range, then make a hero, and then modify it. It seems that the case of Zhiruthornzhixing has been abolished. You just have a character model and a bunch of lines to be funny, right? When Tencent asks you for the original case, do you have it? Do you have a hair? Tencent can also sue you for plagiarism if you copy it. You don't have a design process, and if you don't have an original plan, it's just a joke. By the way, the monkey in the national server is just a monkey. He is not worthy of the name of a great sage. He is too incompetent. I thought you could reset it and why would you set up such an incompetent hero?

How do I feel about this book? If the progress is not fast, there seems to be nothing to write about. After all, it is not about gaming. .

I thought I was traveling through time as a designer, but I ended up working on it for a long time and posted the design draft online to attract official attention. I thought it was too simple. There are many Internet masters, and there are also many good ideas and inspirations. This method is really effective. Believe it or not, there are a lot of heroes on the Internet the next day who are more brilliant than the official design.

I was successfully persuaded to quit after reading book reviews🤭🤭🤭

This book is so pretentious that it's so awesome that you can't get into it, you know? As a player who is still struggling in Bronze, I simply cannot achieve what is called a 1000-point king. And with this system, the entrance is the peak? There is rubbish before the system, and there is the peak after the system? This is too much

Even a layman like me knows how difficult it is to make videos, so I spent this afternoon

Heroes don't need to be released quickly. Designing a hero does not mean having a story, an original painting, skill introductions, and that's it. Draw it on the computer. Make it with CG. Skills, actions, skill special effects. Hero balance issues. Hero skill bonuses. Skill damage. All-round design. After it's done, test it to find bugs. After everyone reads it and thinks it's good, pass it. Then give a CG preview and put the hero on the shelves within 1 week. This adds up to several chapters of plot, which are in the process of being released, but there are also several chapters for players to play. This will not make readers feel that the heroes are released too fast, nor will it make readers feel that the author is in a hurry.

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I'm a eunuch. You don't need to read the brothers behind me.

Come on, the votes have been given. I also know that it is not easy for authors. I downloaded an author assistant just after nine o'clock. I have been typing on my mobile phone until now I typed out a chapter and tried it. I found that it is really not that easy for authors to code. There are too many to take care of. Some people say that there is no way for authors to do anything. It is all dry stuff. It's really not easy for other computer writers. I don't know the speed of coding, but there is one thing that every writer will definitely do, that is, for each paragraph of code, he has to look through the previous ones to see if there are any missing sentences or typos. I would like to say thank you to the author for your hard work. I hope you can persevere.

Um, I drew the Yasuo CG in one day, and the protagonist is a humanoid printer? Then post it online for a few days and become popular all over the Internet? There must be a limit to your dreams. You should be able to read this book without using your brain. If you read it with some brain, you will be poisoned, believe me. I slipped away

The investment is gone😭, where did you go, author😭