The Eternal Life Seeker Who Walks the Heavens

The biggest problem with this kind of novel is that the protagonist often lives for tens of thousands of years, but his behavior and mentality are like that of a middle school student.

It was somewhat novel at first, but it was full of flaws from the first cheat, the Flower of Life, but it was still watchable until the second cheat, the Flower of Time and Space, came out, and I completely lost the desire to continue watching.

Fellow Daoists, the thrilling and exciting grand adventure across the heavens is about to begin. I have specially selected several worlds for you fellow cultivators to choose from. First, the world of Immortal Qin is related to the world of Qin Shi Huang, but it is a semi-original world of its own. Second, the Three Kingdoms of Gods and Demons.

My advice for this project is this: if you start with a semi-original, semi-fanfiction world (excluding the base world), it will be lukewarm and won't retain readers. If your world setting is full of problems, like a troublesome mother, and the first world you travel to is also lukewarm, it won't retain readers. Because for this kind of multiverse story, the first world is the most important.

Books of this genre generally suffer from a problem: people who are hundreds or thousands of years old have mental abilities that are not much higher than those of elementary school students. A pig that has lived that long would become a spirit, but a person who has lived that long seems to be getting worse. This is a fatal flaw, a major turn-off.

Not getting married and having children is bad enough, but let's just say the protagonist is single-mindedly pursuing Taoism. Does this author intend to have the main characters fall in love again?

Actually, I feel that in this type of novel, the protagonist, right? He can't die, so there shouldn't be a female lead. Because the time you're together is forever, maybe thousands, tens of thousands, even hundreds of thousands of years, and your feelings are still the same. But what about tens of millions of years later? You'll still be the same! So having a female lead is a complete flaw.

Author, why do I feel like the protagonist you've created is so childish? His wife goes to the secret realm to retrieve the Creation Fruit for him, and the protagonist's reaction is so immature? After living for a hundred thousand years, this is all he's got? When the Moonlit Flower tries to stop him, he says it can't stop him.

The quality of readers on Qidian is increasing, while the quality of authors is declining. This might mean the end of Qidian's reign as the leading online reading platform.

Ancestors should do what ancestors did. Another book on Qidian, "Ancestors," started off well but completely changed later on; it just became about rampaging through the heavens. Ancestors my foot!