Start with the Dragon

The author's book is beautifully written and has great commercial value. If you can keep updating, you will definitely get results.

I read the article and it seemed that it was written with great care. The writing is smooth and talented. Come on.

This book is so well-written, you can tell it's an old author at first glance. 3 votes are given, cheers for the author

Accept it, thank you, the author, please give it a try!

It would be okay if the author writes it for the first time. This book should be used as a writing practice. The perspective changes frequently and there is no continuity. It is very uncomfortable to read in sections (in fact, you can use quotation marks when talking). When browsing quickly, there are often fragments. I have to go back and look carefully. It feels very awkward when I look carefully. All the characters are startled. I have read six chapters and no one has a sense of immersion. Frequent switching between first person and third person often makes it difficult to distinguish the subject. When I read the first chapter, I always felt that there was a deleted prologue, which roughly described how the protagonist's character was formed, how the protagonist came here, and how much the Federation valued this game. But. In addition, I have read at least hundreds of novels with the background of the Federation. The basic backgrounds of science and technology levels are different, and there are several creative ideas that distort the technology tree. For example, why are lunar residents/disabled athletes/foundation-building monks/professional players? The reason comes to this game, because what impact does the protagonist's behavior have, and what is the impact in the end. All of these can increase the sense of substitution. I only read Chapter 7. After reading the shocking title at the end, I probably understood this.

Has anyone read it? Is there still too little written?

Just think of it as a pen practice. Work hard to finish the book.

Be a fool in the early stages! If you treat people like fools, you are facing an invasion. Will you still be able to control the thunder calamity of this world? If the other side can send some people in, it will be good. If you still write that you can master the thunder tribulation, are you treating the readers as fools? You just write an opponent. If you have already mastered the world, then you have to finish it. The opponent can also cause thunder and disaster for you in this world, and the protagonist looks like a fool in the early stage.

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