I Really Am a Heartthrob

When I saw the beginning of the second chapter, I lost all interest. It was all routine, without any creativity. It is normal to only have more than 300 recommendation votes. The author can give up, there is no way to make any money!

This is a good start,,,, singing and singing on the streets alarmed JC's protection, it's really okay 😅

After reading Chapter 45, let me tell you how I feel about the main character frame being a story with multiple female protagonists. I don't object to this as long as the previous one has a relationship basis. There is also the ex-girlfriend of the male protagonist. I don't know what caused the breakup and getting close to this rich second generation, but after seeing so many chapters, this ex-girlfriend always feels a little uncomfortable! It's a bit green tea, but the author didn't write it that way. I always feel that it's still involved with the protagonist. Based on my understanding of the novel, either the ex-girlfriend has something to do or something happened at home and the rich second generation solved it. The scoundrel agreed to be her girlfriend, but the protagonist is a bit passive. There is no problem with other characters. It's just that the 40-year-old diva should not have any feelings or ambiguity with the protagonist and look at the soundproofer. Just don't exaggerate in the later stage. Another suggestion is that the protagonist does not have a golden finger, but comes with gifts from past lives. Remember that the protagonist is an orphan. In fact, you can give him an official boss in the later stage. The protagonist will eventually be someone from the entertainment industry and give him a background. He will not have too much mentality of being fucked by a rich second generation from a media company. I also hope that this rich second generation will be finished as soon as possible. Here is the matter of the ex-girlfriend. If the author wants to write her as the heroine, there must be a perfect explanation. If not, just finish her role as soon as possible.

It's a new year soon. I wish you all a Happy New Year in advance!

I feel that the plot arrangement is too rigid and there is no foreshadowing, giving people the feeling of going here and there.

The protagonist has always been too passive. Although the twists and turns of the plot are more interesting than the simple story, it is unavoidable to continue to abuse the protagonist. The reversal depends on how the author reverses it. There needs to be a climax. If there is no good explanation here, I probably won't be able to watch it. The author thinks carefully and can do more with Xiao Yu. For example, he can make the protagonist suffer more at the police station. In order to sue the benefactor, brother, and alert the Party Central Committee, is this enough of a climax? My personal opinion is for reference only.

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I haven't read the whole story, so I watched it for free. Just two words. (Stiff)

The writing is okay, but when will you take revenge on Deng Yu?

I can't hold on any longer.