
The War System, Starting with Bright Sword
从亮剑开始的战争系统
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- Completed
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- 1.3M Words
- Genre
- Military
- Subgenre
- War Fiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I threw up, I really threw up. To be honest, it's not a heinous thing for you to copy the story line of the original work. The TV version's translation into text is also interesting. Although you copied it after it was released, you still let the protagonist participate and changed the direction of the story, right? Since there are so few starting point war books, I can continue reading. You frequently let the enemy run away, you were shot and your hand was amputated and you forced yourself to survive. You had to start a new plot where the protagonist sneaked behind enemy lines and shot a few times in the head before it ended. You repeated it several times, but it was tolerable. After all, the Japanese invaders in the TV series were all in facial expressions. I didn't see much difference when you wrote it, so I just treated it as a new character. The characters I wrote earlier can be tolerated if they are thrown away later. After all, I have high poison resistance. If Han Mei is gone, it will be gone. Anyway, the anti-war novel does not require the love between children. But you forced me to write a cannon, and I was really disgusted. You have always written that Xiu Qin's tragedy should not be repeated, and then you have brought so many protagonists to our team. We should be on guard when we should be on guard. Traitors are also caught, and enemies are beaten away when they come. Then you slap your butt and think, how can I earn tears and move readers without Xiuqin? Then I took a look at the previous chapters and found that there is also a race Diao Chan, so let's give it a try. Then he forced a man with a broken hand to tie up a man and ride a horse back to Ping'an County. How did he do it? How could he tie up a horse and raise a gun at the same time with one hand? Are all the snipers in your team stupid? Earlier, I was boasting about how accurate Shunliu was at shooting, and how accurate the protagonist was at shooting, but it was all fake! Then the most poisonous part comes. Sai Diaochan, a female character with no emotional basis, is tied to Ping'an County. It is logical that there will be an emotional conflict. How does the author deal with it? He copied the original work, replaced Xiu Qin with Sai Diao Chan, and lost it. Even the classic "shooting" is the same. This is so disgusting, really disgusting. It would be better if you had the protagonist give the order to pursue and accidentally kill Sai Diaochan than just copying it, really.
There is indeed something remarkable about this book What moved me the most was the love between Wu Song and Diao Chan. In order to save Wang Mang, Zhang Fei turned against his sworn brother, the Golden Retriever Lion King Xie Xun. Especially when I read that Guo Jing gave up his position as the leader of the Sun Moon God Sect and wandered around the world with the gentleman Jian Yue Buqun, it made me cry. Linghu Chong joined the anti-Japanese war to avenge his father.
I think give more shots to the protagonist, you are not copying the sword!
The pig's feet are just soy sauce and have no sense of existence. Isn't it just writing about the bright sword?
There are hundreds of chapters, all about swords, and I'm not interested. I opened this book after reading about the Pacific War, and found out that it was selling sheep's heads with dog meat. It was withdrawn.
I copied the original work so completely. I've read more than 20 chapters and I'm still copying. Goodbye.
This damn thing can go to Sanjiang. It's rubbish.
After being convinced, Chapter 1 persuaded them to retreat, and the sentinels left their posts. It would be fine if the protagonist was an ordinary person before time travel. The key point is that the protagonist was a national defense officer before time travel.
I thought about it, I will also open a book, let's call it "Liang Pao", first download the Liang Jian novel, and then name the protagonist Li Sanpao, and the supporting character Chu Sanpao, then open the text format, select text editing - Replace - Find content: Yunlong - Replace with: San Pao - Replace all - Find content: Liang Jian - Replace with: Liang Pao - Replace all - save, then cut out 4,000 words from it and upload it every day, just wait for the money to arrive. By analogy, travels to the north, official policy and the like can also be put on the shelf at the same time. If the character is really monotonous, add an additional limited character: Zhang San. For example, the two characters Sanzang and Zhang San in the journey to the north can be replaced with Sanzang and Zhang San: It is said that Sanzang and Zhang San were in a hurry to see the traveler not coming, and they were very confused. They did not know that the Bodhisattva did not come, or that the traveler ran away for an excuse. In the midst of their wild speculations, they saw bright colorful mist in mid-air, and the traveler suddenly fell down the steps and shouted: "Master, the cassock is here." Sanzang and Zhang San were overjoyed, and all the monks also said happily: "Okay! Good! We are waiting for our lives today. It's all done." Sanzang and Zhang San took the cassocks and said, "Wukong, when you left in the morning, you were supposed to come back at noon after dinner. Why did you come back from the west at this time?" The traveler explained the matter of asking the Bodhisattva to perform transformations and succumb to demons. Upon hearing this, Sanzang and Zhang San set up the incense table, bowed to the south, and said, "Disciple, since you have the Buddhist robes, you can quickly pack up and go."
You just copied the script. You have nothing of your own. At least 80% of it is plagiarized.