Martial Arts Wage Earner

There is no focus, no eye-catching things, no flavor of the novel, tasteless and worthless

Very good, voted. By the way, when chasing horse thieves, he didn't bring a crossbow, and the protagonist's system didn't show his face?

As soon as I saw the system talking, I decisively gave up the book.

The part about delivering firewood really made me give up. If you see that the protagonist killed two thieves, you will not be solicitous at all. Because there are several possibilities for killing these two people. First, if the three-person gang committed the crime and the internal strife caused the two to die, then the protagonist is also a thief. Second, these two thieves met a capable person in the wild and were tricked. The protagonist was the robber who killed two people. You can't be regarded as a hero punishing rape and eliminating evil, because the hero will most likely not bury the corpses, and will even drag the two corpses to collect the reward. Under these two possibilities, the protagonist sneaks into an inn where the government holds 40% of the interest. When he is found to have Qinggong and may have killed someone, is it possible that the policeman will play the role of a horseman with you without first holding the meritorious deeds in hand? Arrest first, then investigate, then interrogate, and finally maybe exonerated is the proper direction of development. Will it be convincing just because the protagonist used to be a beggar when he opened his mouth, and I just practiced it casually when he closed his mouth? Where did a beggar learn martial arts? What was the purpose of sneaking into the inn? If you say you want to kill someone, you will kill someone. Was it because the two of them found out your identity that you were silenced? Don't think that looking like a chick is a reason for the police to turn a blind eye. They won't arrest you without a wanted warrant? Since these two thieves died in the hands of the protagonist, did the stolen money be swallowed by the protagonist? Mosquitoes are still meat no matter how small they are. Besides, the protagonist threatens the inn that gives him money, but he kindly recruits the protagonist as a handyman? When something goes wrong, he is the first person to take responsibility, and he is even the first to die, because he knows the secret of the protagonist. I hope the author will sort it out and don't just write "you think" it's feasible.

The writing is okay, but why is it so disgusting for you to accept Li Hui? You started to accept the Holy Mother before you were the Holy Mother. It's so disgusting that I can't stand it anymore. It's a failure within a failure. The author can take care of himself.

The protagonist doesn't accept beautiful sisters The protagonist doesn't develop his own power The protagonist actually takes care of his younger siblings wholeheartedly (the key is to take them in, but also listen to your sister's opinion, how much love you lack) The protagonist doesn't put martial arts training first Then why does the protagonist travel through time? Do you want to make salted fish? The plot becomes more and more boring as it gets written. The first 50 chapters can be said to be a foreshadowing. Later, I can't see what the protagonist is pursuing when he arrives. In fact, the author's writing is very good, but the plot is really a running story and calm as water.

It's well written. It's rare to write with such concentration and flow.

Don't know why. The protagonist looked like a retarded person. As a bookworm of more than ten years, I didn't want to read it after Chapter 10.

After reading this novel, I can only sigh that your master is so kind to such a long-term follower!

When I saw the protagonist being arrested in Chapter 195, I gave up on you. Author, please continue to enjoy yourself!

You write about martial arts, and you make friends with your brothers and sisters every day. My dear, you write about family ethics. The more I read, the more nauseous I became. Chapter 130: The poisonous hair receded.

2020 Has passed, and it has been a difficult year. Because of the difficulties, I only thought of writing online articles. I never thought that I would be able to persevere. Now I have more than 800,000 words. Although the subscription is not very good, I am very content. Every time I see someone praising me, I am very happy, and I will persist in finishing the book. 2021 Will arrive in an hour. I wish everyone good health, good luck, career progress, and prosperity in the new year. I wish our great country will change with each passing day, lead the world with its majesty, and have unique scenery here.

Let's put it this way, books are still okay, but the most taboo thing about systems writing is that the system has intelligence.

It's really well written and very in line with my taste.

The most annoying thing is that the system has intelligence. I really don't know why these protagonists are so god-level.

The main character's name is too low-key. He should be called Shangguan Gou Sheng to make him more popular.

Let's not talk about the quality of the writing. One chapter of your system panel appears three times and there is still no change at all. It's very tiring to read. The reader made comments and the author felt like he was justified. The comments he made with strong words and unreasonable words were really poisonous to you.

I thought the protagonist was in his twenties, but he looked 12 years old, which was too outrageous 🙂

1. Look at the self-positioning of the system, which is the man behind making the protagonist a successful man 😏 2. The main characters in the article currently include the protagonist's family, Qiu Yin of Butianzhai, the Liancheng family of the aristocratic family, and the leader of Wuyunsi, . . . . . . . . It feels like the protagonist is now freeing himself after establishing the water village, and there are no staged small goals.

Check it out. Can you come back for a visit? (Honestly Bajiao)

Come on, author, I feel like the characters in this novel have online IQs.

I'm very happy that my readers have also discussed it. It's my first time to write something. I'm just learning to walk in Handan. Most people won't be satisfied. In fact, I'm not satisfied either. Learn slowly and practice.

1. The last few chapters have been pretty bland. 2. I don't know if the author has an outline. I personally don't think there is any. 3. There seems to be no main plot in the book.

Why does this author keep using the word count in the panel?

Too many typos. Goodbye (●—●)

After raising it for such a long time, it has only been updated so much? Can you give me more?

The protagonist of the novel more than 10 years ago liked to use compound surnames!

Brother, write well, write in your own style, and write in a different way. There will definitely be tickets and so on! I recall the time when Tudou became an overnight sensation on the Internet, Wangyu created his own style, and now he has become a master of Internet literature. So you have to write it first before you can have a receipt. I don't know how to write it well 😁.

The previous writing is quite good, but the pace is a bit slow. The author needs to speed up.

Character: Brother Biao Height: 190 Weight: 100KG Appearance: Muscles like steel, tough and handsome face, short hair, extraordinary bearing, kingly style, sharp eyes Personality: domineering, lustful, delicious, decisive in killing, cynical, Power: Ultrasound, super healing, fangs and claws (controllable), teleportation Strengthening (10 tons) Mental strengthening (can be immune to most mind control) Internal strength: Jiuyang Shenggong External strength: Iron Shirt (increases skin hardness, strength, toughness,) Lighting strength: Tiger Leap Style (quickly rushes like a tiger to deliver a fatal blow to the enemy) Jumping Stream Style (leap movement technique lands silently) Downhill Pose (delivering a fatal blow to the enemy like a tiger descending from a high place) Moves: Tiger Claw Hands (a combination of knife skills, sword skills, boxing skills, palm skills, claw skills, spear skills, stick skills, grappling, grappling, kick skills, and wrestling skills) Sound Wave Skill: Tiger Roaring Mountain Forest (shocks the mind and disturbs the enemy) When a person's inner strength is running, the roar range is so large that it can break the eardrum) Spirit: Tiger Power (can form an illusory tiger, attack the opponent's mind, and can directly scare people with unstable minds to faint or to death) Can the author use this template to write a Jin Yong fan?