Invincible Orange Cat Online Super God

I read it online on a certain website and clicked in without any hope. I found that the ideas in the first chapter were really good and made me laugh several times. Unfortunately, I don't play LOL, so I really didn't understand the game part, so I had to skip and read it. The name Bingkuoluo is a problem mentioned by some big guys If I have to talk about the problem, I suggest you try to write it in smaller paragraphs, so that it can be written smoothly and it is not easy to make grammatical errors. Other than this, I don't see any big problems. I really like the plot. But it's still early, but I think it's very innovative to write about pets that help their owners to gain points, and they actually enter the game to gain points. I'm really tired of the system articles everywhere, but this wave of system articles is coming soon... We are also passing by the Orange Cat Party. I also have a novel that was posted the day before yesterday and is still being reviewed today. It is also about an orange cat (that's why I clicked in after seeing his answers and your questions on the Toad homepage). If it's reviewed, you're welcome to give me your comments. I think my problems are quite big, but when it comes to writing about cats, just think of it as a matter of love (although I've done a lot of talking about it in the previous ten chapters) Cat King writes very little,😭) I feel like I also have innovation problems. The first chapter is the hardest to revise, especially if I write too much and I can't see the problem. The pace is really difficult. In today's fast pace, the first 2000 words will lose a lot of explosive points. If you don't figure it out well, it will be a disaster... Let's work together. Come on, author~ヾ(=°･°=)ﾉ