The Strongest Martial God from the Start

Brother, I really can't stand it anymore and I have to say a few words. First of all, your previous book "I Devoured Millions of Strong Men" has a good idea, but the problem is that the loopholes in logic have really affected the senses. The soul without a mirror does not have any trouble in an ordinary body, and there is no explanation. This is a poisonous point for some readers. The soul with the supreme realm does not directly use this kind of soul to attack the other party, and does not explain why it is not used. This is another poisonous point. It's not that you don't want to see it, but you will be very disappointed when you see that the souls who have swallowed millions of strong men and the supreme realm are just like this. After all, a character who has devoured so many awesome characters will jump three levels to fight monsters, and may not succeed in defeating monsters. This is very discouraging and does not reflect the strength of those awesome characters who were devoured. Some restrictions should be added. For example, swallowing is not the whole thing for all strong people, but only the random parts will be more controllable. It would be much better to change the reason why the souls of these body snatchers can be swallowed by having the special soul properties of "attracting strong men to snatch their bodies" and the unsolvable ability of "being swallowed once their bodies are snatched". Most people who don't want to follow the book will feel physically and mentally exhausted just by looking at the beginning and a lot of flaws in the middle. After all, this is a book. You can write a short article, you can have a big imagination, but it's not too outrageous and illogical. You must at least be able to come back to it, or explain it. I like the author's previous book very much, but it is precisely because of this that I need to express my own opinions, because it will make the novel better and more interesting. I hope the author can learn from the lessons of the previous book and strive to reach new heights.

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