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How did Su Yanxin get into an Ivy League school? It's a school that even advanced martial artists might not be able to get into. How could someone who wasn't even a beginner martial artist three months ago get in? Even if you're rich, it's useless. The protagonist got in after three months with such a huge cheat code. How did someone who wasn't even as good as the protagonist before get in?

The beginning ruined everything! It described a world of demons and monsters, and killing a demon makes everyone want to vomit? Shouldn't their world be like killing chickens, ducks, dogs, cows, and pigs? Does watching a pig being killed make them want to vomit?

In a world overrun by monsters, are people so tired of watching slaughter that they're sick of it? Are they really that delicate?

Tsk tsk tsk, the plot went wrong from the moment they entered the prestigious school. Does this teacher who treats students like monkeys even deserve to be called a teacher?

Why doesn't the protagonist upgrade that Divine Enlightenment skill? It's so useful.

Well... The main character's abilities are pretty good... The character development is also good... The plot climaxes are good... It's just that the setting... Is a bit inaccurate... There are a few loopholes... Keep it up... Keep trying... Young man...

Why do authors these days love to forcibly lower the intelligence of their protagonists? Just max out their divine enlightenment and everything will be solved! You're just making the readers less intelligent!

It would look much better if you removed words like "cold" and "indifferent".

I dislike systems that include units for numerical values; it makes them seem unnatural. Even just writing a number directly would suffice. Why add units? If it already describes Qi, Blood, and Spirit, why include "Kach"? That's redundant. What system can directly describe Qi, Blood, and Spirit using units?

Reserving a spot is just for the sake of getting full attendance. But it's really annoying that you always reserve this spot without updating it.