Power Overlord

This book roughly describes how one could go to the Ming Dynasty, which was at least 100 years more advanced than the earth, and then go about daily life without thinking, as if one had forgotten that world! Shui girls dormitory, Shui netizens, Shui family, they all reached chapter 50 so fast without using anything in that world, oh, they just got glasses 😅

Stay quiet, where is your moral integrity? After reading Chapter 30, the machine didn't even appear a few times, and the engine was even more threadless. In Chapter 30, it didn't even get into the theme. Is this too exaggerated? A woolen toy that was replayed over and over for thirty chapters!

The introduction is so funny. Where did Forbes get the title of Best Entrepreneur Under 25?

What did you write? It's all about daily life, what about the engine? It's better to be a level 5 author. Did you buy it?

When will Mr. Chen Geng become president🥺

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. 1. The dialogue between the characters is extremely awkward and long-winded. 2. The text is not concise enough, and the water is overwhelming. 3. The pretentious routine is embarrassing. We don't feel how awesome the protagonist is, but the author forcefully pretends to be awesome for us. In the first few chapters, it appears several times that Xi'an Jiaotong University is c9, which seems very awesome. But author, can you just write it once and describe the history, current situation, characteristics, and status of this school in detail, so that I can feel how awesome the protagonist is when he is admitted to this school, instead of you forcing yourself there. 4. Goldfinger opens the door, and it's okay for the protagonist to be cautious, but can we not always describe the protagonist's inner activities? Why are there so many scenes, and he seems cautious, and he opens the glasses within a few hours of getting them. Is there any logic behind it? 5. When you open the door and see a bedroom, you describe that the protagonist is instantly disappointed and hesitates to go in! ! I was immediately persuaded to quit after reading this! If you give anyone an unclear golden finger, he will definitely be particularly curious and excited! Who would be disappointed? Are you still hesitant to explore the unknown because of disappointment? And he opened the door and saw a bedroom, but did he figure out what was inside and what it did? Are you writing about a normal human being? Does this protagonist have any charisma?

The plot of the book is quite novel, but the pace is too slow. I'm not sure if it's off topic. I think the content is a bit too watery. Maybe the author is aiming for a million-dollar novel, but generally speaking, if the first 50 chapters cannot attract attention, it will be difficult for the rest. Playing tricks on the class and expressing your opinions briefly 🙂

When I saw the first chapter of the college dormitory row, where the eldest and the second oldest were the oldest, I lost interest. There is only a father-son relationship in the boys' dormitory👌. The good friendship between classmates has become a bond of loyalty in the world.

You're selling dog meat on a sheep's head, bastard. Can you please change the name to Craftsman Live Room?

For people who read technical articles, the first volume is completely meaningless and boring to read. Is it boring to read the entertainment genre if you want to read romance? Isn't it embarrassing to watch a skilled guy like you write romance? I can't stand it any longer. No wonder the recommendation is so low. Dual version? I believe you!

It's really getting watery! Chapter 30 doesn't get to the point! It's just water all the time! Is it really the sea and you are all water?

Niubi, wrote dozens of chapters. I admire all kinds of daily routine, such as handicrafts, anchors, and the boss, second, and third in the dormitory. I admire how I can endure it. Now I really can't stand it any longer. I still can't see a lot of content related to the topic. I'll close it and say goodbye.

Let's cut it, don't waste everyone's time, it will be hard for you too, write the next one better, there is no need to hold on to it, not many people will read it anyway, don't make it false, there are no books left to read.

The protagonist of the modified motorcycle gets 2,500 yuan, and Boss Li gets 1,000 yuan, plus rebates. Such a greedy partner also wants your modified computer, what does the protagonist think? You have to provide the program development and modification materials yourself, and this split is unacceptable.

It's just that I'm confused. I haven't seen anything related to motivation until now. Could it be that I went off topic?

I've written so many words, but they have nothing to do with the introduction. Goodbye.

The foreshadowing is too long! It's too watery. What's the root carving? Does it have anything to do with you playing with the engine? ?

It is recommended that the more than thirty chapters that foreshadow the previous chapters be deleted.

Better cut it! This is not your level. It is more responsible to rewrite a good book.