Longevity, Starting Mining for Eight Years

After thinking about it, I decided to open a post to explain the problems with this book. 1 Many book friends say that the pig's feet start to float after the pig is killed, but this is not the case. I explained later that his swelling was due to accepting part of the inheritance of the wild beast, the Sky Bear, and he was almost demonized. Although he recovered later, he was inevitably infected by the spirit and will of the Sky Bear throughout the ancient times, and his power increased tenfold after receiving the inheritance. It's reasonable to be a little bloated, right? 2 Many book friends say that just looking at the scenery and drinking some wine will make the pig's feet feel better and drift away. But how much time did these things take? It's just a few hours, a dozen hours, and behind these things is Pig's Foot's life of hard training day after day. So these little hobbies can only be regarded as life embellishments. So what may have misunderstood you is that the author is too heavy-handed in writing and writes in more detail! 3 Many book friends say that the author is very good, but if you jump through several chapters and you don't feel any fragmentation, then I am indeed a weak person, but I still feel very fragmented when I jump through the chapters! 4 I hope that when you want to criticize the author! Read the book carefully first, and use your brain to connect the context before you comment. Don't just comment on some unskilled words, and let the author secretly enjoy it. I don't do anything, mainly because it affects the book friends who come later! 5 Pig's Foot character design, although he is a mess, he was still a student before time travel. He is an ordinary person with bad habits, shortcomings, and preferences. He is not yet a Taoist person. He just wants to live and enjoy life now. Finally, if you think my words are unpleasant, please remove the book from the bookshelf, and we will never see each other again!

🙄🙄This is the peak work since its debut. The first dozen or so pictures are close to the quality level, at the end, whether it is sleeping after killing a silver bear or hunting a wild boar, and there are a few chapters of Dahai in the middle, they all feel like a beginner's level. Just take care of yourself.

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This book is comparable to the wizarding world. This book has the qualifications to become a god

After looking around, if the background can be planned in advance, it may be able to reach the height of a mortal 😁. It depends on whether the author can maintain it later.

The author describes how handsome the protagonist is in the early stage. In fact, these plots do not need to be so many. The times are too many. In the eyes of our readers, it is just self-pleasure. Not many people are willing to see others enjoying themselves Also, since the author plans to write about Gou, he should be less funny. It is that many descriptions and processing methods are not good, making your initial theme and your behavior contradictory. Although the protagonist in the book does not have foresight, but you are the author, give us readers Yes, so you must have a certain degree of foresight, otherwise many of us will be very confused when reading it. It is very serious to say that you are going to be stubborn but your behavior is very liberal. This is a very serious idea and completely opposite to the action. Moreover, I read many previous comments and hoped that the protagonist would be very stubborn. However, in your book, you described a very reckless kind, which conflicts with their thoughts. This is because the plot arrangement is not reasonable.

To be honest, it feels a bit unreasonable. Logically speaking, the corpse-refining sect should rely on its subordinates to fight, but in the end, it turns into a zombie. They are not the same species anymore. How can you cultivate immortality after all the disciples have turned into zombies? It feels like the physiological structure is different. It can only be said that the author's imagination is big enough, and the zombie sect is the first of its kind. Zombies are originally quite invincible, with infinite strength, indestructibility, and no fatal weakness. You have not only made the zombies master spells, but also have wisdom. A sect is full of zombies, and you can refine zombies. Others even play with special codes. How can other sects fight at the same level? It feels like you can conquer the world.

It's great to be stubborn in front, but there are inexplicable waves behind you. After defeating the monsters, you can go to sleep directly. As soon as you improve your strength, you no longer need to use earth escape, just fight directly. Do I have to buy it if I want to have a soul? Can't you hunt it yourself? The pace is deliberately slowed down. The cultivators are already fighting in the starry sky, and you are still searching in the mountains. Do you want to wait for readers to catch up to thousands of chapters? Today's novels can last for three hundred to five hundred chapters. Even if you succeed, if you keep grinding like this, will anyone still chase you?

The book is good, well written, but be careful when writing, don't imitate the real Gu, don't use too dark methods, or write too clearly. China has very strict regulations in this regard. If you become famous in the future, some villains may report you. So pay more attention.

Come on, the writing is very real. If I had traveled through time, I would probably be just like the protagonist!

The world view and setting of this book are good. I was attracted to it in the first place, but the plot is so bad that it almost becomes a chronicle. You can't rely on the setting to become popular. Let me say the important thing three times: the plot! Drama is still drama! ! !

When I saw that snow lotus, I felt like it was over. I felt that the protagonist was going to become a dog-licker. I just asked, is the protagonist a dog-licker?

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Post a post to explain. Some book friends may be confused about the power of zombies. Why is it so high? First of all, this world is a world with abundant spiritual energy, and the level of power is very high. Secondly, even in a world where the spiritual energy is exhausted and extraordinary, zombies are made of steel and have infinite strength. If they are a little more powerful, they can move like the wind. And the world where the protagonist lives is rich in spiritual energy, coupled with the Heavenly Corpse Sect's skills, elixirs, and the cultivation of a special environment (corpse iron mine), even if you are not strong, you can't afford the price you pay, right?

I think it's pretty good-looking, with a grand background and good content.

For my taste, this is a masterpiece in my opinion.

I just read 8 chapters and subscribed to one chapter in order to speak 😁😁😁 When I saw the long paragraphs of prose and poetry, I wanted to ask, is this really not automatically generated?

Open a spell collection building, focusing on magic spells. Book friends with ideas can actively participate. The format is as follows: Spell name: Effect:

Is this a serious monk?

I lost it. I don't have money to talk about feelings. Money is everywhere. If you don't come back to work yet 😃, you're cheating!

Pig's feet

The author writes very well, but it's a pity that the eunuch is

Haha, I'm disappointed. I've finished this book You can just leave it and update it later.

This update: A few days ago, the disease was in the treatment and now it is⊙⊙

What are you doing well? Alas, I have scrapped a book.

No wonder no one has read it, this is about zombies and there is no sense of immersion.

The authors of this book are still alive, and now they are wandering around in other people's book review sections every day!

You can speak more (praise the author) 🤐, I'm so excited about Aite, I feel so cold in the comment area.

Add finesse. Already pinned, subscribe, and I will give you 3 monthly passes in 24 hours.

Daughterless? Single woman? Many girls? I haven't read it yet, let me ask first.