Nomenclature of Night

Jiuzi originally wanted to write a passionate fairy tale, a story in which passion accompanies suffering and saves the world step by step. However, the biggest failure was to use the head of the Qing family to eliminate all suffering. That is, what was originally thought to be a chance of survival, turned out to be the big boss transferring the company's assets to his son. Elbow, you know, class divisions have emerged. I, an ordinary civilian reader, feel that Qingchen and I are no longer in the same class. It's like, my brothers had a hard time getting through. Finally, the boss said to the person next to me, ah, this is all arranged by me. If you pass, my family property will be passed on to you. ? ? ? Emotions All the suffering in our world is to achieve your success? With so many people dying in City No. 10, Is this the city Qingchen's father left him intact? In order to keep the building intact, no bombs were dropped and the metal storm was not shut down early. Countless people died in the last step of escaping the city. Isn't it disgusting? Isn't this a steamed bun made of human blood? How many lives are behind Qingchen taking over this "arranged mass worship"? It's written crookedly! You are too soft on the consortium. You gave it to the Qing family. The Li family has too many positive roles! As a result, the consortium is happy and happy, but one person does not dare to use the sword, and the one who uses the sword is Kunlun, who has not written much about it, and is the tool of the Parents' Association. The result is still that one general can achieve great success, and Qingchen himself still rose to power with the blood of civilians and ordinary soldiers. Even if he killed his father with a righteous sword in the end and satisfied his moral integrity, it was useless. The stolen money was still stolen money when it was transferred to the saint. The people in the book may be grateful, but the readers are watching. Qingchen still hasn't escaped from the cage of cannibalism... His rise to power is no different from that of other capitalists. This is no longer a passionate fairy tale! Once this is no longer true, readers' tolerance for the book's weak logic will no longer exist...

We have read all the books, and I ordered them all, but they turned out to be very bad. I really feel that the more I read the original version, the more I will lose. What I am afraid of is this kind of bad later books, but now there are so many bad later books. The first half, or about 2/3, is very exciting. After that, the plot speeds up and I obviously feel that I can't control it. The last 100 chapters feel like a running account. I just fill in the previous holes without caring about logic, and it collapses into a mess. In the end, the feeling given to readers is not that you can't write anymore, but that you don't want to write anymore and it's ruined, which is even more chilling. Looking back, there are many sources of collapse, such as the development of the parent-teacher association, the initiation of quasi-teaching, curse gates and shadow gates, the rules of forbidden objects, the technology tree of cyberpunk, and even the existence of artificial intelligence such as One. The logic in the early stage was relatively tight, and the writing style was relatively relaxed. It passed after a quick glance. However, when suffering was imposed for the growth of the protagonist later, many things changed. The first thing to bear the brunt is the core idea of ​​knights. Knights are romantic and pure. When Mr. Li died, he obviously felt that he was going to continue on the core ideas of "romance" and "redemption", but later he turned to revolution, causing the life and death of pursuing romance and passionate life to become a shackles like a mission. In the end, the collective jumping out of planes of the new generation returned the theme to sacrifice, which is outrageous The imposition of suffering led to the rapid advancement of the main plot, and the writing style became more serious. At this time, many contradictions and loopholes appeared. Do the five major consortiums that control the Eastern Continent have any trump cards? The only things that appear in the book from beginning to end are sky fortresses and nuclear bombs. Even the strength of the Sky Fortress is not intuitively displayed. In some small battles, the soldiers are asked to shout "xx number" crazily. In the end, the drones are fighting, and they don't know where the sense of oppression is. Comparing it to modern warfare, appearing within visual range is already a sight of red on the bayonet, and missiles are the way to go. The book rarely mentioned that several missiles were hit by anti-missile systems. The presence of missiles was not even as good as the automatic cannon on the city wall. The only time in the book that it was useful was when it hit a building on the head of a rat, and the rats were not killed. You have to say that missiles with advanced technology in this world are not very lethal, while nuclear bombs can destroy the world. The sky fortress was destroyed by a nuclear bomb, and the city was destroyed by a nuclear bomb. Aren't nuclear bombs so destructive? Why don't you kill them randomly as soon as the curse door and shadow door are opened? Nuclear bombs are being thrown around, and no fortune-teller can escape, so why should we be afraid of the Western Continent? In the last two hundred pictures, all kinds of forcible emotions, forcible humiliation, and even the loss of the Li family. The final killer weapon was a nuclear bomb. I really can't understand it. The more than 10,000 robot soldiers behind you are all powered by nuclear energy, so why bother? Why don't you write it as a hydrogen bomb or a neutron bomb? Is it more lethal? There is also the Western Continent written to force the villain to join. Why can it cross the ocean? Later, even the Puppet Master rode a duck across it. The ocean is so easy to cross and the knight's road is so broken? And they are all knights. Li Shutong's expressiveness is obviously stronger than the others. Later, Li Shutong was not allowed to appear, thinking that he would have some effect behind the scenes. In the end, he was allowed to show his face at a certain time. Boss He's reason for the final battle was also inexplicable. Living with cancer and immortality, and saying that burning life is not long enough, building a sky fortress is useless. Others did not say that I was entangled, but it came too late, and the emotions were well written, but I couldn't be moved at all. It was just to die for the sake of death. It was too obvious. I don't even want to say that the plot fell apart in the end. There were several lines that were well laid out, such as the growth of the new generation of knights, the night tour of Whale Island Genji and the Hundred Ghosts, the members of the daylight team acting alone, the emotional line between Dayu, his mother, and Li Shutong, the analysis and liberation of Zard, Nakayu's dispute, the friendship of Jindai, and the feelings of the protagonist. Love lines, etc., Were all understood in a cursory manner, as if cut in half. In the end, even when the protagonist became a god, he realized that there was still a lot of unfinished work. He forced himself to suffer amnesia and forced other characters to finish their roles. Everyone knew that to get back their memories and kill indiscriminately, they had to add emotion and sublime at the end. What if a group of people were killed and how to become heroic spirits. In the end, a lot of holes were left unfilled. I won't tell you the truth about time travel, the origin of Qing's plug-ins, taboos and taboo objects, Zhong Yu. I really appreciate you persevering until the end.       1600，，， This is all I have to say, I just wrote whatever I thought of, there are so many things to complain about later, I have ten sentences in my mind to complain about, and I almost don't know what I wrote. In short, I can always say "rnm, refund your money!"

I saw a lot of people in the comment area saying that Zuo is high and low, and I happened to read a single chapter of Zuozi, and I felt a little bit suffocated. As a reader who likes his works very much, this feeling is really bad. First of all, Zhuzi is a very proud person, I believe any of his old fans can feel this. Of course, it is inevitable for literati to have arrogance. Without arrogance, creators cannot write anything. It is not difficult to find from the works that Zhuzi's writing power is better than text arrangement and imaginative settings, but it is shorter than logical structure and the layout of sloppy and gray lines. This is also the reason why many people feel that they should start high and go low, because each book depicts the characters very well, allowing readers to have feelings for these characters. However, when the creation reaches the middle and late stages, and a large number of settings and early layouts begin to come together, the limited layout ability will cause the plot to be unable to advance as originally envisioned. At this time, there can only be so-called "plot killings". The better the characters are portrayed in the early stage, the more uncomfortable it will be for the readers when the plot kills. For example, the setting of the consortium in this book can be summarized in one sentence: Ren Xiaoli is prospering in the northwest, what the heck! There really wasn't anything interesting left except the knights, and the Northwest Army simply disappeared into the sea of ​​people. I don't understand what Bala did in the first sequence. This is actually not unacceptable, but the group of consortiums that ultimately control the world now seem to be much stupider than the previous generation. But I believe that the readers who first read it would never have thought that the consortia would be so stupid. After all, the description of the consortia at the beginning seemed very powerful. It can be seen that the original idea of ​​Jiuzi must be very grand, and he wants to write a huge epic feeling. This kind of setting is much more difficult than the first sequence, natural disasters, experimental subjects, only one reason is enough to support the advancement of these settings, but consortium, human nature, ambition, game, resourcefulness, these things require very complex ideas and reasonable enough promotion. The difficulty is not on the same level. The background of the previous book was a bit overwhelming at the end, not to mention that the setting difficulty of this book's Nomenclature of the Night has been increased by more than ten times. But isn't it okay to write content like this? The answer is no. The arrogance of the creator does not allow the elbow to stay in the comfort zone. It is inevitable to want to break through and write something better. Sometimes, talent is a person's wings, but it may also become a person's resistance. This is why I said at the beginning that I was panicking. Too many times, I have been very strict with trolls. There is nothing wrong with this. There is no need to suffer for people who don't like me. But every time, I would secretly criticize those who "point fingers" in the creation in my responses. Indeed, "You can do it, you can do it." But many readers who made comments in the book review area were not pointing fingers! Opinions and suggestions are born out of love for the author and the work. The advantage of the online writing environment is that readers can interact with the author while reading and witness the creative process of a work. This is also a pleasure of reading online writing (this is true for me). Since you don't want to sit in your comfort zone and rest on your laurels, then this process must be very uncomfortable and requires constant breaking, rebuilding, trial and error, and summary. Maybe every reader who gives an opinion does not have the ability and level to "guide" the author, but every carefully written book review is by no means a meaningless review. The above only represents my personal views. Discussions are welcome, and trolls are rejected. Those who discuss will be replied, and those who troll will also be trolled back 🙂

I would like to express my personal feelings about recent chapters The author thinks that there are some problems in recent chapters of "The Naming Technique of Night" First, the strategy design is simplistic. The plot starts from going to Xi'an for the exam. There are endless scenes where the protagonist shows great wisdom in the face of the plot. This happens because of the protagonist's super memory setting and strong analytical ability. However, the protagonist's way of cracking the plot is too simple. He has already seen through the plot and has already made arrangements. The repeated use of this plot design caused the author to suffer from aesthetic fatigue. Second, the protagonist's image is ambiguous Take the author's first two works as an example. All readers, including the author, should be able to feel the distinct characters of Lu Shu and Ren Xiaosu. The former grew up as an orphan in an orphanage. After he turned sixteen, he lived a difficult life in this world. However, there was still warmth in the world, which kept Lu Shu from being completely numb. The latter lived in the wasteland and depended on Liuyuan. In an environment where people cannibalized people, he developed a decisive and killing character, but there were still people in the northwest who could warm Ren Xiaosu. As a child who grew up in a single-parent family, Qingchen did not have as distinctive a personality as Lu Shu and Ren Xiaosu. Similarly, the description of the two scenes in which he infiltrated the crew knowing that he was a bait, causing the director to be killed, and the subsequent scene where ordinary people in the factory couldn't bear to take action, is what I personally think caused Qingchen's character to become disordered. It gives people a sense of, "Although I brought the enemy here, I did not kill the director. It has nothing to do with me. It is not okay for me to kill people with my own hands." Therefore, when he buries those ordinary people, people will feel a sense of detachment and forced sensationalism. I will write the rest later In my humble opinion, friendly exchanges are welcome. If you criticize me, please be gentle. I have a weak tolerance in my heart.

I watched half of it before, and after half a year, I watched it again from the beginning. To be honest, it started to collapse in the later stage from Qingchen to Xidalu. It is reasonable for Zhong Yu to separate from Chen Yu, but how did he die in the later stage? He didn't make it clear, and the Duke of Storms was defeated by his apprentice like this? Is Zong Cheng so devoted to himself? Will my sister-in-law's revenge be avenged? In the final battle, Qingchen acted as a mascot throughout the whole process. In the end, he killed twelve painters with one move. The sense of participation was not strong. The apprentices broke out suddenly in the end. There was no foreshadowing, etc. There were many pitfalls left unfilled, and many plots were unreasonable. But I still think this book is a good one. At least it allowed me to calm down and read it all. After all, it has to have a beginning and an end. At least I have memorized a few sentences from some classics, and the overall meaning of the book is also positive. I recognize this. Finally, from this book, we can see that Elbow has indeed reached a bottleneck period. From the beginning of "Big Player", it is actually a good article, to the first sequence, the subject matter is relatively novel, and the logic is self-consistent. Finally, to this book, the group time travel at the beginning is indeed eye-catching, but then the plot Basically, they are all in the inner world, and the outer world has become a place where life and death are completed. According to my guess, this book will be full and comprehensive. If it is written in all aspects, it is probably not a problem to add another thousand chapters. Therefore, I can no longer write this book in the middle and late stages, so it will be revised again. Generally speaking, I wanted to make a breakthrough with this book but failed. I hope that my next book will be well conceived and written, and I hope it will get better and better.

The story became more and more awkward as the story went on. . . There is no tension in the previous two worlds traveling between the inside and the outside. I think the entire storyline of the Western Continent can be deleted. This book is good enough to tell how Qingchen integrated and transformed the entire Eastern Continent and restored the original intention of the ancestors. The following ones are completely superfluous and self-defeating.

For intensive revision, you can choose to find a publishing house to publish it. Forget it if you write it online, and your writing style should be just like that.

I have read books for five or six years, and this one is the one that moved me the most. Many people say this book is bad. I will not deny its shortcomings. I just want to express what I think the value of this book is. ① Before reading this book, the political teacher said that when the productive forces are highly developed, we will realize communism. Without thinking, since highly developed productive forces will lead to the transition to communism, what is the purpose of our current struggle? This book gave me an inspiration. Capitalists will not voluntarily give up their superior class status. This requires us to take the initiative to fight. ② In this novel, the author expresses the exploration of people, technology, and artificial intelligence, and provides his own thoughts. ③The author's writing style is also good and it is not embarrassing to read. There are also many detailed descriptions. I couldn't stop crying when zard "died". ④We are not Qingchen without his brain, Li Shutong, Li Xiu, Mu Qingzhun, Qingxun... But we also have the youthful pride of "How can we be from Penghao people"? Why can't we embark on our own knight's road in our own lives? What we can have is the fighting spirit of not admitting defeat. Come on, friends, if you fail, please "try again"

The setting of traveling across a large area to replace the original owner is basically impossible for people from the two worlds to cooperate. Because this kind of time travel is so abnormal, there are no restrictions at all. You don't know if you will be replaced next! It's so thought-provoking! People in this world must understand this. Everyone is at risk of being replaced and perished. This is simply a war of annihilation! Under normal logic, the inner world will definitely unite and fight against the outer world until death! What's more, Li Shutong is a kind and lawful knight organization. This novel is written from the perspective of the other world, which is actually an invasion of demons! One day, suddenly the devil invaded the world. They can replace anyone as they are. The body of the person being replaced will not change at all, but the memory will be gone and the soul will be replaced. You simply can't predict who will be replaced by the devil, and you have no way to resist or save. Everyone, from the nobles to the common people, may become the target of the devil. And there is nothing you can do. When the whole world discovers this, it will definitely be extremely frightened and immediately unite to resist and find a way. After all, no one wants to die! Even if we take a step back, even if a super strong person like Li Shutong has special abilities, he is not afraid of being replaced. But what about their families? You happily eat with your parents and children today, but tomorrow they will become other souls. Will you still cooperate with the devil calmly? This is the inconsistent logic of this book, and the author has been avoiding downplaying this point.

It has been more than ten years since I started reading novels in the fifth grade of elementary school! From the initial paper version of "Zhu Xian" to the current "The Naming Technique of Night", it has been nearly thirty years in a blink of an eye. It's funny to say that when I was a child, I read novels every day, and my grades plummeted, but the amount of novels I read kept increasing. After failing the college entrance examination, I also hated novels! But now I envy the makers of these "poison sources". When I was in my late twenties, a friend asked me if I had ever had a dream. A desk, a bowl of tea, and a notebook. Being a novel writer in a plain and satisfying way, I think this is what I yearn for all my life! But life is not something you choose, it is yours. As Jiuzi said, this world will force many people to do things they don't like to do, and I am one of these many people. I like Zhuzi's novels, not that his writing is the best, but the writing style of certain plots in the novels touched me the most and the deepest. The writing style and writing style are also my favorite type. Although I am not a true fan, at this stage, in my personal preferences, I have not found any works that compare with it. So please come on and update!

Without ratings, this book can only be described as mediocre. I was also confused by this book's six-level rating at first. The plot and subject matter at the beginning are indeed novel, but gradually the author's bad nature is exposed. There are indeed some worthwhile plots in the middle of the book, but they are written too deliberately, destroying the setting and character, which is a very inferior writing method. An author who has been writing for more than ten years should not be so boring. I won't say much about the ending. Can a human write it? Overall, this book does not deserve this rating.

For the first time in my life, after reading a book for a period of time, I suddenly remembered the crappy ending and couldn't help but come back to criticize it again. I was really angry. I personally think it was also hastily ended, and the big player killed the naming skills of the night. At that time, I was watching The King Knows Elbow, and at first I could only watch pirated versions. I successively watched Big Player, League of Legends, and the first series. Later, I had some money and came to Qidian. Com to replenish my tickets. Earlier Elbow said that I wanted to revise the article, and the comment section was so noisy. At that time, I still firmly thought that the naming of the night would have a good ending. However, after I finished editing the article, I started reading it from the beginning. The more I read, the more disappointed I became. I felt that it was not at the level of Elbow. It was quite disappointing, and I felt sorry for some of the characters in the book. I hope that I can still be a writer in the future and write books that resonate with book lovers. However, in this thousand-mile journey, I, an insignificant and ridiculous reader, can only accompany you for one journey. From now on, I will not ask where you will go.

Wen Wu is the first, Wu Wu is the second. Readers, if you don't like Jiuzi's book, just change it to another one. There is no need to be picky, and there is no need to scold it in the comments. Just look for other books that suit your taste. I don't like stallions, harems, and the like. Some stallions will decisively abandon the book when they find out they have turned into a harem halfway through the pursuit. I think what I wrote is quite reasonable.

Your Majesty, spare your life and subscribe to the entire book. This book is also subscribed to in full. Evaluation of this book: I personally feel that the book is just average. With so many monthly tickets, I can only say that I am old and have a generation gap with most young people. 😅 I feel that reading books also changes with age. Ten years ago, I loved watching School Beauty, The Housekeeper, and Covering the Sky. Five years ago, I loved watching Tang Brick.

Okay, I'll treat you like a loser. It's getting more and more embarrassing and I can't stand it anymore. After writing about the No. 1 Forbidden place, I feel like the style of the book has changed. Is it going to be a mystery or a horror story? The previous novels were okay, but this one is just that.

What the hell is written in the latest chapter 314? It's so embarrassing. The four paragraphs of the meeting between Li Yunshou and Qingchen were so watery and embarrassing, it was like I looked at you in horror, and you looked at me in horror. And what is the significance of the existence of the character Li Ke in this chapter? Is this the knight's legacy that Elbow wants to write about? Seeing that I am really not very impressed by the charm of Qingchen's character, his ability to read memories makes people feel like he is a robot with a paralyzed face. Now I spend half of my time in group chats, which is really boring, and I don't have the feeling of intrigue and information warfare in a group chat. The feeling of group chat is still as interesting as in daily novels.

In the book Chasing Elbows, I am the dog

The first half of the book is pretty good, but from the beginning on the protagonist of God's Age of Tribulation, I can only say there are question marks on my face? ! ! Let's just say that if you are not educated now, will you not be able to write books? Is the plot of the second half of the book based on human logic? If you want to write entertaining and entertaining articles, you should write the plot carefully; if you want to add depth and sensation, you should portray the characters well. You will look so different that others will only feel numb! Just like a previous book review said, you just suddenly wrote that the protagonist picked up a knife and chopped up the rice seedlings, and I didn't have any emotional fluctuations when reading it 🙂 Also, I only started reading this book after it was finished, and I had never read the two prequels before. Looking directly at the text after the revision, I don't know why I revised the book, but overall it seems that there is a big vacuum between many characters and plots, as if people and things suddenly appeared.

Every time I read it, I am moved! No wonder your book is included in the collection of the National Library! I really hope this series of yours can be made into a series. To find a good director, the actors must all be as good at acting as Qing Yunian! Don't ruin the classic! Don't let those vivid characters be ruined by those traffic stars who can only open their mouths and lip-sync. A loyal reader-fan's hope! All monthly votes for Jia Ge Jing have been cast! All monthly votes for Jia Ge Jing have been cast! All monthly votes for Jia Ge Jing have been cast! Say important things three times!

First of all, let me make it clear that this is a book that introduces the elbow style. It is to let those who have not come into contact with the elbow book have a general understanding of the style, so as to confirm whether it is a book that meets their ideals. It does not have any tendency to cause controversy or meaning. The following is a brief introduction to a few points: 1. The Elbow Book is a novel that is biased toward the "human nature of heroes". I have been following it word by word and chapter by chapter from "The King Has Spared Your Life" to "The Naming Technique of the Night" until now. I can tell you clearly that the style and main theme of these three books are the same, creating a charismatic heroic image in the human world. That world may be a wasteland, it may be similar to ours, it may be a world with the pinnacle of technology, but no matter which world it is, there will always be a dark side and a shadow side. The darkness of human nature will be interspersed throughout the book through several paragraphs of description. Those book friends who don't like such detailed descriptions of characters and scenes can find other books first. The Elbow Book may not be suitable for you. In the early stage, elbows will create an indifferent ordinary person who does not want to participate in world events. They may lose some of the "love" that ordinary people have due to irresistible factors, but there will always be one or two spiritual pillars around them who are not relatives but are better than relatives. They may be peers, teachers, or even aunts and uncles who silently sell breakfast on the street. They will tell you through their actions that in this indifferent and dark era, there will always be people willing to lend a hand to provide trivial help, giving the protagonist a human warmth that cannot be understood. After reading this, you should have a general understanding of the direction of the plot. People in this heroic style are destined not to kill at will and have countless harems, but are destined to engage in incomprehensible so-called "holy virgin" behaviors. Therefore, book friends who don't like this style are also asked to look for new books. The elbow's book will most likely not be suitable for you. In the middle period, as an ordinary person, the protagonist has become prominent. At this time, he will begin to come into contact with the light of those who sacrifice themselves for others. They may not have any force, but the unreasonable things they have done for the times are admirable. This once again deeply touches the protagonist's soul, allowing them to make an important decision to stand up for those they admire and become the light of the times. , No longer avoid, face the darkness, and shine in the future. Those book friends who cannot understand or can't bring in supporting characters and strangers, and can't appreciate the feelings carefully, please find another new book. This is not suitable for you, or this is the prerequisite for reading Jiuzi's books. Without that kind of empathy, it will not be enjoyable to read, and it will not attract you. In the later period, it is basically the period of military ceiling. Various treatments are used to fill in the pits, describing some daily life before the storm, accumulating the sharp contrast between peace and war, and finally detonating it in one breath during the decisive battle, leaving several answers, giving people infinite reverie, and creating a feeling of loneliness that lingers in my heart after my close friends leave. This is probably a process of elbow books, with rich and colorful reality of human nature, different ways of dealing with the world, and heroes with charismatic personalities. This is the so-called "human hero" flow. They are not aloof gods, but a hundred flowers. People who let go are those who struggle with each other in the darkness, lend a helping hand, and move forward. 2. There is basically no problem with the details and logic of Jiuzi's book. From the past life causes and effects of the relationship between the two worlds in "The King, My Majesty" to the mystery around Ren Xiaosu and the relationship in the world in "The First Sequence", no matter which book it is, it will be slowly revealed step by step as the protagonist grows up, and it will not be revealed immediately if the puzzle is incomplete. "The Naming Technique of the Night" is probably the same. There will always be some scattered clues scattered in a certain paragraph or a certain ordinary action language, etc., Which makes book lovers. Look carefully for guesses, and the same goes for characterization. If you don't carefully observe the chapters before and after, you will find that you don't understand the character's behavior. This will make it difficult for book friends who like to read quickly, so you need to carefully decide whether to read Jiuzi's book. If you like his style, you will unconsciously adjust the speed and become addicted to it, but if you don't like it, it will only make you more uncomfortable as you read. Logic is a very important point in Zhuzi's book. If the logic is not smooth, it cannot be brought into it. Failure to understand it means that you cannot empathize with it. But it happens that Xiuzi is very good at logic, and generally will not do anything out of the ordinary. Many elbow characters have clear views and are easy to understand. You will understand why he does what he does and why he changes his point of view. So if you don't understand this character, you may have missed something or misunderstood something. But don't think about logical issues at the first moment. There is a high probability that this does not exist. Even if there is a strange place, it will most likely be answered below, and then the context will lead to the things or things I want to express. At this point, I would like to ask readers to read at a faster pace, which will make the reading experience more high-quality. Now I have told you some key points about entering the book. Those who like elbow books are welcome to join the book. Those who do not like it, please bear with me and look for new books. Finally, I hope everyone can find your favorite book and author.

I have read every book I have ever read, and none of them are bad...

It's anticlimactic, it doesn't matter if you don't have a double love scene, you don't have to do it, what a rubbish fight in the later stage, just kill a few supporting characters and lick the dog, right?

I still don't believe it when they say it's a bad ending, but when I see that it's really based on the defense, it's written in the front that Qingchen is so smart and powerful, but in the back he's crazily suppressed, and there's all kinds of cheating. It looked terribly awkward, and I felt like I had to write an ending to fill in the gaps if I couldn't write it.

The whole book is like a full banquet, the finale - dog poop flavored ice cream. After reading it for more than a year, I still feel disgusted. Qin's emotions are unclear. Three or two kittens died in the war between the two worlds, and he died as a licker. He was so good at painting and ended up with nothing. The underwater environment did not change even after he became a god. In the end, the god said nothing and did not explain anything. The pure and brainless happy ending made some people happy. {"TopicId":"933770901756641280","TopicName":"What are the truths that reading novels can help you understand"}

It is recommended that new readers read the first four volumes and just read the title and order to read the ending. The fifth volume starts with a slump. The writing level and the communication of ideas are as good as a high school student catching up on homework. I really regret ordering later.

It's a bad novel, not worth mentioning. The boss is confused!

Elbow is the most unexpected writer I have ever seen, which is very rare in today's online writing. Many great masters have gradually become traffic writers, falling into the wonderful things they have created before. Over time, these wonderful things have become cliché and bad. Every time we know that Lu Shu, Lu Xiaoyu, Qingchen, Zard and other characters will have some unexpected plans, but I never imagined how they would be revealed to me. The point is, this is not a mystery novel! ! ! Elbow must be a very smart person, he can use the existing conditions to create one way to solve the problem, instead of letting the protagonist gain a new ability when he encounters a difficulty. However, many writers cannot do this, which leads to loss of control in the later stage. Come on, there are not many good writers left.

Emotional drama is worse than God of Destruction. How well written it was in the early stages. Yangyang came out with a high B-level and pestered Qingchen for inexplicable reasons. As soon as the relationship between a man and a woman came up, it felt like the two of them had suddenly become wise.,, They have retreated from the trap.

I have read more than 260 chapters, and I have already read 23% of the book without realizing it, nearly a quarter of the way. So far, I feel like I am still writing the beginning, and it is still an E-level. Real facts that can attract people seem to be like entering prison and knight's test. The other trap chats and role plays are all very fake, and a lot of characters from the Qing family and the Li family appear one after another. The protagonist's gravity seems to be a bit too strong. The key is that there are so many characters, but few relatively complete storylines. They are almost all small plots of lifting up and putting down gently. There doesn't even seem to be a character who can be called an opponent I recall that when I was in middle school, my classmates would write prose in their compositions. Once, the teacher read the classmates' prose as an excellent example. I felt something was wrong after listening to it, and now that I think about it, it just feels empty. If a novel is compared to a pot of soup, then a wonderful and complete story is the best ingredient in it. Of course you can add seasonings and auxiliary ingredients to the stew, but these are secondary. Prose feels like taking a sip of soup with many conditions and ingredients but no main ingredients. I like reading novels and the stories in them. The reviews for this book are quite high, so I came to read it with high expectations. Maybe it's also because I had high expectations. After reading the first two hundred and sixty chapters, I began to feel that this book was a bit empty. For comparison, another book I was reading not long ago, Circle of Fate, was not finished yet so I read Lord of Mysteries in the middle. Their story is indeed more exciting. The other part I want to talk about is the style. This book habitually emphasizes that the protagonist is still very young and has too much of a daddy vibe. It seems that I also read a book called King, Spare Your Life, which seemed to have a strong daddy flavor, so I didn't finish it in the end. Maybe someone like me who has no children and is already 30 years old is not suitable for reading this style of book I wish the author better and better, maybe I will come back one day when there is a shortage of books 😁

I stayed up all night for a few days to read it all. I was so moved by the first and second half that I gave it all my monthly tickets. In the latter part, I felt that the writing was inexplicable and the pace was strange, but I persisted in finishing it. The ending with nothing made me feel as uncomfortable as eating shit. I was so happy at the beginning but disappointed at the end. What I was looking forward to the most was the relationship with Yangyang, but in the end there was nothing. At this ending, if I don't complete the postscript later, I feel like I'm cheating on my feelings.