Evil Ways Across the Myriad Worlds

I think the author can make the protagonist's mentality calmer and not get angry at every turn. Moreover, I discovered that the author likes to use gloomy expressions, cold eyes, etc. When describing characters. Compared with the original work, the overall portrayal of plot characters using these words makes me feel that the characters are very separated. I think you can use other words.

Support the new book. Look at the title and the introduction. Since the protagonist is on an evil path, then keep writing along this line. Don't make the protagonist look like a virgin and cruel and pervert at the same time. It's best to control the protagonist's character well. Come on, author.

The protagonist is not dark enough, and it doesn't deserve the title of the book anymore

Cheese is a newbie, I used to read novels. This is my first attempt at writing. The writing, plot, description, etc. May not satisfy you book lovers, so I hope you bear with me! If you have any questions or insults, you can comment here!

I can't stand the plot of Tai Chi and Zhang Sanfeng anymore. I'm still a holy mother. I might as well copy the original movie. I especially feel that the protagonist talks a lot of nonsense. Then I randomly picked a small character and can beat the protagonist. It also feels like a dog licking. At the beginning, I wanted to lick Uncle Jiu. Anyway, I feel like I want to lick the protagonist when I see the movie. The name Zhutian Xiewu is either the Holy Mother's strength or the evil will be carried out to the end. I will reward and comment otherwise it will be very popular.

It's a evil novel, not bad, I hope you stick to it and don't change the style!

Forget it if the writing behind it is not good. Have you ever seen Fa Hai in Zong Duo use the tricks of Fa Hai in "Green Snake"? They are all in different dimensions, but they can still use the same move. Besides, Fahai in Deadly Agreement is so rubbish.

You Xiewu is very evil. You turned Uncle Jiu and others into evil villains, and then used evil ways to take revenge. It shows that your evilness was all forced.

Don't worry, I will give you the full order, but as a Xie, I don't know poisons and poisons, how can I be called Xie? Moreover, if you are not completely evil, why don't you reject people's souls, refine magical weapons, such as the Ten Thousand Ghost Banners, use spells to destroy the city, and then let the ghosts hurt each other, leaving the strongest ones to form ten thousand ghosts. Of course, there are also poisons, ghosts, etc., These are all evil ways.

Why not go to Wuxin Master and learn Yue Qiluo's soul immortality technique together with Yue Qiluo? Although it is an evil magic, the soul is immortal, so there is nothing to hesitate about. In addition, there are her paper figures, and why I feel that the protagonist does not look like the evil sect at all. Shouldn't the evil sect think of ways to subdue the six-winged centipede? Then I kept on raising it slowly. Although the main character was written about evil martial arts, his pursuit of evil martial arts was not at all. The Blood-Drinking Knife actually cared about appearance. I was so damn fed up. When I saw this, I really wanted to hate him to death. What bothers me the most is those who pick and choose unimportant things. Xie, you learn poison, learn Gu, learn to control souls, that's not a lot, what kind of ghost golden bell do you learn, please clarify the position of the protagonist.