My Viral Doppelganger

Why doesn't the protagonist get... The color-changing cells of a chameleon... Isn't this... A biological display? ? ? ? This can also be used to... Become invisible? ?

I can't stand it at all. The early writing was really good, but in the middle and later stages the author became completely self-satisfied. It's all expository essays and memoirs, all kinds of matryoshka dolls, and it's a headache to read. There are very few plots that really promote the development of the plot. I hope the author can improve it a lot!

The beginning is very exciting, and I feel like I have read another good book. When I read Chapter 9, I was so moved and full of energy! When I read Chapter 15, another "Son of the Plane" suddenly appeared. He is already a god who can live on the Internet, and he is so powerful that, except for the flower growers, other countries have been affected and ruled. In order to fight against aliens, he has established a defense line outside the solar system. He is quite unfriendly (can be said to be hostile) with pig's feet. The pace of this plot is too fast. Pigfoot wants to say that you are already the king before my little bronze is ready! Then, not many chapters later, the Moon Rabbit appeared, and his IQ and logic began to fall apart, hey! Please, author, please be patient, this is your child, don't be happy with yourself!

I started writing the first word on May 20th, wrote the outline and posted it for the reviewers to read. Then I submitted it for review and was called back for revision and resubmission. It took three times before it finally passed the review on the 22nd and appeared in the Qidian library. When it was voted for by readers for the first time, I was so ecstatic that I couldn't stop thinking about it for a moment. From the original outline to the revised and improved outline when signing the contract, the early assumption that it would take a long time to wander around the earth before the stars have been overturned. Let's talk about the original outline! After the protagonist is resurrected, he makes good use of his abilities to treat illnesses and save people. Then there is a routine slap-in-the-face plot, and he saves a big shot! Wait, wait, wait~ Then people spend thousands of dollars to find a cure, and then start a company. If you go down a list of all the diseases that are currently unconquered in mankind, you can write hundreds of thousands of words. But in fact, I knew from the time I wrote the creation of Kunpeng that my typing speed was not as fast as my brainstorming speed. So I overturned the original plan of writing hundreds of thousands of words, and transferred the protagonist from the front to the big boss behind the scenes. After Kunpeng passed away, he hiccupped for the first time, and then continued to hiccup until he finally became a giant biological battleship escorting human beings in space. This is Kunpeng's tragic life, (it's already a bit of a spoiler, will anyone hit me?) Okay, I just want to say that in the current outline, among the stars is the stage where the protagonist should play. There is also the villain Lin Hui. As long as my writing skills can be improved, he will definitely surprise everyone. But if my writing skills are still as bad as this, I may not be able to write with that flavor. Don't hit me then. To sum it up, I am not good at writing, because I am just a newbie, so I carefully create each chapter, so the progress seems to be very fast and I have nothing to do, but fortunately, my imagination is enough to keep up with the progress of the protagonist, and I have even imagined the unexpected ending of the finale. Let me tell you quietly, the most tiring thing for me every day is not coding or lack of inspiration, but reading what I have written over and over again, looking for typos~~~ I am finally convinced by my input method. If any readers see typos or grammatical errors, please let me know.

The ideas and imagination are great, but it is too complicated, especially the section about electronic life and aliens, which is too much and makes it uncomfortable to watch. It's extremely tedious and a little off topic, right? And with the protagonist's ability to deal with aliens, why would he use alien methods? It's a bit like the garbage plot of American blockbusters. He has his own technology and is fully capable of analyzing its technology.

Well, I'm a little sorry that I stopped updating for so long, but I don't know how to be a eunuch. After all, this is the first story written in a book in my life. No matter how imperfect it is, I still have to tell it. It's just that the reality is a bit unsatisfactory. Some time ago, my father was diagnosed with a malignant tumor in the nasopharynx, and he has been undergoing chemotherapy and radiotherapy. The whole family kept this secret from his father, and even went to the extent of trying to get insurance himself, to the point where he had to apply for subsistence allowance. I'm really sorry to have been depressed for so long and to have been interrupted for such a long time, but if I no longer dare to continue my fantasy and just admit that I have been defeated by reality, then I will have failed too much in this life. I will definitely keep writing, and I won't be too careful about the number of words. After all, it's just a small talk. No matter how many words you write, it won't cost you much. I just write down my fantasies and my beautiful wishes for the future. It may be a story in a dream, or it may be a nonsensical exclamation, but the dream may wake up, but it will not disappear. The story will continue, and it will definitely give everyone who happens to read this story a moment of wonder that temporarily forgets reality. Thank you to those lovely people who have never given up on this story even though I have given up, forever555, Huan Ziyu, Lingxin Baihe, BBQ... And there are many cuties who have always been here but insist on seeing this place. In fact, this world is really beautiful, isn't it?

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel about clones 😚 If the electric eels didn't have eunuchs back then 😭

The protagonist is so kind that I feel a little sick

In fact, the creativity is not bad. The first chapter at the beginning has the feeling of a movie, but it starts to become more toxic later on. The meaningless daily descriptions and the inexplicable supporting actress make the layout of this book suddenly drop a lot.

The more I read, the more I can't stand it. The author has brought too much personal information. From an objective fact, Lin Hui is saving mankind. Without him, the earth would have been occupied or turned into a battlefield or destroyed.