Starting from the Destruction of Shushan

Since the destruction of Shushan, I thought I would directly follow the path of the Sword Immortal. Let's see if entering martial arts now means taking the path of martial arts. And it doesn't feel like a Shushan disciple who has been practicing for six years, but more like someone who has just traveled through time.

I was also puzzled, why? As long as it is Zhu Tianwen, you must first brush it up in Wuxia. You are an immortal cultivator, so running to Wuxia will be useful. Why don't you go to Gaowu? Go to Swordsman, Godly Eagle, and the like.

Don't complain, Shushan disciples worship Dugu Qiubai as their teacher, he is still a person with Shushan heritage. What does the author think? Is the martial arts of Xianxia inferior to that of martial arts?

Take the Demon Locking Tower to a martial arts world without demons? After reading the first 20 or 30 chapters of Water This book is actually better to be set as an ordinary disciple of Shushan, with a certain ability to subjugate demons, and then travel through the demon locking tower to a world with monsters and monsters to subdue demons. It can be any zombie, monster, or zombie. What does it mean to travel through a divine eagle?

The idea is great, but the spirituality is not good. The protagonist feels like a puppet tightly tied with silk threads. After reading more than 30 chapters, the protagonist gives readers the feeling that he has no goals and no ideals, as if he is playing a game. , Although the writing is very good, the plot is too bland. I hope the author can describe less about martial arts and more about artistic conception. Shushan Swordsman has an ethereal artistic conception. He specializes in the lineage of immortals. He is a swordsman who practices spiritual energy. He needs to be unrestrained, pure and pure, and at the same time, he is a Taoist who has to kill evil and eliminate darkness. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

How can Big Brother's martial arts skills suppress Xianxia Think about it carefully

The protagonist is a good disciple of Shushan and has complete introductory skills, but he actually apprentices to Dugu Qiufei?

I just started reading it, and I have to say that the author made the wrong choice in the first world. One look at the protagonist's golden finger and one can tell that the core idea is to destroy demons and monsters. But if the protagonist goes to the human world and goes against people, that is inferior. The protagonist's first world is a world where spiritual energy is revived, or a world where demons are rampant in the Republic of China. It is a good thing to eliminate the little demons and monsters. It will be a bad start and it will be difficult to improve.

The writing is passable, but there is a problem at the front. Shushan Changjiao can take the protagonist's soul through time and space. After time travel, the protagonist can borrow his corpse to bring back his soul, why can't the Shushan Changjiao, who is still the original god, be able to do it?

If you want to be famous in the world, want to be famous in a world filled with ghosts and ghosts, want to become an immortal and an ancestor in a world that moves mountains and seas... Please leave the name of the Xia Mingxian downstairs, as well as the world level (such as martial arts, demons, myths). Arrange one by one. (⊙v⊙)

Chapter 10 was just to show off. In the world of martial arts, all you see is fights and interactions with the characters in the original plot. In the end, I wrote a lot of inexplicable nonsense.

Are you a fairy and a martial artist? Those who have no skills and have skills are at the lowest level. The real top level is to learn from nature and take heaven and earth as their teachers.

There must be a female protagonist. Try to include some in every world.

The author hopes that when leaving the inheritance, he will not accept aliens as his disciples. Thank you.

The world of immortals goes to the world of martial arts to bully people. There are martial arts and immortals, but there are no immortals.

Recommended from Winter Sun! 🤓 I don't dare to read it! You've cheated on two books and this one is gone!

The story is good but weird, and it doesn't feel like a fairy tale. What I want to see is the carefreeness of immortals, not the sophistication of people in the world. But it's also a good book

It looks good so far. The author has made up the plot after the Divine Condor and before Yitian by himself. He is also a talented person. I just hope that the author can grasp the rhythm well. After all, you are planning to write about the world. It is already so long. When the protagonist proves to be the Daluo Sword Immortal, it will be too long 🤫. There is no need to stay in one world for too long. Chapters. Also, I personally feel that if the protagonist doesn't intend to leave Shushan Daotong in this plane, he shouldn't spread the techniques casually. Otherwise, you will give others the feeling of being a prodigal and selling your father's land without heartache. Overall, it's pretty good. I hope the author can keep it up and avoid any obvious poisonous points. Just like when holding the dragon-slaying sword, the protagonist is either on the verge of being beaten, or is being beaten. It got better after I got the sword. It felt like I was fighting against the knife, but I was still targeted by the plane consciousness. After all, the protagonist has always wanted to smelt the dragon-slaying knife. The plane consciousness must be offended. If you want to melt the knife for me, how can I develop the story of Heavenly Dragon Slaying 😁

It's quite good. Don't forget about the eunuch. There aren't many interesting novels these days.

I just collected it, and then I found that the author's name is familiar... Don't ask me why it's familiar... It's so impressive 🙂

Chapters 98 to 101 are very interesting 🙂

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The writing is good, keep it up, I would like to give you 8 recommendation votes.