Known as the Konoha Death God

As long as there is Naruto, there will be Danzo. If there is Danzo, there will be that sentence, Hiruzen, you will regret it, no matter, which dynamic novel are you in? Wherever there is Naruto, there will be him

Originally, I was a little interested when I saw that the heroine was Tsunade, but it turned out... The 6-year-old male protagonist slept with the heroine... And fell asleep... But I wouldn't write something like this with enough effort. I've withdrawn it, and it's a waste of my time.

Let me see if more people like harems or single heroines! Comments went crazy! ! !

Is this the mentality of an adult? I saw 36 poisonous cards, and their strength was completely substandard. The first few cards said they couldn't beat the Jonin, so they just rushed into the Sand Ninja Village? Could it be that if one of the five major ninja villages went to war, everyone above the jounin level would be pulled out? No one left to guard the house at all? It was mentioned in itself that the Jinchuuriki is old and will die soon, right? As a strategic weapon, no one is guarding it? Let's talk about Tsunade's plot. The old cow eats the young grass, which directly leads to the embarrassment of cancer. This book is purely the author's obscenity

When I saw the two Dragon Team members, I left. I thought about it and I had to complain about it. What era is it? The term "Huanlong Team" was already heavily criticized when it came out. How dare you still use it? Haha 🤭 It's so embarrassing.

I read Chapter 19 and it was quite interesting, but there were a lot of minor issues. For example, the chakra test paper should not be able to test the yin and yang attributes. For example, the sword that the protagonist fights is so difficult, why did he switch to the Kingdom of Iron to fight? A country of craftsmen, right? Also Danzo has always wanted the protagonist to go to the root, but the protagonist Tsunade's apprentice, a proper member of the Hokage line, and a disciple of the third generation. Would Danzo do such an irrational thing? It seems like Kushina can't leave the village, right? Even battlefield logistics should not be allowed. Wait, some of these are errors and some are questionable.

Brother, the writing of your book is really difficult to describe in words. After reading dozens of chapters, I was completely distorted and changed beyond recognition. Read more books written by other people and take them as a reference.

Haha

I feel like the protagonist is very stupid and is nothing but strong. He looks like a character played by others.

Mustard with chili! The humblest author ever! I will carefully read the messages from all readers! I also accept everyone's opinions! I will accept criticism sincerely! The humble author sincerely apologizes for what he wrote there that made everyone unhappy! It's Mustard's fault! If this humble author goes out on the street, will someone risk my life to kill me? Haha, it's impossible to rush into the street! The most humble author in history, Mustard with Chili, has a final word to say, it's so fun to peel it off! Hahaha. 🙂

I only read about 30 chapters and I was beaten to death. I really couldn't resist it. It was so poisonous.

What the hell are special genin and special chunin? I just started watching and you fed me a piece of shit

I've never seen Naruto wearing a ball!

As soon as I clicked in, I saw that the protagonist was the captain of a dragon group and immediately didn't want to read anymore.

Speaking of words, these first few chapters can poison people to death

It's so poisonous. When I saw all the functions of Dharma Eye and told Tsunade, I stopped watching. I'm going to die.

Chapter 31: I really can't stand it anymore. Retreat. It's toxic and embarrassing.

He is already dead. If there are other brothers who fall into the trap, remember to burn the paper. Bye.

Read this book without thinking. The people inside are all mentally retarded.

The heroine…

Is the third generation a pot shadow? I feel like it was made by the third generation.

! ! ! First of all, let me state that I read the original version It looked good in the early stage and felt chaotic and rushed in the later stage. It was unspeakably uncomfortable. I don't think I can hold on anymore. I hope your writing can improve in the future ! ! ! Note, I am not looking down on the author, I just have a taste for food In the end, although I can't hold on anymore, I will continue to give monthly passes and recommendations. I'm not sure how long I will persist.

After reading Chapter 22, I'm full

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

Looking at the introduction, well... I really haven't watched Naruto that much.

Invulnerable to all poisons, I finished reading the free chapter and left.

I hope the author also writes the biography of Fu Ren

? It's outrageous that you are in your 20s (*´◐∀◐`*)

Why is your Douluo missing?