The Immortal Who Walks in the Heavens

The biggest problem with this kind of novel is that the protagonist often lives for tens of thousands of years, but ends up acting like a junior high school student.

It was a bit novel at the beginning, but it was full of flaws after the release of the first Goldfinger Flower of Life. However, I could still watch it at this time, but by the time the second Flower of Time and Space came out, I completely lost my desire to watch it.

Fellow Taoists, the tense and exciting adventure in the heavens is about to begin. I have specially selected a few worlds, and you fellow Taoists can choose as much as you like. First, the world of Xian Qin is related to Tianxing Qin Shi, but it can be regarded as its own semi-original world. Second, the Three Kingdoms of Gods and Demons, as everyone should know from the name, two clans of gods and demons compete for hegemony. Third, the multi-dimensional martial arts alliance brings together a large group of martial arts characters in one world. Fourth, the multi-dimensional world of Chinese comics can be mixed or singled out. It is up to you to specify. I have read very few Japanese comics, so I will not add them. Fifth, in the world of Zhetian, the timeline will be chosen in the era of mythology, the era of the Void Emperor, and the final golden age. Sixth, the ancillary world of Journey to the West is not the universe of Journey to the West, but an ancillary world like the Westward Journey series. In addition, I would like to explain that the level of the Westward Journey universe I set should be quite high, and it is not the traditional Westward Journey world. The most important thing is that this Westward Journey has nothing to do with the prehistoric times. Seventh, the ancient wild world is not the prehistoric world, but a story about the ancient human race. This is my original creation, but I cannot guarantee how well it will be written. Please consider it carefully, fellow Taoists. Eighth, the Lord God Space, everyone should know this, so I won't say more about it. Ninth, the world of American comics is dominated by Marvel and supplemented by DC. The worlds mentioned above will all be high-level worlds. If the level is not high enough, I will magically change them to a high-level world. I won't write about Douluo and Dou Po because I'm not very familiar with the two books. I won't write about Honghuangliu for the time being, but I should write about it in the future. This is my tentative world. Fellow Taoists, you can leave me a message if you want to see it. I will consider it as appropriate. This is not a courtesy, but true.

I can only give you this suggestion: it is a semi-original and semi-fantasy world from the beginning (the basic world is not included). If it is tepid and cannot retain readers, your setting world will only have a lot of things. Just like that thing, the first world you travel to will come up. If it is tepid and cannot retain readers, because in this kind of world, the first world is the most important.

There is a common problem with books of this kind. They are hundreds of thousands of years old, and their minds are not much higher than those of elementary school students. A pig has become a spirit after living for so long, and a person can go back and forth after such a long time. This is a flaw, okay? It is a strong dissuasion attribute.

Not getting married and having children is bad enough, so let's just treat the protagonist as devoted to the Tao. Looking at the author's intention, is he planning to let the protagonist fall in love?

Actually, I feel like the protagonist of this type of novel is right? If you can't die, there shouldn't be a heroine, because the time you have to be together is forever. Then maybe your relationship will remain the same for thousands of years, tens of thousands or even hundreds of thousands of years, but what about tens of millions of years later? You should still do this! So having a female protagonist is a complete failure. I have read a novel before, in which the protagonist travels into the Coiling Dragon. Then the author wrote it very well. The protagonist finally became the controller of Hongmeng, but they also have a heroine. They arranged the heroine so that after tens of millions of years, they will no longer care about anything between the heroine and the descendants, because there is no longer any feelings, because time can smooth everything.

Author, why do I feel that the protagonist you created is so childish? When his wife goes to a secret realm to get him the Fruit of Creation, the protagonist reacts so childishly? This is what you have lived for a hundred thousand years? Taiyin Yuehua stopped him, and he said that Taiyin Yuehua could not stop him. There were only two results, either he used his trump card to find his wife, or he was suppressed by Yuehua. The result? Fighting for a long time is of no use. As a result, his wife came back and brought him the Creation Fruit. He asked why he did this? Is the protagonist a pig? Are you sure you wrote it correctly? Did the protagonist live for a hundred thousand years instead of just ten months? This is the mentality that lasts a hundred thousand years?

The level of Qidian's readers is increasing, and the level of authors is declining. I'm afraid this first reading platform will disappear.

The ancestors should do what the ancestors do. The other version of the starting point, the ancestors, was good at the beginning but completely changed in the end. It is rampant in the world. The ancestors are shit

The author said that the introduction is weakπ_πIt is true that the introduction is weak, not only the introduction is weak, but the content is also weak. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I was persuaded to give up. I don't know why I wrote it. What the hell.

The first one or two chapters at the beginning felt okay, but later on it felt a bit depressing and wordy, and your schemes and tricks were immediately seen through by others. The most important thing is that after living for 100,000 years, even if you cut off some memories, many will remain in your mind. In the sea, but I can't feel the breath he left behind. It's like a contemporary. There is no so-called eternal transmission. Some different places and writing methods need to be improved. It would be better if it could be written like a perfect world covering the sky. Unfortunately, it is still a little bit behind.

For 200 points, I would also like to say that this author is the most capable guy I saw at the beginning. He only crossed the 666 sea in 20 or so photos. You are really cool. After reading the comments, there is a heroine who doesn't know how to write emotional scenes. It's embarrassing. And a pig's feet can live for tens of thousands of years. It's not mature at all.

I understand, why do you authors insist on having an apprentice or a junior or something like that before you have written a lot of books? Moreover, I have heard others say that among the ten characteristics of online writing, one of them is the preference for girls over boys. I didn't believe it before, but now I do.

I have read a novel called "Time Stopped for Five Hundred Years". Although it is not a good book, the character of the protagonist in it seems to me to be quite good. He is plain and calm. He watches the world like a bystander and explores the secrets of the world as a passer-by.

I read the chapters after time travel in three seconds because there are really no highlights.

Stallion? What the hell is Yuehua? Poisonous? Ask the boss to clarify my doubts

I have no money, so someone comes and burns me for the author's amusement, and then adds more

I was confused after reading this book. It seems that I don't have enough moral principles. I'll say goodbye😪

It can be said that the protagonist is a large tool man, and his destiny is controlled by others. What is the meaning of a puppet protagonist? He has been practicing for 100,000 years and has been trained by others for 300 years. It is more than that. After reading this novel, my good mood was ruined. I want to criticize the author.

Traveling through Xianqin doesn't feel attractive at all. . . I had no desire to watch it at all. I liked it earlier, but when I saw it, I had to travel through Xianqin. . . I don't want to read it, and the pre-Qin period is so long that I didn't reach the next world in the end. Of course, this is just a personal opinion and does not represent everyone, but there are definitely some people who don't like this world. I hope the author will move to the next world quickly, so that more people will like it. I hope it gets better and better in the future.

I like it a lot. Although we are poor, come and give me a reward.

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This book is also called "The Biography of Zhutian Winery" "Undercovers, they are all undercovers, there are always people who want to harm me" "Self-cultivation of the Movie King" "Lyp's Journey" "A few things about people around me who are young people" "The King of Soft Rice" "About the life of a younger brother who is better than me"

Why did it stop updating? What happened

Three whole days, how should I put it~

I feel like I can read it, so I checked the update speed. One hundred thousand words a month, three thousand words a day, so little! Afraid of not being able to wait

I feel like Chen Luo should be the Taoist himself, otherwise it wouldn't make sense! 😎

It's so unexpected. I'm traveling through time all of a sudden. What the hell, I'm sorry for bothering you.

The introduction says it's a slow burn, can anyone tell me from which chapter I can skip the slow burn?