Hunting Protagonists in One Piece

I was speechless and impatient while reading this book. Let's not talk about the pitfalls of the system. It forces the protagonist to do this and that, and also weakens the protagonist in various ways. Every time he fights, the protagonist is almost dying, and then wins again. My liver hurts from watching it. The writing was too urgent, as if it was shoehorned in to make the protagonist stronger in various ways. Then the fight was still very reluctant. This power system is also cheating. Dragon Ball system, I won't talk about its combat power. It's hard to fight a Demon Slayer dungeon. The writing is too far-fetched. It doesn't look like a refreshing article, and it doesn't look like an abusive article. The main character is so awesome that he won't be able to defeat the enemy the next time he meets him... I don't even know what to say.

I think this must be the heroine 😏

You can design some supporting characters such as reincarnations, time travelers, reborns, etc., As well as various cheats. The other thing is the rewards and punishments that Pig's Foot Flying Chess can draw. You can talk about any mess. As long as you can't think of anything, it's time to test everyone's abnormality. Let's see who is the most perverted. As long as he defeats me, my farmer will call him the king of perverts with one punch.

There will be some spoilers on this floor, so passersby beware. It is not recommended to read this book if you like the setting of normal people.

I don't know why, but the protagonist of this book makes me feel like he is an extremely perverted person. Not to mention dark and non-dark stories, the Samsara Paradise next door is also dark. Why is it not so uncomfortable to read that book? In fact, most people who feel uncomfortable watching it are because the protagonist kills people who trust them and are in a friendly camp with them. This makes readers feel a sense of betrayal in their hearts and a feeling of shame for the protagonist because they are brought in. In Demon Slayer, this feeling reaches its peak. If you have to kill everyone of value from the beginning. Those who are worthy can join the third camp besides the good and evil camp. (For example, in Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, you can join the neon official. Was Japan really weak at that time? It must be better than Demon Slayer Corps.) As long as the protagonist does not have emotional intersections with the characters, this uncomfortable feeling can be reduced a lot I hope the author can see what I said.

So many people say that the main reason for your lottery is that the income and rewards do not match. After killing so many protagonists, you will give some scraps. People watching don't feel uncomfortable. After all, how can the protagonist or character they like be worth so much? And now the protagonist is basically unkillable. Even if you kill the protagonist, you will get a lot of things. However, it will suddenly be different for you. It will feel very uncomfortable. It is difficult to have a sense of immersion in the protagonist. Even if you suddenly feel refreshed and have a sense of involvement, being disgusted by your lottery will make it difficult to continue watching.

I think the setting of the cheat is completely ok ① This cheat was so rubbish at lv1, I think it may be screening people. Low martial arts, medium martial arts, and high martial arts allow the protagonist to experience the past in a certain order. If the rewards are too generous and the protagonist's combat power exceeds the ceiling, the purpose of experience will not be achieved So as the world level increases, the golden finger rewards will become more and more generous to ensure that the protagonist's combat power is at a certain level Long Aotian (recommended in the comment section) who only knows how to activate the game will most likely be killed by the protagonist who has endured hardships all the way during the decisive battle ②The life span is compressed within a few years. This proves that Goldfinger purposefully promotes the development of the protagonist and is relatively ruthless ③ Almost all the props drawn are useful

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How should I put it? It's mainly because the author didn't portray it well. It was still usable in One Piece at the beginning, but I couldn't live long, so I had to live a little longer with extreme ideas like killing the protagonist. But in Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, it's a bit too outrageous. The protagonist loves each other and wants to kill the female character he likes. He can kill the original female character if he wants to, but he doesn't say no. But they were nice and didn't hurt you. It's really hard for you to deceive your feelings and then trick them into death. It's okay for you to kill people just to survive, but if you kill all these good people, the results of your lottery do not match the value of these characters at all. If a dark novel is really about mindlessly killing favorite characters, then it really isn't a good dark novel. Anyway, everything in your lottery is full of garbage. Is it okay if you let go of a few people who have contributed to the protagonist? How can you treat others as tools and kill them immediately after they are no longer useful? You are not in such a critical situation. Even though he was killed by cancer, he still likes to drink and smoke. He doesn't cherish everything he has. Anyway, as long as I live, even if you want to make a great contribution, I will kill you as soon as it is no longer useful, even if you give me a tissue, this feeling is really bad. The protagonist can be ruthless, but there is no need to be so ruthless towards his own people. The good guys were crushed throughout the whole process, and the roots were pulled out in the end. What pissed me off the most is that you killed all the supporting characters in Demon Slayer for the sake of the random world, but it didn't turn into this reward. The co-author's death was in vain, so it's disgusting to let readers know that the protagonist is a WBD? You can wait a month to move to a random world, but the protagonist has to raise the ashes of those little people. The protagonist should be hacked to death by someone else in the end. He has no personality charm at all and would rather die early than live.

This is better,