My Virus Clone

Why doesn't the protagonist get... The color-changing cells of a chameleon... Isn't this... A biological display? ? ? ? This can also be used to... Become invisible? ?

I can't stand it at all. The early writing was really good, but in the middle and later stages the author became completely self-satisfied. It's all expository essays and memoirs, all kinds of matryoshka dolls, and it's a headache to read. There are very few plots that really promote the development of the plot. I hope the author can improve it a lot!

The beginning is very exciting, and I feel like I have read another good book. When I read Chapter 9, I was so moved and full of energy! When I read Chapter 15, another "Son of the Plane" suddenly appeared. He is already a god who can live on the Internet, and he is so powerful that, except for the flower growers, other countries have been affected and ruled. In order to fight against aliens, he has established a defense line outside the solar system. He is quite unfriendly (can be said to be hostile) with pig's feet. The pace of this plot is too fast. Pigfoot wants to say that you are already the king before my little bronze is ready! Then, not many chapters later, the Moon Rabbit appeared, and his IQ and logic began to fall apart, hey! Please, author, please be patient, this is your child, don't be happy with yourself!

I started writing the first word on May 20th, wrote the outline and posted it for the reviewers to read. Then I submitted it for review and was called back for revision and resubmission. It took three times before it finally passed the review on the 22nd and appeared in the Qidian library. When it was voted for by readers for the first time, I was so ecstatic that I couldn't stop thinking about it for a moment. From the original outline to the revised and improved outline when signing the contract, the early assumption that it would take a long time to wander around the earth before the stars have been overturned. Let's talk about the original outline! After the protagonist is resurrected, he makes good use of his abilities to treat illnesses and save people. Then there is a routine slap-in-the-face plot, and he saves a big shot! Wait, wait, wait~ Then people spend thousands of dollars to find a cure, and then start a company. If you go down a list of all the diseases that are currently unconquered in mankind, you can write hundreds of thousands of words. But in fact, I knew from the time I wrote the creation of Kunpeng that my typing speed was not as fast as my brainstorming speed. So I overturned the original plan of writing hundreds of thousands of words, and transferred the protagonist from the front to the big boss behind the scenes. After Kunpeng passed away, he hiccupped for the first time, and then continued to hiccup until he finally became a giant biological battleship escorting human beings in space. This is Kunpeng's tragic life, (it's already a bit of a spoiler, will anyone hit me?) Okay, I just want to say that in the current outline, among the stars is the stage where the protagonist should play. There is also the villain Lin Hui. As long as my writing skills can be improved, he will definitely surprise everyone. But if my writing skills are still as bad as this, I may not be able to write with that flavor. Don't hit me then. To sum it up, I am not good at writing, because I am just a newbie, so I carefully create each chapter, so the progress seems to be very fast and I have nothing to do, but fortunately, my imagination is enough to keep up with the progress of the protagonist, and I have even imagined the unexpected ending of the finale. Let me tell you quietly, the most tiring thing for me every day is not coding or lack of inspiration, but reading what I have written over and over again, looking for typos~~~ I am finally convinced by my input method. If any readers see typos or grammatical errors, please let me know.

The ideas and imagination are great, but it is too complicated, especially the section about electronic life and aliens, which is too much and makes it uncomfortable to watch. It's extremely tedious and a little off topic, right? And with the protagonist's ability to deal with aliens, why would he use alien methods? It's a bit like the garbage plot of American blockbusters. He has his own technology and is fully capable of analyzing its technology.

Well, I'm a little sorry that I stopped updating for so long, but I don't know how to be a eunuch. After all, this is the first story written in a book in my life. No matter how imperfect it is, I still have to tell it. It's just that the reality is a bit unsatisfactory. Some time ago, my father was diagnosed with a malignant tumor in the nasopharynx, and he has been undergoing chemotherapy and radiotherapy. The whole family kept this secret from his father, and even went to the extent of trying to get insurance himself, to the point where he had to apply for subsistence allowance. I'm really sorry to have been depressed for so long and to have been interrupted for such a long time, but if I no longer dare to continue my fantasy and just admit that I have been defeated by reality, then I will have failed too much in this life. I will definitely keep writing, and I won't be too careful about the number of words. After all, it's just a small talk. No matter how many words you write, it won't cost you much. I just write down my fantasies and my beautiful wishes for the future. It may be a story in a dream, or it may be a nonsensical exclamation, but the dream may wake up, but it will not disappear. The story will continue, and it will definitely give everyone who happens to read this story a moment of wonder that temporarily forgets reality. Thank you to those lovely people who have never given up on this story even though I have given up, forever555, Huan Ziyu, Lingxin Baihe, BBQ... And there are many cuties who have always been here but insist on seeing this place. In fact, this world is really beautiful, isn't it?

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel about clones 😚 If the electric eels didn't have eunuchs back then 😭

The protagonist is so kind that I feel a little sick

In fact, the creativity is not bad. The first chapter at the beginning has the feeling of a movie, but it starts to become more toxic later on. The meaningless daily descriptions and the inexplicable supporting actress make the layout of this book suddenly drop a lot.

I couldn't accept it. After reading Chapter 41, the more I thought about it, the more wrong it became. Suddenly you acted like a player. Are you really making a game? The problem is that yours is real. It can be photographed by other people's satellites, and you also use special effects. As for it, isn't it the same as the robots? You may not even have someone else's finger on it. The most important thing is that it was previously revealed that Kunpeng can reach the earth in one minute, so let's calculate that Kunpeng's speed is more than 6,000km per second. . Plus attack power. . Isn't this enough? If you add a few more, you can fight back the aliens directly.

The more I read, the more I can't stand it. The author has brought too much personal information. From an objective fact, Lin Hui is saving mankind. Without him, the earth would have been occupied or turned into a battlefield or destroyed.

Poison, I feel it is really poisonous, even if Shen Nong was resurrected, he would be poisoned to death! I have no idea whether the main character is mentally retarded or something! Goldfinger feels quite strong, but it feels like it was given to a mentally retarded protagonist! Being able to survive beyond three chapters is really a cheat by the author. If you don't cheat, you will die in minutes.

Why does the protagonist's human body come to the fore and become a target, causing trouble for himself? He is assassinated one after another, endangering his family and friends.

The more I read, the more I feel like the plot is about to collapse. I wonder if the author can hold it together.

Help the author open a building first (*σ´∀`)σ Submit some suggestions to the author ٩(*´◒`*)۶ For example, newly modified creatures (including evolutionary direction, general appearance, desired abilities), biological weapons (shape, power, abilities), the protagonist's fighting style and evolutionary direction, and desired supporting roles (including name and abilities, and a general description of the fighting style if possible) ( ﹡ˆoˆ﹡ ) (I'll post one first, and I won't post it here until the author opens his own imagination building (*❛ั∀❛ั∗)✧*.)

Cut it out and rewrite it, there are too many poisonous points. It starts off very well, but then it gets really toxic 😰

1. High-level analysis: the variation angle is either larger or smaller 2. Larger, planetary bodies, genes are essentially information, which can also be said to be knowledge. They are nothing more than shells, information carriers, energy cores, and replication systems. There are many asteroids, planets, and stars in the universe. Light and gravitational waves can be used as contact methods to form a super-large body of a three-dimensional galaxy.                                                        Sub-level, planet-sized trees, have you heard of them, similar to Jianmu, Elf Mother Tree, real technology tree (all industrial products can grow... Such as car fruits, refrigerator fruits) 3. Going smaller, refer to the three-body sophons, the protons expand two-dimensionally, depict the circuit, and then increase the dimension back to protons, enter the system, and the sophons are born. In the same way, if there are smaller substances carrying information and energy industrial systems as capabilities, life can be infinitely small, which also represents the power of microscopic technology. The stronger the micro, the stronger the macro will be! 4. Horizontal development: Viruses are nothing more than genes as information carriers and protein surgery as protective layers and bodies. As long as the quantum soul can be fully carried, instead of the book gradually losing humanity and chaotic consciousness, human beings can obviously follow the pure stream of consciousness of ghosts and immortals as if they are cultivating, the immortal body rebuilt with the immortal energy, the cosmic computer that the saint entrusts with the way of heaven, the Hunyuan Daluo Golden Immortal that forms the universe by itself, and a low-end divine body like a super god?

I really don't understand it. The subject matter was originally very good, but it turned out to be full of conspiracy and confrontation, which made people completely uninterested in watching it.

I thought it was science fiction, but later I found out it was fantasy, and then I found out the author was just bragging, rubbish, and really poorly written.

The protagonist doesn't want to be a member of the country, right? No, no, no, no, can it not be related to the country? Can it, can it, can it?

There is a reason why this book did not perform well. I have only read 60 chapters, but I can clearly say that the protagonist is simply another innocent Tang Buddha. Is it really disgusting, Holy Mother? No, you can't see it at all. All you can see is double standards.

Behind the scenes is the incarnation of the behind-the-scenes story. If you write about your parents, don't write about your parents and make them angry. This is extremely poisonous, okay? The writing is not good and it is written about equal girls. It is easy to misunderstand the heroine. The heroine is a poisonous mother.

No, Chapter 17 is outrageous, doesn't it make sense anymore? Kunpeng flew directly from the earth to the moon? ? ? ? First of all, it is mentioned that Kunpeng can survive in space for 3 minutes, that is 180 seconds The distance between the earth and the moon is 340,000 kilometers, which is 340000000m Dividing the two, Kunpeng's speed per second is about 2130000m/s This is so far off the original spectrum, even at the speed of sound under standard atmospheric pressure. Excluding the fractions, it is more than 6,000 times the speed of sound, close to one percent of the speed of light. It is really too smart...

Your horizons are too small, and you are constantly invading the earth. Does it make sense? What are you trying to do with the people on earth?

In fact, they are just two experimental subjects, one mechanical and one biological. They are actually the experimental subjects of higher civilizations. Growth and experience are all processes of the experiment. Maybe even alien civilizations are influenced by it.

I discovered a serious question that the Internet literature community has not noticed. How do people think when their consciousness leaves the human body? Doesn't it rely on neurological thinking?

Originally, I came to read the introduction because of Kunpeng. Unfortunately, half of what I saw was not what I expected. But the subject matter is good, but the writing style is slightly flawed.

I stopped reading it. I thought it was a clone article to control the virus. Did I give it up?

The author still has some ideas. Although there are many poisonous points in the plot, it is still good overall. It is a pity that the author has not made any comments for a long time. Has he given up...╮(╯＿╰)╭

Yes, but I just read "The Tentacle Monster's Space Journey" and found that I couldn't stand this book.