Douluo Dalu: The Demon God Returns, Slaying Hu Liena from the Start
斗罗：魔神归来，开局斩杀胡列娜
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 229k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
110Chapters
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It was really embarrassing to argue with Hu Liena and Bibi Dong. They chopped off their hands and feet, gouged out their eyes, injected copper into their ears, poured medicine into their throats, cut off their tongues, damaged their vocal cords, making them unable to speak, and then threw them into the toilet. (The Rakshasa Spider King is a perfect match for the toilet)
What are you writing? It's not embarrassing for a titled Douluo to argue with Hu Liena.
Very poor writing
As the title says, there is a big problem with the author's writing. I like both the outline and the plot of the book, but the author's writing is crappy. I don't want to buy the later chapters either. Let's talk about it in detail. It's too verbose. I believe I have the same opinion as most people. What's there to say to Titled Douluo? Just slap him to death. What nonsense? There is a big problem with the names of the characters. Qianxunguang is the chief of the Judgment Hall, Hu Liena, the Chrysanthemum Pass, ghosts and the like are all called by their names directly. In the original work, the Wuhun Palace is all about hierarchy, whether you are a saint or a platinum bishop. This is very poorly handled In addition, Pope Bibi Dong is injured. So why does the saint directly call her the pope? What about the pope's crown in the original work? You don't even have such a respectful title. You saint, you are so ambitious. The protagonist is the son of Qian Daoliu, but he doesn't get a trace of respect in this Wuhun Palace. He is such a waste. What else are you writing? The Elder's Hall has taken refuge with Bibi Dong, but there is no Enshrinement Hall. So, such a good subject is written in such a poor way by the author's writing style. I can only say, stop writing, stop writing.
The hammer written by me does not have the strong character that a strong man should have.
Modern people are so violent, but society has not smoothed you out yet.
There is no strong character at all!