Evil Ways Across the Myriad Worlds

I think the author could portray the protagonist as more composed and less prone to anger. Also, I've noticed the author frequently uses phrases like "gloomy face" and "cold glint in the eyes" to describe characters. These descriptions create a disjointed feel compared to the original work, making the characters seem very different. I suggest using different words.

I'm supporting this new book. I came in because of the title, and after reading the synopsis, I've decided to stick to the unorthodox path of the protagonist. Don't make him a saint one minute and a ruthless monster the next; try to keep his character well-controlled. Good luck, author!

The protagonist isn't dark enough; he doesn't live up to the book's title.

Cheese is a novice; she used to read novels. This is my first attempt at writing, and the writing style, plot, descriptions, etc., May not satisfy all readers. I hope you will be understanding! Feel free to leave any questions or even insults in the comments here!

I couldn't stand it anymore when the Tai Chi Master Zhang Sanfeng storyline came on; he became too saintly. The original movie was worse than a direct copy. The main character talked a lot of nonsense, and later on, any random minor character could easily defeat him. He even seemed like a sycophant.

A novel in the unorthodox genre, not bad at all. Hope you keep it up and don't change your style!

The later parts are poorly written, but forget about it. Have you ever seen the Fahai in *My Date with a Vampire* use the same moves as the Fahai in *Green Snake*? They're from different dimensions, how could they use the same moves? Besides, the Fahai in *My Date with a Vampire* is so trashy.

You, Evil Warrior, are evil in a very unique way. You turned Uncle Nine and others into evil villains, and then used evil methods to take revenge, showing that your evil was all forced upon you.

Don't worry, I'll order it all for you. But as someone who's evil, how can you be called evil if you don't know how to use Gu and poison? Besides, you're not thoroughly evil. Why don't you repel souls, craft magical artifacts like the Ten Thousand Ghost Banner, use magic to destroy cities, and then make the ghosts hurt each other, leaving the strongest few to form the Ten Thousand Ghosts? Of course, there's also Gu, poison, ghosts, etc.—All of these are evil practices.

Why not go to Wu Xin: The Monster Killer and learn Yue Qiluo's soul immortality technique? Even though it's an evil technique, an immortal soul is something to hesitate about. Besides, there's her paper doll. And why does the protagonist seem so unlike an evil character? Shouldn't an evil character be trying to subdue the six-winged centipede and slowly nurture it?