Kill the Emperor at the Beginning

After reading the first 26 chapters, I have to complain. The setting is the author's business. There is nothing to say. The characters' actions and ideas are also required by the plot. I have nothing to say. I will just mention a few things that go against common sense. 1. The protagonist is the only son of the princes of the border town, and is also the object of the emperor's marriage. Someone actually bullied you in person? Even if the person is relatively soft, then the royal family and Zhenbei Mansion don't want to lose face? Is it unreasonable to play tricks behind your back but in front of your face? 2. The issue of combat power. The royal family only has a 2nd-level enshrinement, and it is still the kind with residual health. How does this throne hold firm? Linjiang County has 4 level 3s in one county? There are 5 offerings in the governor's department. The protagonist's father is considered a prince after all. He is not strong enough in terms of martial arts and has no masters under his command. How did he defeat the barbarian, or was it that no one in the Daqing Dynasty would assassinate him? 3. As for the time issue, let's sort out the timeline. On the first day, the protagonist killed the emperor, and ran out and burned down Huichang Temple at night. The next morning, 2 monks were ambushed. The royal family deployed troops to encircle and suppress them. Two hundred miles away from Humen Pass, the protagonist summoned Sikong Zhaixing. On the third morning, he killed the tiger and leopard cavalry on the way to get the seal and pass the customs. The court closed the pass and wanted. So far, the time is correct. After all, the protagonist was delayed. Then the time was messed up. There was no time. Depending on the situation, the protagonist has no rest. That is the same day or the third day. Linjiang County defeated 4 third-grades. The Xuanfu Division watched the battle and spread the news. The current progress is the same. Then the protagonist arrived at Linjiang City before the news arrived. It was also said that the protagonist might have rested after fighting. But how did the court learn the news at the same time? The protagonist had been riding for three days. The court found out after the fight. They also sealed Luo Wenzhou's official position. Then Luo Wenzhou ran directly to the Weishui River, 200 miles in front of the protagonist, to ambush. During the ambush, someone called him "New Official Position", indicating that he went there after being promoted to an official. The hero ran for 3 days and still had 200 miles to go. You arrived in one afternoon. I was wondering how to do it?

After watching the beginning, there was no introduction to the power system and what levels were mentioned in the chaotic battle. I was really confused and couldn't figure out who was powerful and who was not. The plot of forcing the father to die in order to highlight the big scene of the assassination also made me confused. You have to write about the feelings of their monarch and his ministers. You haven't written anything. It always feels like being force-fed💩 I suggest the author change the beginning, otherwise I will really persuade him to quit.

The writing is so rough, it ran away

The setting of this book about summons is very strange. Ye Gucheng clearly stated that he had the experience of rebelling against Prince Tongpingnan, so he should have been brought directly from another world. But Guihai Yidao seems to be a native of the country, and he actually has a childhood sweetheart who he has been with since childhood?

The plot can be faster. After all, you update one less chapter a day. It would be so uncomfortable to lay the groundwork for the plot.

I read this book in one breath, which I haven't done in a long, long time. Don't stop updating, don't stop updating

All I can say is that it feels great, it's really great, the kind of fun that makes you look like you're not a noob. Killing the emperor at the beginning asks you whether the stab is exciting or not, and the key board doesn't jump. It's just the feeling of the princess that is criticized.

If the young man in the author's heart is interested, he can take a look.

The author wanted to bring everyone in the novel to life, so he opened many chapters to describe the image of a character. Through the autobiography of the old man he met on the way to escape, and the questions and answers between the Diaosou who came to hunt the protagonist and several Jianghu killers, he hoped to make this character jump on the page. Every supporting role or character summoned by the system has its own beliefs or ideas, whether it is love, or family, country, and world. From these single chapter descriptions, these characters are not pure bad guys from the opposite side of the protagonist. Through this method Make the characters of the supporting characters more three-dimensional and distinct Not only the supporting characters, the author also uses a series of operations such as Zhuang Zhou Mengdie, family bonding, wine and singing, etc. To transform an ordinary reader's stereotyped diaosi image of a time-traveling protagonist into a flesh-and-blood heroic image. In the scene of the Qi Guo Literary Society, a literary plot that everyone loves to see is arranged. It is different from other time-travel novels in which Chinese characters are copied and slapped in the face. (Although I have always felt that copying poems and lyrics and so on. Whether it can rhyme with different dynasties and different local dialects has yet to be considered.) The author seems to want to write a bit more advanced. It reminds me of an episode in the Qingyu Years where Fan Xian drank and sang poems in the hall. Li Xian raised a glass with Li Bai to invite the bright moon through a distance conversation. In the half-dream and half-awake, Li Xian was asked to think about the meaning of coming to this world Undeniable The author really wants to be a coquettish and unpretentious online writer, which makes sense But as I read to the end, I felt that I might be a little bored. Not only was I tired of the cliché of this description, but I was also dissatisfied with the description of the protagonist. Maybe I think a time traveler should bring some new thoughts, new concepts, and new progress to this era, instead of just relying on drinking, smoking, and being unique to establish the character's character. But whether it is conquering the world or driving out the barbarians, it is always a bit violent. Although peace is achieved by fighting, human development must still be driven by technology and humanities. In all possibilities, I think that in the advancement of war, some economic means or advanced technology that are beyond the times can be used to develop people's livelihood. Auxiliary war may make the process of competing in the Central Plains more interesting Although I am not interested in reading some of them, I still hope the author can write better

Although Li Ling is stupid, he can't let these people go in vain. Since everyone in the world is an enemy, it is better to say frankly that whoever takes action today will kill all the nine clans and cut off the ancestral temple. If this is the case, then she is a bitch.

In fact, the writing is okay, and those who start talking about poison are obviously just here to set the pace. There is a saying that the book circle is quite dirty. As long as new books show signs of success in these sections, there will be a few new accounts to set the pace. I focus exclusively on those new authors. Several new books on my bookshelf that were reasonably well written have been wiped out by them. And for those of you who are picky, I can't figure out whether you are just dismissive of someone who has a good rhythm, or whether your own tastes are really so cunning, and this novel won't appeal to you. Anyone can secretly change concepts and follow the trend of others to make fun of them. If you want to suppress newcomers, you should at least show your own writing skills as an experienced author. Don't be a trainee with a poisonous sentence on the left and a bad writing on the right. Write something else, otherwise you will think that the primary school students have just learned calligraphy and only know these two sentences. Haha, a man who buries his bones and butchers dogs leads a group of rabble, that's all he has.

Balance the power system. It's enough to have three or four third-level masters in a county. I don't think it's too much. It's normal for a large aristocratic family to have 3 or 4 third-level masters. But the author's writing is a bit too bad. The protagonist's best kills are all third-level. The author may have considered highlighting the protagonist's strength, but writing it down like this is not suitable for those below the third level. The protagonist has no lethality at all, and the power system will only become more and more collapsed, especially the Fifteen of Swords. That is a bug. The second grade will die immediately. If this happens, the power system will collapse soon. This book of about 800,000 will probably have nothing to write about. I hope the author can write more, balance the power system, and not write the second grade so brittle in the future. . . . Forget about the third level. After all, Ximen, the city lord and Yan Shisan all thought they were the second level at first. The third level should also be the most impressive ones, so it is normal for the third level masters to not cause any harm to the protagonist. For the second grade, I hope to highlight their power and the protagonist's difficulty in winning. I really hope it can be written well. I also really like this book. Come on!

When I saw Chapter 60, I wasn't being slanderous, nor was I bragging. The writing is good, and it surpasses 90% of the authors of Qidian. But I can't appreciate this time traveler. He kills monks and Taoist priests, he kills emperors and scholars, he kills aristocratic families and people in the world. All he can do to solve the problem is to kill. No more. Many people in history have done this, and those who persisted died. That's all, but the people around them who were summoned all died in order for them to show their fighting power. On the surface, it has nothing to do with the protagonist, but after reading the whole story, there are only two words left: cold-blooded Naturally, some people like this style. But as far as I'm concerned, whether it's a person or a world, it needs a little warmth. After all, dead things are so cold to the bone.

The imperial court is extremely corrupt, Taoism is suppressed, there are powerful people in the country, the powerful people in the palace died in battle, the old emperor was assassinated, the young emperor is young and ignorant, and the eldest princess listens to politics behind the curtain. No matter how you look at it, it looks like a chaotic world, but everyone has trouble with the protagonist of the rebellion. I really don't understand what the author is writing. Even if you say you won't help the protagonist return to his hometown to take control of the military and kick off a chaotic world, everyone is desperately trying to change with the protagonist. They have no brains at all and forcefully subdue him.

Rubbish novel, it poisoned me to death

"A wealthy family spends a lot of money to marry a wife, and the one who marries is a perfect body. The one who carries the eight-carriage sedan chair is the lady of the family. The one who is married by the Ming Dynasty is a virtuous and virtuous woman. The one who is married by the three books and six betrothals is knowledgeable and sensible."

Now I feel like vomiting when I see the recommendation, and I don't know how to rate it~~

I want to know why this book is recommended?

I'm in a trap. Damn it. I should have known better and wouldn't have opened it. The number is too small. I'm confused. Author, do you dare to post all the manuscripts?

After reading more than thirty chapters, I thought it was pretty good, but there were two problems. One is why the protagonist has enemies all over the world who want to kill him, but no one comes to help him? Let's not talk about the speculators who want to take a gamble, but let's talk about the careerists. It is impossible for the protagonist to die like this? The second one is why Beiliang's 300,000-strong cavalry didn't move and they just watched the protagonist and his party being chased and killed? You have to know that the protagonist and his party almost died several times, and then did the 300,000 troops surrender or establish a new king? !

When all the women in the palace reach the age of marriage, no matter how beautiful or ugly they are, tall or short, they must first sleep with the monks once, which is called "opening the red". After the monks have had enough fun, they are allowed to go home and get married.

Chapter 11 (Monk Jueyuan's entire Heavenly Spirit Cap was torn open, and colorful things inside flowed all over the floor.) May I ask the author, is your brain blood full of colorful things? This book is too poisonous. .

There was only one third- or second-grade person next to the emperor, and as soon as he left the capital, the whole place was immediately filled with masters of third- and second-grade people. This royal family is really miserable. Only one expert could survive for so long without being rebelled against.

If you continue like this, your book will be ruined! Not to mention that the plot is dragging on, the key is that you update it every day! It's immovable, and I'm ready to give up on the novel palace that I've been chasing so hard for a year. One more thing to say to you, the money you make from writing novels is for yourself. The money you make from writing novels is for yourself. If we find it enjoyable and comfortable, we will naturally reward you and give you votes. Your attitude of updating once a day is not fooling us but yourself. Don't let your good cards go to waste.

Okay, I finished reading it in one breath. Two monthly passes are given to me today. Wait 24 hours. There will be a total of seven. Can you please add more? Hey-hey

For these 12,000 words, two monthly tickets, three recommended tickets 😡 Can you please add more details in the end? All the tickets are cleared

🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫

There was no movement now. The book was written four years ago.

The protagonist shouldn't be riding a horse, he should be riding a snow leopard

When will it be updated? 😭