Hidden World of Konoha

To be honest, if there is a Mudun in Konoha, it will definitely not be protected but sliced ​​up. No one can protect it.

Many places written by the author are very..., For example, at the beginning, after the actor finished speaking his lines, he did nothing and let the protagonist kill him, he had obviously read the original work but didn't even practice climbing trees and treading water, there was a supercilious person in the team but he was inexplicably attacked by a sneak attack, etc. In fact, there are too many flaws, which affects reading. I hope the author can think through the outline and see if there is any logic in writing.

The writing is rough and green, and the appraisal is completed.

A lot of poison! There were blood stains from Senju and Uzumaki, but the chakra was never enough, and he fainted when it exploded. Acting on the battlefield is not about being cautious or leaving the battlefield, but blindly following the plot. It's a standard attempt to commit suicide. If other ninjas meet the protagonist, or he's a powerful bandit, it'll be a disaster!

Idiot, the darkest person in Konoha is the Hokage. You are seeking death by exposing the news about the wooden shield. Let's see if you continue to act like this.

Senju and Uzumaki are distant relatives and have the same ancestor. This... Is nothing special.

How did the protagonist Mu Dun awaken? In addition, the Wood Release Ninjutsu is also inexplicably known...

Obito is still black, Rin and Kakashi are getting married😂😂😂

What's the point of writing the protagonist as being incompatible with the ninja world? I think you can just kill them all, that's all the protagonist is anyway.

A eunuch?

Has the filial son been cleared? Has anyone read the full text?

The pace is too fast. I don't want to say whether it should be saved, but whether it can be saved. He went directly to the battlefield at the age of 5. You think this is the late stage of the war. I haven't learned anything. Besides, the battlefield is not a school. There are people who are free to teach you and take care of you. It's not like playing house. Let me add that the fourth generation came back to help his wife find a clan member. If you find a child with Senju + Uzumaki and don't bring it back to the village, what will happen if you throw it on the battlefield and then directly join the death squad (the patrol is the most dangerous task, and usually requires elites to participate). This is when a 5-year-old child is sent to the village to lay the foundation for accepting the will of fire. If you don't have the same three views, you dare to treat you as a real ninja of the Hokage Village. Also, Lin, who was about 13 years old, was having an affair with a 5-year-old pig's foot. She jumped to see Naruto's birth and found that the fourth generation and Lin had survived. You are going to die. The first Obito can't turn black and can't open the kaleidoscope. Don't say that fake death can open it. Can fake death deceive the Sharingan? Can Zetsu and Madara give up? The sealing skills of the second and fourth generations are very strong. The Yondaime couldn't fuck the Kyuubi and had already died in love. You, a brat who has practiced for less than a few years, can fuck the Kyuubi and save the Yondaime's wife. Anyway, I read that only Madara and the first generation could defeat the Nine-Tails. This was still at their peak, and the others either relied on the control of the kaleidoscope or opened the eight gates. If tailed beasts were so easy to get down, they wouldn't be weapons of war with the status of nuclear weapons. The second generation can't beat the Kyuubi either (Kinko Ginko beat the second generation to death, and Jin Jiao Ginko only ate some of the Kyuubi meat),

Billions of novels are too cheap to meet the sunset

I originally wanted to watch it, but the update speed was too slow, so I simply stopped watching it.

Chinese is the lingua franca of all universes

I don't know why I don't like reading Naruto-type novels now. I've read too many Naruto novels, but I always wanted to read something more enjoyable.

Your novel is invincible. You can't write it without following the plot. It's very green. Many things are not described well. In short, it's terrible.

I want to know how you can speak Japanese if you don't know the words of this world. . . .