The Arrival of the Fire

1. The title of the book is pretty good and has some flavor. The introduction is a bit rough, and it is easy to be discouraged. The first impression that readers have about a book is the introduction, which must first attract readers to read the first chapter 2. The writing is good and acceptable, like a Western fantasy. 3. The segmented layout looks okay, but the protagonist's name seems out of place, a bit out of place compared to John Gandalf. 4. It seems to be a bit slow to catch up. The number of words is still small now. I have to work hard to write down the words and I can't stop updating. Come on (✪▽✪) I'm optimistic about you