Dou Po Starts with Signing In

All the heroines appear, many collections

Still writing? I think the next world can be about Wu Dong Qian Kun

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Not to become an immortal, just to wait for your return in this mortal world! The Ruthless Emperor

This book has detailed bugs. The Dou Emperor bloodline of the Soul Clan has long since dried up. The bloodlines currently used are all extracted from the Dou Emperor survivors they raised in captivity through the Void Swallowing Flame. The Second Soul Emperor has only one son. For reference, Gu Yuan only had one daughter a thousand meters away. You think the Emperor of Soul is a breeding pig and you are still thirteen?

Why write about Xiao Xun'er? What about writing it again? Are there no women in the Soul Clan? When the Soul Clan meets other tribes, you will die or I will die. Another one who turns the enemy into a harem

I read more than a dozen pictures and I don't know what to write. I was given the identity of the Soul Clan, but also gave a restriction. I couldn't borrow the power of the Soul Clan, so why write this identity? It's better to just write down your identity casually

A 6-year-old milk baby wanders around and flirts with girls everywhere. The 6-year-old flirts with girls, the 7-year-old pretends to be a slap in the face, and the 8-year-old fools around with girls. What the hell kind of setting is this?

After reading two or three chapters, you poisoned your mother to death. Is this the patriarch's son that you just laugh at casually? And he also said that he would kill him. Damn it, wouldn't that be a slap in the face of the Soul Emperor?

Did the author forget that Xiao Xun'er is only 5 or 6 years old? Xiao Xun'er is too smart now.

If the author doesn't know how to write, don't write randomly. He's not even as good as a three-year-old child.

Has the protagonist had enough life? Why does he want Tuoshe Ancient Emperor Jade? If he wants to do it openly and honestly, can he keep it? Want to die early? There's something wrong with my brain

I thought there would be some surprise when I saw the Soul Clan start, but I was disappointed. I want to see nothing despicable, sinister and cunning. Just go back to the old path of the original work. The most reasonable novel from the perspective of the Soul Clan that I have read is "Dou Po: Soul Clan Imperial Master". I suggest the author refer to other people's writing styles to see what constitutes a qualified villain.

It's not brainless, it's just brainless writing.

The style is too old, I am a novice in writing style, and I feel very self-indulgent.

It's a waste material at the beginning, I suspect that the author is the half-brother of Xiaoyan

But author, can't you change the male protagonist's physique? This ancient holy body can cover the sky, and it can cover the entire world.

I have written more than 40 pictures, and I am still six years old 🥵 I think I am invincible at ten years old.

Alas, it looks like a mess. The main character is frivolous and lacks IQ. I can't stand the writing. There are a lot of poisonous points.

The biggest failure is that the description of the time span is too confusing. The period of fighting spirit at the age of 6. In less than a year, the Soul Clan, Zhongzhou, Xiao Family, Black Corner Domain, Qingshan Town, Snake Clan, and Yunlan Mountain Xiao family, you may not have enough time to travel. You have reached level 33 in less than a year. You can even arrange it for about 3 years. The heroine of Doupo was teased all over in less than a year when she was 6 years old. That family let a 6-year-old come out to practice. I am speechless. You can accept it even if you set it to be more than 10 years old. It is extremely poisonous.

The writing is okay, but it's abusive. Then stallion. So rubbish!

The Soul Emperor is more than three thousand years old, and the Xiao family has been destroyed for almost a hundred thousand years. However, his son is only six or seven years old. Besides, is it too early for a six or seven-year-old child to break into the mainland? Is it possible that at the age of eleven or twelve, the protagonist should be sent to Dou Di?

The comment section I read turned out to be a waste article. In fact, it is not heavy if it is waste? The important thing is not to be a post official. I read too many post posts and it's boring. I wanted to try something new to change my appetite. But when I saw it, the comment section was full of rubbish. Post officials are disgusting. That's about it. I don't want to waste my time.

The whole thing is just two words, very poor, I have nothing to say, this book really disgusted me, I don't know why they have so many good reviews, but I was really disgusted

It's better to read the original work and get rid of the rubbish.

There are indeed remarkable things about this book. What moved me the most was the love between Wu Song and Diao Chan. In order to save Wang Mang, Zhang Fei did not hesitate to turn against his sworn brother, the Golden Retriever Lion King Xie Xun. Especially when I read that Guo Jing gave up the sun and moon god. It made me cry when I resolutely wandered around the world with the gentleman Jian Yue Buqun. Linghu Chong participated in the anti-Japanese war to avenge his father. Dong Zhuo transformed into a master and destroyed the Tiandihui, Honghuahui and other forces in one fell swoop. Jinlun Dharma King Yi defended Xiangyang.

It's not that I don't understand. What's the use of traveling through so many worlds?

After reading the previous free chapters, to be honest: the writing is really good!

It seems like all those who write about fights are Xun'er?

The book is indeed good, but there are some martial arts and fighting skills in the book that the author just mentioned. I didn't see it later